2021年新课标（老高考）英语复习练习课件：专题十五　书面表达.pptx

1、A A组组 统一命题统一命题课标卷题组课标卷题组 Writing 1(2020课标全国) 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包 括: 1.人物简介; 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文要求考生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题写一篇英语短文。写作时要围绕“身边”“值 得尊敬和爱戴”确定合理的写作对象,避免偏离主题。 2.行文时主要采用第三人称和第一

2、人称,时态以一般现在时为主,兼顾其他时态的合理运用。 3.文章可采用“三段式”写作模式:第一段点明写作对象并给出人物简介;第二段详写写作对象值 得尊敬和爱戴的原因;第三段合理结尾。 One possible version: The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. As for me, my father is the one I respect. He is a doctor and always takes a positive attitude towards life. There are va

3、rious reasons why I admire him. As a doctor, he is devoted to his job, saying “Nothing is more important than saving a life, however difficult it is.” In March, he volunteered to go to Wuhan, determined to help those suffering from COVID-19 despite the risk of being infected, which made me promote t

4、he understanding of bravery and responsibility. As a father, not only does he care about my life, but also inspires me to set a high aim and strive for it. But for his encouragement, I couldnt have made so much progress. Such is my father, a great man who sets a good example for me and I love him a

5、great deal. 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 take a positive attitude towards对采取积极的态度 promote the understanding of 促进对的理解 2.出彩结构 As a father, not only does he care about my life, but also inspires me to set a high aim and strive for it.(not only.but also.连接并列谓语,not only置于句首,引起部分倒装) Writing 2(2020课标全国) 上周末,你和同学参加了一次采

6、摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容 包括: 1.农场情况; 2.采摘过程; 3.个人感受。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.题目已为你写好。 题目:My Weekend 答案答案 One possible version: My Weekend I went on a gathering with my classmates last weekend, which definitely was an enjoyable experience. We arrived at the farm that enjoys a good reputation for its orga

7、nic products early in the morning. We walked through the bushes and looked for fruits and vegetables with the guidance of the workers. I picked them happily with my friends. In the end, all of us not only gained various fresh and tasty fruits, but also had a knowledge of green food. Theres no denyin

8、g that this was a fantastic experience and I do hope to go there once again. 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 definitely adv.确切地;确实 reputation n.名誉 organic adj.有机的 guidance n.指 导;引导 tasty adj.美味的 theres no denying. 无可否认 2.出彩结构 I went on a gathering with my classmates last weekend, which definitely was an en- joyable

9、 experience.(which引导非限制性定语从句) We arrived at the farm that enjoys a good reputation for its organic products.(that引导定语从句) Writing 3(2020课标全国) 假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮 忙指导。邮件内容包括: 1.剧情简介; 2.指导内容; 3.商定时间地点。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.结束语已为你写好。 Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely

10、Li Hua, 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文为求助信,要注意书信格式以及求助的口吻。 2.以第一人称以及一般现在时和现在完成时为主,但介绍短剧情节时可使用过去时态。 3.首段开门见山,介绍写信的目的;第二段介绍短剧情节、所求助的问题;第三段约定见面时间、 地点,并表达感激之情。 One possible version: Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going these days? I am Li Hua. I, together with my classmates, have adapted a short play from the text

11、The Necklace, but we meet with some trouble. Now, I am writing to ask you to give us some guidance. As we all know, in the story Mathilde Loisel dreamed of a wealthy lifestyle but her vain obsession ended up with her lifetime of misery and despair, ruining her life. However, we find it extremely har

12、d to use proper tone to speak the lines, which has annoyed us for quite a long time. Hopefully you would be so kind as to give us some help on this problem. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 on Sunday morning in the school theatre. We would ap- preciate it if you could do us a favor. Look

13、ing forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 adapt.from.由改编 obsession n.痴迷 end up with.以告终 misery n.悲惨,痛苦 despair n.绝望 ruin v.毁掉 convenient adj.方便的 2.出彩结构 However, we find it extremely hard to use proper tone to speak the lines, which has an- noyed us for quite a long time.(it为

