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2023读后续写CONTENT四个步四个步骤骤三大原三大原则则得分技巧得分技巧写作写作过过程程三大原则三大原则写作指导写作指导01 01 原文一致原则原文一致原则内容要内容要前后衔接，上下连贯前后衔接，上下连贯02 02 正能量原则正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。03 03 曲折性原则曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。最终能解决。四个步骤四个步骤u读懂大意，理清脉络读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。u增加细节，开始写作增加细节，开始写作根据“所见/遇所想，所为所感”等构思具体细节。u细读首句，构思框架细读首句，构思框架仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。u修改润色，整洁誊写修改润色，整洁誊写 思考再三，把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。写作过程读懂大意，读懂大意，理清脉络理清脉络 主要是根据记叙文的六要素弄清文章大意，特别要弄清故事的人人物物，时时态态(通常是一般过去时)，事事件件(故事的起因和经过)，语语言言特特色色(以便在续写时语言特色前后一致，保持不变不变)，等等。人物时态和事件，人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变语言特色不要变u步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a total stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a crowded mall.I personally have always hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place or when I am rushing around.Yesterday had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where my only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger.I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage.After the purchase in one of the large.fancy,expensive shops,I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting n the parking lot and my phone was dead.u步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。I then requested the shop assistant who had just sold me the luggage,which was not cheap at all,if she could help me telephone my driver.She replied,still all smiles,“Im sorry,Sir,but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.As I was wondering what kind of policy that was,I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me.Remembering my wifes interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when youre in trouble,I thought I might have a chance But before I could say a word,he walked past me.It turned out he simply didnt see me.u步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。I waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me Disappointed and tired,I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front.I stood there with people rushing by,looking at their faces to see if there was a sign of kindness on their face.I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager.Paragraph 1:At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids.Paragraph 2:Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.charactersuIuthe shop assistantua nice-looking teenage boyua man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeansua young motheru步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a total stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a crowded mall.I personally have always hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place or when I am rushing around.Yesterday had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where my only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger.Paragraph 1:At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids.Paragraph 2:Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.simple past tense 时态时态(通常是一般过去时)u步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a total stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a crowded mall.I personally have always hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place or when I am rushing around.Yesterday had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where my only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger.I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage.After the purchase in one of the large.fancy,expensive shops,I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead.u步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络步骤一：读懂大意，理清脉络 读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。I then requested the shop assistant who had just sold me the luggage,which was not cheap at all,if she could help me telephone my driver.She replied,still all smiles,“Im sorry,Sir,but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.As I was wondering what kind of policy that was,I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me.Remembering my wifes interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when youre in trouble,I thought I might have a chance But before I could say a word,he walked past me.It turned out he simply didnt see me.I waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me.Disappointed and tired,I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front.I stood there with people rushing by,looking at their faces to see if there was a sign of kindness on their face.I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager.uI asked the shop assistant for help,but she turned me down because she couldnt use her phone at work.uI tried to ask a young boy for help,but he walked right past me as if he didnt see me.Characters I,the shop assistant,a teenager boy,a young mother,a manTensesimple past tense EventsuI always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a total stranger for help.uYesterday had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where my only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger.uI was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage.uI picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead.uI asked the shop assistant for help,but she turn me down because she couldnt use her phone at work.uI tried to ask a young boy for help,but he walked right past me as if he didnt see me.uI waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me.写作过程细细读读首首句句，构思框架构思框架两段首句定一框两段首句定一框 由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。