2020新人教版英语必修1-unit 4-Reading for Writing-Write a summary.pptx

1、Write a summary Chelsea Chen CONTENTS 目录 概要写作评分标准及 得分要点 01 概要写作得分技巧 02 评分标准 档次 内容 语言 A 5 5 B 4 4 C 3 3 D 2 2 E 1 1 F 0 0 评分标准 1. 本题总分为10分, 其中内容5分, 语言5分。 2. 评分时应注意的主要方面: 内容要点、信息 呈现的连贯性和准确性。 3. 词数超过60，酌情扣分。 内容部分 A. 能准确、全面地概括文章主旨大意, 并 涵盖主要信息。 语言部分 A. 能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。 评分标准 CONTENTS 目录 概要写作评分标准及得分要点 01 概

2、要写作得分技巧 02 Concise ! 1 Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the authors purpose. Divide the passage & summarize the main idea of each part. Determine & Divide 3 Add some transitional words to make the passage smooth. Check the summary.(tense, spell, etc.) Add & Check 2 Hig

3、hlight the key information. Rewrite the same meaning .(using your own words, phrases or structures) Highlight & Rewrite Summary Steps 03 01 02 衔接 （照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接 ） 逻辑 同义转换: 近义词、同义词等替换 句子重构: 调整词类、时态、语态等 语言 提炼,理清句子间的逻辑关系，找出主要点和次要 点（删除细节、删除具体例子、避免重复） 整合 要点 Skills of Summary Writing to connect the sam

4、e aspects meanwhile also along with besides furthermore additionally to show cause and effect to conclude or summarize to show adversative relation(转折关系转折关系) but Connecting words/phrases for the following reasons because as a result so thus hence therefore result in lead to consequently in conclusio

5、n to sum up in brief/short in a word not onlybut also for one thing, for another moreover, as well (as) although/ though/ even though/ if in contrast whereas nevertheless in spite of regardless of What disaster is it? What is a tsunami? A tsunami is a series of waves caused by earthquakes or underse

6、a volcanic eruptions. Look and predict Timeliness Concise language . What is the format of the news report? Name of the newspaper Headline Byline Read the news report released the day after a tsunami. Read the news report released the day after a tsunami. event Cause time effect place Growing number

7、 Rescue work Follow the steps below to write a summary for the text on page 50. 1. Read the text and write a list of the main details. Strange things happened in the countryside before the earthquake. An earthquake hit _ China on 28 July 1976. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Tangshan The number of people who were kil

8、led or badly injured in the quake was more than 400,000. Nearly everything in the city was destroyed. Soldiers and medical workers cameto help the people who had had greatloss and to try and find survivors. A new Tangshan was built. 2. Write down the main idea of each paragraph based on the details

9、above. Para1: Strange things happened in the countryside of Hebei, China. Para2: An earthquake hit Tangshan, and many people were killed or badly injured. Para3: The city was greatly affected and nearly destroyed. Para4: The rescue work began soon. Para5: Tangshan began to revive itself and get back

10、 up on its feet again. 3. Organise the ideas and draft your summary. Pay attention to the following: A summary should be around one third the length of the original text. Write down the key supporting points for the topic. Do not include unimportant details or examples. 4. Exchange drafts. Use the c

11、hecklist to give feedback on your partners draft. 5. Get your draft back and revise it. Does the summary give you a clear idea of what the text is about? Does the summary include only the most important information of the text? Is the summary the proper length? Are there any spelling or punctuation

12、errors? Does the writer use correct tenses? Put up your summary in the classroom or read it to the class. Self- assessment content Does it cover all the points? structure Are there any connecting words/phrases? Is the structure coherent? language Are the points expressed in your own words? Is the la

13、nguage accurate and rich? Try to develop your first draft and make a self-assessment according to the following criteria. Sample Writing For several days, strange things occurred in the countryside of northeastern Hebei. Then, on 28 July 1976, an earthquake hit Tangshan city. The city was greatly af

14、fected and nearly destroyed. Many people were killed or injured. The rescue work began soon after the quakes. Soldiers and medical workers arrived to find survivors and help the people who had lost everything. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the people, a new Tangshan was built. Thank you!