14、形式宾语,to use.为真正的宾语,which引导非限制性定语从句) Writing 4(2019课标全国) 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包 括: 1.比赛信息; 2.赛前准备; 3.表达期待。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文是应用文。主要内容是告知队友比赛信息。 2.文章的主体时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主。 3.文章可以分为三段。第一段是比赛信息;第二段是赛前准备;第三段表达期待。 One possible version: Dear Chris, I

15、 am very pleased to inform you that we will have a friendly match with the volleyball team of Guang- ming Middle School next Monday. It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch. In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we

16、need to have enough training. So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6 pm. I would appre- ciate it much if you could participate in it on time. This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of friendship first. Of course, we ar

17、e looking forward to winning the game. I am sure we can realize it with our effort together. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 in order to为了 appreciate v.感激 keep in mind记住 2.出彩结构 It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch. (where引导非限制性定语从句)

18、So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6 pm. (本句使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语) Writing 5(2019课标全国) 假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括: 1.时间; 2.活动安排; 3.欢迎他表演节目。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文是应用文中的邀请信,邀请你的英国朋友Allen来参加学校举办的音乐节。主体时态为一般 现在时

19、和一般将来时。 2.写作要点:活动时间;活动安排;欢迎 Allen参加音乐节并表演节目。 3.分段内容:第一段介绍写作背景,并发出邀请。第二段介绍学校音乐节的时间、安排和相关细 节,并适当拓展。第三段欢迎Allen参加音乐节并表演节目。 One possible version: Dear Allen, Long time no see! I am glad to invite you to a music festival, which will take place in our schoolyard. It is well-known that more attention has be

20、en paid to the inquiry of traditional culture in high schools lately. Accordingly, a music festival will be scheduled, which will motivate more adolescents to gain all-around development. Furthermore, it is suggested that the participants be seated in the playground at 8 a.m. next Saturday, when the

21、 opening ceremony will be conducted. What a thrilling opportunity! Is it a good idea for you to register to show your talent? Waiting for your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 take place 举行 inquiry n.探究 show ones talent 展示某人的才艺 2.出彩结构 I am glad to invite you to a music festival, which will

22、 take place in our schoolyard. (be glad to do sth.; which引导非限制性定语从句) Accordingly, a music festival will be scheduled,which will motivate more adolescents to gain all- around development. (which引导非限制性定语从句) Writing 6(2018课标全国) 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你 回复邮件,内容包括: 1.到达时间; 2.合适的礼物; 3.餐

23、桌礼仪。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为一般现在时。 2.文章要点:到达时间;合适的礼物;餐桌礼仪。 One possible version: Dear Terry, I am delighted when receiving your letter, asking what customs you should pay attention to when visit- ing a Chinese friend. Here are my tips for you. First

24、of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness. Additionally, to be respectful, you might as well bring an appropriate gift, like some fruits. Most importantly, its vital that you should

25、mind your table manners. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to your own custom. In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China. I do hope you will have great fun at your friends home. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 punctually adv.准时地 be of great signi

26、ficance 很重要 appropriate adj.合适的 2.出彩结构 First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time,which is of great significance to show your politeness.(that引导宾语从句;which引 导非限制性定语从句) Writing 7(2018课标全国) 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Tog

27、ether,内容包括: 1.短片内容:学校的发展; 2.放映时间、地点; 3.欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案答案 写作提示 本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书面通知。可采用三段三步写作法写作。 第一步 审题立意,布局谋篇“启”:审题确定主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题:在 学校宣传栏“英语天地”发布邀请大家观看短片的书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态:以第 一、二人称为主要人称,以一般现在时或一般将来时为主体时态。 第二步 确定、提炼和理顺要点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡巧“承”妙“转”,即注意段 落之间、句子之间的衔接与过

28、渡。结合要点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容学校 的发展;第二段:说明放映的时间和地点;第三段:表达愿望希望大家对短片提意见。 第三步 紧扣主题,遣词造句“合”:照应开头和主题的完美的结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧扣 主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误,避免重复;遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句式的使 用。 One possible version: Notice Dear schoolmates, It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that well invite you to see an E

