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段落开头语与后续语的衔接。段落开头语与后续语的衔接。后续两段间的衔接；后续两段间的衔接；原文与后续的衔接；原文与后续的衔接；内容多视角、多维度；内容多视角、多维度；语言结构，词汇选用语言结构，词汇选用多样。多样。衔衔接接丰丰富富准准确确情感表达准确；情感表达准确；语言描述准确。语言描述准确。Whatmakesagoodcontinuationwriting?1.1.两两段段首首句定一句定一框框由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。架。2.2.二框二首正二框二首正能能量量第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。定。两句口诀两句口诀三大原则三大原则1.1.原文一致原则原文一致原则内容要内容要前后衔接前后衔接，上下上下连贯连贯 语言表达语言表达风格风格一一致致。2.2.正能量原则正能量原则故事内容一定要故事内容一定要正能量正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定最后一定是言归于好，是言归于好，和睦相处和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。等等。3.3.曲折性原则曲折性原则凡是凡是故事都应有故事都应有跌宕跌宕起伏起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解最终能解决决。Step I 读懂大意，理清脉络读懂大意，理清脉络 1.Readfor1.Readforcharacterscharacters人物人物2.Readfor2.Readforconflict/problemsconflict/problems问题问题3.Readfor3.Readforplotplot情节发展情节发展4.Readfor4.Readforemotionalchangesemotionalchanges情感变化情感变化5.Readfor5.Readforthemetheme主题主题5R5RWho,When,Where,What,Why,How5W+1HWhenWhenWhereWhereWhoWhoInacoldeveninginSeptemberInacoldeveninginSeptemberInViennaInViennaI,TaxidriverGunterI,TaxidriverGunterTimeTimeEventsEventsMoodMoodBeginningBeginningIhurriedlytook_tocatch_dueto_beingdelayed._DevelopmentDevelopment_eventuallygotmetothe_ontime._Climax(Climax(故事高潮故事高潮)Ilacked_andtriedmultiplewaysbutcouldnt_thetaxi,andthebuswasaboutto_._Midpoint(Midpoint(故事中间故事中间)I_backtoGunterandtoldhimthe_news._EndingEndingFourdayslater,whenIwasbackin_,I_Gunteras_._ataxithelastflightGunterstationcashpaydepart/leaveran bad Viennacalled promisedanxiousrelievedhelplesssad_grateful_hopefuljoyfulKnowthethemeofthestoryKnowthethemeofthestory理解故事的主题理解故事的主题WhywouldthewritercallGunterfourdayslater?Whatdoesthewriterintendtotellus?kindness Step II 构思框架构思框架第一步：先把最后一句写好，即：主题句第一步：先把最后一句写好，即：主题句Noactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,willgowasted.无论多小，善行都不会浪费。无论多小，善行都不会浪费。Inprosperityourfriendsknowus.Inadversityweknowourfriends.在顺境中，朋友结识了我们。在逆境中，我们了解了朋友。在顺境中，朋友结识了我们。在逆境中，我们了解了朋友。第二步：再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句第二步：再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句(必须与第必须与第二段给出的首句融为一体）：二段给出的首句融为一体）：Para 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad newsPara 1最后一句：Para 2 第一句：Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised我告诉了他我的名字，我们还交我告诉了他我的名字，我们还交换了电话号码。我上了那最后一班大巴后，向我在换了电话号码。我上了那最后一班大巴后，向我在维也纳的新朋友挥了挥手。维也纳的新朋友挥了挥手。第二步：再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句第二步：再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句(必须与第必须与第二段给出的首句融为一体）：二段给出的首句融为一体）：Para 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad newsPara 2 第一句：Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promisedPara 1最后一句：Itoldhimmynameandweexchangedphonenumbers.IgotonthelastbusandwavedtomynewfriendinVienna.第三步：紧接着写第一段的衔接句第三步：紧接着写第一段的衔接句Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.(继续我们的交互继续我们的交互)令令我我惊惊讶讶的的是是，Gunter笑笑着着安安慰慰我我，让让我我平平静静下下来来。