二框二首正能量二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。u步骤二：细读首句，构思框架步骤二：细读首句，构思框架仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。两段首句定一框两段首句定一框 由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。二框二首正能量二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。两段首句定一框两段首句定一框 Paragraph 1:At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids.u可知年轻的妈妈并不会帮助作者，下段才会出现转机。u可知，作者此时寄希望于年轻母亲来帮助自己。Paragraph 2:Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.Paragraph 1:本段依然是写作者在商场中也没有得到依然是写作者在商场中也没有得到这个年轻的母亲的帮助这个年轻的母亲的帮助。注意结尾要与下段语义衔接。u步骤二：细读首句，构思框架步骤二：细读首句，构思框架仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。两段首句定一框两段首句定一框 由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。二框二首正能量二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。二框二首正能量二框二首正能量Paragraph 2:Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.由续写的第二段首句“Finally”可知，没有接受到任何人的帮助的作者应该会得到这个普通的男人的帮助。u步骤二：细读首句，构思框架步骤二：细读首句，构思框架仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。二框二首正能量二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。二框二首正能量二框二首正能量Paragraph 2:Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.由正能量结尾可知，作者没有想到的是最后帮助自己的却是一个普通的男人进而总结全文中心思想“真正的善良不能通过外貌衡定真正的善良不能通过外貌衡定”As I was wondering what kind of policy that was,I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me.Remembering my wifes interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when youre in trouble,I thought I might have a chance But before I could say a word,he walked past me.It turned out he simply didnt see me.写作过程增增加加细细节节，开始写作开始写作 在在已已定定框框架架范范围围内内，依依据据情情节节发发展展和和生生活活常常识识，推推断断故故事事中中人人物物所所见见、所所闻闻、所所思思、所所说说、所所做做等等给给每每段增加几个段增加几个具体细节具体细节。u步骤三：增加细节，开始写作步骤三：增加细节，开始写作 u根据“所见/遇所想，所为所感”等构思具体细节。Paragraph 1“At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids.”Paragraph 2“Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.”Paragraph 1从从所所给给材材料料结结尾尾和和本本段段首首句句可可知知，作作者者也也不不会会受受到到年年轻轻妈妈妈妈的的帮帮助助;从从下下段段首首句句Finally a man seemed to notice me.才才会会出出现现转转机机，所所以以本本段段应应是是作作者者接接着着被被拒拒绝绝帮帮助助。因因此此，本本段可以这样构思段可以这样构思:所遇所遇:作者遇事，无人相助作者遇事，无人相助所想所想:遇见母亲，慈眉善目遇见母亲，慈眉善目 满怀期待，寻求帮助满怀期待，寻求帮助上前询问，拒绝帮助上前询问，拒绝帮助待在原地，心情沉重待在原地，心情沉重u步骤三：增加细节，开始写作步骤三：增加细节，开始写作 u根据“所见/遇所想，所为所感”等构思具体细节。Paragraph 1“At that point I saw a young mother with her two kids.”Paragraph 2“Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me.”Paragraph 2 从从本本段段首首句句可可知知，会会出出现现转转机机。上上段段末末作作者者希希望望有有人人相相助助，那那么么“最最后后”应应是是有有人人帮帮助助了了。从从正正能能量量原原则则可可知知，作作者者受受到到好好心心人人的的帮帮助助。因因此此，可以这样构思可以这样构思:微笑致意，继续求助微笑致意，继续求助询问帮助，毫不犹豫询问帮助，毫不犹豫感动不已，接受帮助感动不已，接受帮助学做好人，传递善良学做好人，传递善良写作过程读懂大意，读懂大意，理清脉络理清脉络 主要是根据记叙文的六要素弄清文章大意，特别要弄清故事的人人物物，时时态态(通常是一般过去时)，事事件件(故事的起因和经过)，语语言言特特色色(以便在续写时语言特色前后一致，保持不变不变)，等等。人物时态和事件，人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变语言特色不要变 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a total stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a crowded mall.I personally have always hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place or when I am rushing around.Yesterday had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where my only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger.I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage.After the purchase in one of the large,fancy,expensive shops,I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead.I then requested the shop assistant who had just sold me the luggage,which was not cheap at all,if she could help me telephone my driver.She replied,still all smiles,“Im sorry,Sir,but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.定语从句 As I was wondering what kind of policy that was,I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me.Remembering my wifes interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when youre in trouble,I thought I might have a chance.But before I could say a word,he walked past me.It turned out he simply didnt see me.I waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me.Disappointed and tired,I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front.I stood there with people rushing by,looking at their faces to see if there was a sign of kindness on their face.I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager.with复合结构Paragraph 1 I thought that a beautiful woman with charming blue eves must be willing to help me.So,with great expectation,I walked towards her with an appropriate smile on my face,and requested if she could be kind enough to make a phone call for me.However,without a word,she pulled her kids to escape from me,as if scared by a murderer.I stood there,motionless,with a blank face and a sinking heart.Paragraph 2 I squeezed a smile though it failed to mask my exhaustion and disappointment,and requested him the same thing.Unexpectedly,he took out his mobile phone for me without hesitation.Dancing in his eyes was the real kindness that I had been struggling to seek for so long.From that day on,I began helping other strangers in trouble,just like the poor-looking but kind man,with the aim of passing kindness and melting the ice in many peoples hearts.1.与前文语义衔接，前后连贯与前文语义衔接，前后连贯续写中有效地使用了使前后连贯的So,However，Unexpectedly等衔接性词。2.与原文语言风格基本一致与原文语言风格基本一致(1)定语从句 (2)with的复合结构定定语从句从句with的复合的复合结构构u步骤四：修改润色，整洁誊写步骤四：修改润色，整洁誊写 思考再三，把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。审审读读初初稿稿，注注意意语语义义是是否否衔衔接接，前前后后是是否否连连贯贯，事事件件是是否否符符合合逻逻辑辑，语语言言特特色色是是否否与与前前文文一一致致。在在修修改改润润色色之之后后，整整齐齐工工整整地誊写在答卷上。地誊写在答卷上。修修改改润润色色，整洁誊写整洁誊写续写得分技巧得分技巧（1）内内容容上上鼓励大胆想象，有创创新新意识(不离奇，重逻辑)，情节丰丰富富，尽可能合合理理展展开开，并注意前前后后文文呼呼应应，与原原文文融洽度高。融洽度高。（2）写作尽可能传传递递正正能能量量,要提炼有思想性、体现价值观和传递正能量的元素(例如珍爱生命，学会合作，学会感恩等)（3）记叙文语语言言表表达达流畅，避免低级语法错误，注意连连接接词词的正确使用，使上下文连贯;注意句句子子结结构构的多样性和语语言言的丰富性。（4）检查，誊写检查文章的连贯性、逻辑性，规范性。最后誊写要做到字迹工整，清晰美观。字迹工整，清晰美观。