29、nglish short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school. We have arranged that the short film will be on show from 16:00 to 17:00 at our school theater tomor- row. Dont miss the chance of taking part in this collective activity. I do hope you can give us some valuable s

30、uggestions about the short film. Please give your feedback in time and contact us at your convenience. Students Union 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 on behalf of代表 take part in参加;参与 feedback n. 反馈 at ones convenience在 某人方便的时候 2.出彩结构 It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that well invite y

31、ou to see an English short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school.(that引 导宾语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句) Writing 8(2018课标全国) 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括: 1.学校的体育场馆; 2.主要的运动项目; 3.你喜欢的项目。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文为书信形式的说明文;以第一人称的口吻介绍学校的体育

32、场馆和主要的运动项目;时态以一 般现在时为主。 2.可采用三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目的;第二段:具体介绍试题给出的三个要点,其 中第二个要点可采取列举的方式,第三个要点除了写自己喜欢的体育运动,还要阐述喜欢这项体育 运动的原因;第三段:总结并发出邀请。 One possible version: Dear Peter, I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exer- cise in our school and the fo

33、llowing information may give you a rough sketch. To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong and football, as well as running competitio

34、ns enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxi- cated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life. All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 exceedingly adv.非常,极其 give sb. a rough sketc

35、h向某人做简单的陈述 enjoy great popularity受到了热烈欢迎 2.出彩结构 Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong and football, as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.(with的复合结构 作状语,of which引导定语从句) Writing 9(2017课标全国) 假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。

36、请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。 内容包括: 1.时间和地点; 2.内容:学习唐诗; 3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文为电子邮件,属于书信类。人称为第一人称,写作时态以一般将来时为主体时态。 2.内容要点:上课的时间和地点;上课的内容:学习唐诗;课前要求:简要了解唐朝的历史。 One possible version: Dear Leslie, I am writing to inform you of our course schedule of our next class, which i

37、s about poetry of the Tang Dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building 6. In order to learn it better, you need to do the following things before the next class. At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely signif- icant role in

38、 our literature. You can find some original poems of famous poets, such as Li Bai and Du Fu. Besides, knowing the history of the Tang Dynasty will be of great benefit for you to understand the background of the poems. You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our ne

39、xt class and your re-ply. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 extremely adv.极其 play a role in在中起作用 2.出彩结构 At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely significant role in our literature.(which引导非限制性定语从句) Writing 10(2017课标全国) 假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(pape

40、r-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括: 1.展览时间、地点; 2.展览内容。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将来时 为主体时态。 2.文章要点: 展览时间、地点; 展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。 One possible version: Dear Henry, Im Li Hua, one of your students. Im writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting

41、exhibition. Paper- cutting is one of Chinese traditions and Im sure you will like it. The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists will per- form on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be exh

42、ibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. Im sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you. Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 exhibition n.展览 unforgettable adj.难忘的 2.出彩结构 If you like, you can also join in.(if引导条件状语从句)

43、 Writing 11(2017课标全国) 假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件 邀请他加入,内容包括: 1.球队活动; 2.报名方式及截止日期。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案答案 写作提示 1.本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主。 2.写作要点:导入话题:鉴于Eric对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队员的消息; 介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;告知Eric报名方式,提醒他务必在截止日期 前完成报名。 One possible vers

44、ion: Dear Eric, Im writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. I have been told that our school team is recruiti ng new members. Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis, I wonder if youd like to join. Team members need to receive training after school every day and are ofte

45、n offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions, which benefit me most. What do you think of it? If you are interested in it, you can visit the school website to sign up. The closing date is 15th June. I hope to meet you in the school team. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 recruit v.吸收;招募 be keen on酷爱,对着迷 2.出彩结构 Knowing that you are.I wonder if.(现在分词短语中that引导宾语从句;wonder后的if 引导宾语从句