我我担担心心会会错错过过公公共共汽汽车车，带带着着一一丝丝绝绝望望说说：“我我四四天天后后回来。您能借我车费吗？回来。您能借我车费吗？”第三步：紧接着写第一段的衔接句第三步：紧接着写第一段的衔接句Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.(继续我们的交互继续我们的交互)ToTomymy surprise,surprise,GunterGuntercomfortedcomforted meme withwithaabigbigsmile,smile,whichwhichcalmedcalmedmemedown.down.FearingFearingI Imightmightmissmiss thethe bus,bus,I I saidsaid withwith aa tingetinge ofofdesperation,desperation,“Ill“Ill bebe backback inin fourfour days.days.CouldCould youyou possiblypossiblylendmethebusfare?”lendmethebusfare?”第四步：紧接着写第二段的衔接句第四步：紧接着写第二段的衔接句Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.我我们们在在四四天天前前他他送送我我去去的的公公交交车车站站见见了了面面。我我一一看看到到Gunter，就就走走到到他他跟跟前前，给给了了他他一一个个大大大大的的拥拥抱抱。他他高高兴兴又又兴兴奋奋，笑笑着着说说他他不不知知道道我我会会来来。我我告告诉诉他他，多多亏亏了了他的慷慨，一切都很顺利，我把欠他的钱递给了他的慷慨，一切都很顺利，我把欠他的钱递给了Gunter。(二人会面的具体细节二人会面的具体细节)第四步：紧接着写第二段的衔接句第四步：紧接着写第二段的衔接句Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.(二人会面的具体细节二人会面的具体细节)WeWe hadhad aa meetingmeeting atat thethe busbus stationstation wherewhere hehe hadhaddroppeddroppedmemeoffofffourfourdaysdaysearlier.earlier.AsAssoonsoonasasI IsawsawGunter,Gunter,I Iwalkedwalkedoverovertotohimhimandandgavegavehimhimaabigbighug.hug.HappyHappyandandexcited,excited,hehelaughedlaughedandandsaidsaidhehehadhadnonoideaideaIdIdturnturnup.up.I Itoldtoldhimhimthat,that,thanksthankstotohishisgenerosity,generosity,everythingeverythinghadhadgonegoneveryvery smoothly,smoothly,andandI IhandedhandedGunterGunterthethemoneymoneyI Iowedhim.owedhim.Step III:补充细节（补充细节（3大原则）大原则）接下来就是把每段的中间补充完整，记住三大原则：接下来就是把每段的中间补充完整，记住三大原则：1.ActionResponse1.ActionResponse原则原则：某个角色所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其它角色的反应。每段对话1-2句，不一定每个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种response。2.ConflictSolution2.ConflictSolution原则原则：问题最终会找到解决方法3.NegativePositive3.NegativePositive原则原则：写作中一定要体现情感的变化，无论前面是怎样的变化，最终都是积极的。Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.(我我们们的交互的交互)Tomysurprise,Guntercomfortedmewithabigsmile,whichcalmedmedown.FearingImightmissthebus,Isaidwithatingeofdesperation,“Illbebackinfourdays.Couldyoupossiblylendmethebusfare?”在在不不舒舒服服的的停停顿顿之之后后，他他只只是是点点了了点点头头，说说：“没没问问题题！”他他笑笑了了。我我告告诉诉他他我我的的名名字字，我我们们交交换换了了电电话话号号码码。我我上上了了最最后后一一班班公公交交车车，向向我我在在维维也也纳纳的的新新朋朋友友挥挥手手致致意。意。(Gunter的反应的反应)Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.(我我们们的交互的交互)Tomysurprise,Guntercomfortedmewithabigsmile,whichcalmedmedown.FearingImightmissthebus,Isaidwithatingeofdesperation,“Illbebackinfourdays.Couldyoupossiblylendmethebusfare?”Following an uncomfortable pause,he simply nodded,saying,“No problem!”he smiled.I told him my nameandweexchangedphonenumbers.IgotonthelastbusandwavedtomynewfriendinVienna.(Gunter的反应的反应)Paragraph2:Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter aspromised.