读后续写--个人成长： 自负之殇成长之始--高考英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

1、读后续写-个人成长： 自负之殇，成长之始读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Having taken part in the interschool storytelling championship for the past two years, I was a shining star of my school. When it came to choosing the right candidate to participate in such competitions, I was always the first choice. Natu

2、rally, I was once again selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year.Upon hearing the fact that I was chosen again, my classmates and friends acknowledged that I would undoubtedly emerge as the champion again. Consequently, I became conceited (自负的). I was so proud that I negl

3、ected the importance of practicing for the contest.A week before the contest, my teacher Ms. Sara asked, “Selena, would you like to stand in front of the class to rehearse for the contest?” She had tutored me in the past two competitions and knew how important practice was. “Just imagine you are on

4、the stage in the presence of the audience,” she added. “Im sorry, Ms. Sara,” I replied. “I have a bit of a sore throat.” This was usually the lie I would tell whenever my teacher requested me to practice in front of the class. I always found excuses to avoid doing it because I believed that I was th

5、e best and therefore the practice was unnecessary. On one occasion, I even told Ms. Sara not to worry too much as I was well prepared for the contest. In fact, I did everything but practice my script. I only managed to glance briefly through the story the day before the contest. As the best storytel

6、ler among the students of the local secondary schools. I was too vain to practice and expected everything to be fine.The contest was being held in the local community hall. On the day of the contest, the hall was packed. My school teachers and principal were there along with many of my classmates an

7、d schoolmates. I was the eighth contestant out of twenty in total. Those who spoke before me did extremely well. On seeing their fascinating and outstanding performance, I began to lose confidence in myself. My palms sweated heavily and I started to feel nervous.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

8、Soon, it was my turn to talk._.Finallytheresults were announced after the contest._一、主旨大意这个故事围绕着一个自负的学生展开，她是一位出色的故事讲述者。在再次被选中参加比赛后，她变得过度骄傲，忽视了练习。随着比赛的临近，当她看到其他人的精彩表现时，她开始意识到自己的错误，然后不得不面对后果。二、伏笔1.主角尽管是以前的冠军，却拒绝练习，这为失败埋下了伏笔。2.为逃避练习而说谎预示着即将到来的比赛会有麻烦。3.在她之前的参赛者的出色表现暗示了当轮到她时可能会发生什么。三、情节发展1.主角被选中代表学校，变得自负

9、。2.她拒绝练习并找借口。3.在比赛当天，她看到其他人的精彩表演后失去了信心。4.尽管很紧张，她还是得进行表演。5.比赛结果公布。四、情绪变化1.起初，主角在被选中后感到骄傲和自负。2.随着比赛临近，当她看到其他人的表演时，她变得紧张并失去信心。五、主题句1.Pride goes before a fall.（骄兵必败。）2.Practice makes perfect.（熟能生巧。）3.Confidence should be based on preparation.（自信应该建立在准备的基础上。）4.Learn from mistakes to grow.（从错误中学习以成长。）5.Hu

10、mility is the key to success.（谦逊是成功的关键。）六、范文范文一Soon, it was my turn to talk.My heart was pounding so hard that I thought it would burst out of my chest. I took a deep breath and tried to calm myself. As I began to speak, my voice was shaky and I could feel the nervousness in every word. But I forced

11、 myself to continue, hoping that I could somehow salvage the situation. However, my lack of practice was evident. I stumbled over my words, forgot important parts of the story, and even made some mistakes in my pronunciation. By the time I finished, I knew that I had performed poorly.Finally the res

12、ults were announced after the contest.As expected, I didnt win. In fact, I didnt even place in the top three. I was devastated. I had let myself down, my teacher down, and my school down. I realized that my arrogance had cost me dearly. Looking back, I should have listened to Ms. Sara and practiced

13、more. I learned a hard lesson that day humility and hard work are essential for success.生词总结：1.pound：（心脏等）剧烈跳动2.salvage：挽救，挽回3.stumble：结结巴巴地说话4.pronunciation：发音5.devastated：极度震惊的，极度不安的高级句式总结：1.My heart was pounding so hard that I thought it would burst out of my chest.（sothat 句型，表示 “如此 以至于”）2.As I b

14、egan to speak, my voice was shaky and I could feel the nervousness in every word.（as 引导时间状语从句）3.However, my lack of practice was evident.（lack of 表示 “缺乏”）4.By the time I finished, I knew that I had performed poorly.（by the time 引导时间状语从句）5.Looking back, I should have listened to Ms. Sara and practice

15、d more.（should have done 表示 “本应该做某事而实际上没有做”）范文二Soon, it was my turn to talk.I stepped onto the stage, feeling a wave of panic wash over me. My hands were clammy and my knees were weak. As I opened my mouth to start telling the story, I could hear the tremor in my voice. I tried to focus and remember

16、 the story, but my mind kept going blank. I struggled to get through the performance, making several mistakes along the way. When I finally finished, I felt a sense of relief mixed with disappointment.Finally the results were announced after the contest.I anxiously awaited the announcement, hoping f

17、or a miracle. But when my name was not called for any of the top prizes, I felt a sinking feeling in my stomach. I had failed miserably. I realized that my complacency had been my downfall. From now on, I would never take anything for granted again. I would work hard and be humble, knowing that succ

18、ess only comes through dedication and preparation.生词总结：1.clammy：湿冷的2.tremor：颤抖3.miserably：悲惨地placency：自满，自得5.downfall：垮台，失败高级句式总结：1.I stepped onto the stage, feeling a wave of panic wash over me.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）2.My hands were clammy and my knees were weak.（并列句，描述紧张的状态）3.As I opened my mouth to start telling the story, I could hear the tremor in my voice.（as 引导时间状语从句）4.I tried to focus and remember the story, but my mind kept going blank.（but 连接并列句，表示转折）5.I had failed miserably.（副词 miserably 修饰动词 failed，强调失败的程度）