（新教材）2021年高中英语人教版选择性必修第三册课件：Unit 2 Section Ⅳ　Writing-如何写改掉不健康生活习惯的文章 .ppt

1、Section Writing 如何写改掉不健康生活习惯的文章如何写改掉不健康生活习惯的文章 随着科技的发展和生活水平的提高，很多人养成了不健康 的生活习惯，如很多人经常熬夜，不吃早饭，不参加体育锻 炼，吃过多的高热量食物等等，这些都是非常不健康的生活习 惯。长期如此，身心健康会受到极大影响。 本单元的写作是有关摒弃不良的生活方式、培养良好的生 活习惯的，对应了普通高中英语课程标准(2017年版2020年 修订)中的“人与自我”这一主题，要求考生能够就“健康的生 活方式、积极的生活态度”表达自己的想法。 写作思路如下： 1首段：描述不健康的生活习惯(即提出问题)； 2主体段：改掉不健康的生活习

2、惯的措施(即采取行动)； 常用表达 (1)It can be noticed that there are some unhealthy living habits among. . . (2)Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks. (3)All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health. (4)What worries me most is that these habits may have much impact on

3、my academic performance. (5)I think healthy living habits are very important to us. (6)In current society, people have known the importance of keeping healthy lifestyles. (7)Good rest, less meat and fish, more vegetables and enough exercise are good for health. (8)To keep fit, we should have various

4、 healthy diets, including. . . (9)Having realized the importance of taking exercise, we should work out regularly. (10)I am used to walking to school if weather permits. (11)As far as Im concerned, we should develop a healthy eating habit of. . . (12)There is no doubt that a balanced diet is benefic

5、ial to our health. (13)We should reject junk food, such as instant noodles and hamburgers. (14)Doctors advise us teenagers to sleep for at least 8 hours each day. (15)Therefore its very important for us to form healthy eating habits. (16)Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better. (1

6、7)People come to realize that good health is the most valuable thing a person can have. 精品展示 假定你是李华，你校英语校报编辑正在就“Healthy lifestyle”这一主题面向全体学生征稿。请你根据以下内容给编 辑写一封信。 写作要点： 1.指出不良习惯：熬夜玩手机； 2.作出决定； 3.提出具体行动； 4.表达预期结果。 注意： 1要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear editor， _ _ _ _ _ Best wishes. Yo

7、urs， Li Hua 审题谋篇 第一步：明确要求 该写作为书信类应用文。时态以一般现在时为主。 第二步：明确书信格式 首先是信头的称呼(文中已给出)，主要内容写在主体段即 第二段，最后是信尾客套语(文中已给出)。 第三步：提炼要点 1_ 没有精力做某事 2_ 熬夜 3_ 下决心做某事 4_ 洗热水澡 5_ 像以前一样 have no energy to do sth. stay up make up ones mind to do take a warm bath as before 第四步：句式升级 1最近我上课特别困，没有精力做事情，这已经影响到了 我的健康和学习。 一般表达：Recen

8、tly I have been very sleepy in class and have had no energy to do anything. It has greatly affected my health and study. 高级表达：_ Recently I have been very sleepy in class and have had no energy to do anything, which has greatly affected my health and study. 2我要读些放松的书并且在睡前洗个热水澡，这可以帮我 睡个好觉。 一般表达：I will

9、 read some relaxing books and take a warm bath before going to bed, and this may help me get a sound sleep. 高级表达：_ I will read some relaxing books and take a warm bath before going to bed, which may help me get a sound sleep. 连句成篇 Dear editor， _ _ _ _ _ _ Best wishes. Yours， Li Hua Dear editor， Im t

10、roubled by a serious problem. Recently I have been very sleepy in class and have had no energy to do anything, which has greatly affected my health and study. After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always relaxed by staying up playing phone games. As a result, I lacked energy and passio

11、n in the daytime. But now I have made up my mind to change this situation. I will arrange the time of using mobile phone reasonably. Instead, I will read some relaxing books and take a warm bath before going to bed, which may help me get a sound sleep. I believe I will become energetic again and enjoy my study and life as before. Best wishes. Yours， Li Hua