Unit 5 表达·作文巧升格 同步教材讲解 （新教材）外研版（2020新版）英语必修第三册.doc

1、1/3 冒险经历 本单元的写作是描述一次冒险经历属于记叙文文体。 在文章里要写出自己做 了什么，自己看见了什么，以及自己的感受。 基本框架 1开头(beginning)交代经历发生的时间地点 2主体(body)介绍经历的过程 3结尾(ending)写出经历的结果以及你自己的观点 常用词块 1save the earth 拯救地球 2take the time machine 乘坐时光机 3fly past the stars 飞过星球 4be transformed into an insect 变形成了昆虫 5be eaten by a monster 被怪物吃掉 常用语句 精彩开头 1Wh

2、en it comes to the adventure story，the Magic schoolbus came into my mind first. 一说到冒险故事，我首先想到的就是神奇校车 。 2Speaking of the adventure，I experienced one three years ago. 说起冒险，我三年前经历了一次。 3If you want to experience the travel in space, lets read the following story together. 如果你想感受太空旅行，我们一起来读读下面的故事吧。 丰满主体

3、1We flew through the tunnel and got into the time machine. 我们飞跃隧道，进入了时光机器。 2I was swimming in the sea when a big shark appeared several meters away 2/3 from me. 我正在海里游泳，突然一条大鲨鱼出现在离我几米远的地方。 3They jumped into the tree hole and then shrank into a little man of the same size as a mouse. 他们跳入树洞，然后缩成了和一只老

4、鼠大小的小人儿。 余味结尾 1The little girl came to herself and found she was still sleeping under the tree. 小姑娘苏醒过来，发现自己依然睡在树底下。 2Till now I still feel frightened at the thought of that adventure. 直到现在，一想起那次冒险我依然感到恐惧。 3The hero in the movie saved the people in trouble and taught me to be kind and helpful to peo

5、ple around me. 电影中的男主角拯救了苦难中的人们，教会我要对周围的人善良，要乐于帮 助他们。 你是新华中学的李华，今年暑假和父母去了夏威夷。期间经历了人生第一次 潜水探险。请以日记的形式描述自己的这一次冒险经历，并写出从中自己的所思 所想所获。 1潜水地点是普普克阿海滩公园(Pupukea Beach Park)； 2我刚开始听说这里有时会出现鲨鱼，有点担心，但因为它们一般不会主 动攻击人类，我尝试下水； 3这里是一个海洋生物保护区，海里的鱼类非常丰富，还有海龟； 4因为海里全是礁石，需要注意安全； 5建议想要去的朋友最好选择每年的夏季，海面平静且海浪很小的最佳浮 潜季节。 要求

6、：1.词数：80 左右； 2内容积极向上，可适当增删细节以使行文流畅。 _ _ _ 3/3 _ _ 参考范文 Today the adventure story is my first diving experience.In the early morning my parents and I went to Pupukea Beach by bus and then to an island by boat. Hearing the basic dos and donts including the information of sharks，I dare not to jump into

7、 the sea.After the coachs explanation I jumped in with the guide.At first I didnt see any fish but some corals and seaweeds.Soon I found groups of fishes of all kinds and the turtles.What shocked me most was that I should see some sharks running after the fish groups with my own eyes. Diving experience is impressive and unforgettable.We should be kind to the sea creatures and live in harmony with them.