(我们的会面我们的会面)Wehadameetingatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysearlier.AssoonasIsawGunter,Iwalkedovertohimandgavehimabighug.Happyandexcited,helaughedandsaidhe had no idea Id turn up.I told him that,thanks to his generosity,everythinghadgoneverysmoothly,andIhandedGunterthemoneyIowedhim.“一一起起喝喝一一杯杯吧吧，我我的的朋朋友友，感感谢谢你你对对我我的的信信任任和和你你的的慷慷慨慨善善意意”，我我感感恩恩地地说说道道。“我我相相信信上上帝帝会会保保佑佑你你这这样样的的好好人人的的，我我知知道道有有一一家家酒酒吧吧的的啤啤酒酒非非常常棒棒，你你绝绝对对会会很很喜喜欢欢。”冈冈特特回回复复到到。无无论论多多小小，善善行行都都不不会会浪浪费费。我我握握了了握握冈冈特特的的手手以以表表谢谢意意，一一起起和和他他向向着着酒酒吧吧前前进进。在在顺顺境境中中，朋朋友友结结识识了了我我们们。在在逆逆境境中中，我我们们了了解解了了朋朋友友。谢谢谢谢你你，我我的维也纳朋友。的维也纳朋友。(我们的互动我们的互动)Paragraph2:Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter aspromised.(我们的会面我们的会面)Wehadameetingatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysearlier.AssoonasIsawGunter,Iwalkedovertohimandgavehimabighug.Happyandexcited,helaughedandsaidhe had no idea Id turn up.I told him that,thanks to his generosity,everythinghadgoneverysmoothly,andIhandedGunterthemoneyIowedhim.LetsLetshavehaveaadrinkdrinktogether,together,mymyfriend.friend.ThankThankyouyouforforyouryourtrusttrustininmemeandandyouryourgenerosity,generosity,I Isaidsaidgratefully.gratefully.IIbelievebelieveGodGodwillwillblessblessaagoodgoodpersonpersonlikelikeyou.you.I Iknowknowaabarbarwithwithexcellentexcellentbeerbeerthatthatyoullyoulldefinitelydefinitelyenjoy,enjoy,GunterGunterreplied.replied.NoNoactactofofkindness,kindness,nonomattermatterhowhowsmall,small,willwillgogowasted.wasted.I IshookshookGuntersGuntershandhandiningratitudegratitudeandandwalkedwalkedtowardstowardsthethebarbarwithwithhim.him.InInprosperityprosperityourourfriendsfriendsknowknowus.us.InInadversityadversityweweknowknowourourfriends.friends.ThankThankyou,you,myViennafriend.myViennafriend.(我们的互动我们的互动)
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段落开头语与后续语的衔接。段落开头语与后续语的衔接。后续两段间的衔接；后续两段间的衔接；原文与后续的衔接；原文与后续的衔接；内容多视角、多维度；内容多视角、多维度；语言结构，词汇选用语言结构，词汇选用多样。多样。衔衔接接丰丰富富准准确确情感表达准确；情感表达准确；语言描述准确。语言描述准确。Whatmakesagoodcontinuationwriting?1.1.两两段段首首句定一句定一框框由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。架。2.2.二框二首正二框二首正能能量量第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。定。两句口诀两句口诀三大原则三大原则1.1.原文一致原则原文一致原则内容要内容要前后衔接前后衔接，上下上下连贯连贯 语言表达语言表达风格风格一一致致。2.2.正能量原则正能量原则故事内容一定要故事内容一定要正能量正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定最后一定是言归于好，是言归于好，和睦相处和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。等等。3.3.曲折性原则曲折性原则凡是凡是故事都应有故事都应有跌宕跌宕起伏起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解最终能解决决。Step I 读懂大意，理清脉络读懂大意，理清脉络 1.Readfor1.Readforcharacterscharacters人物人物2.Readfor2.Readforconflict/problemsconflict/problems问题问题3.Readfor3.Readforplotplot情节发展情节发展4.Readfor4.Readforemotionalchangesemotionalchanges情感变化情感变化5.Readfor5.Readforthemetheme主题主题5R5RWho,When,Where,What,Why,How5W+1HWhenWhenWhereWhereWhoWhoInacoldeveninginSeptemberInacoldeveninginSeptemberInViennaInViennaI,TaxidriverGunterI,TaxidriverGunterTimeTimeEventsEventsMoodMoodBeginningBeginningIhurriedlytook_tocatch_dueto_beingdelayed._DevelopmentDevelopment_eventuallygotmetothe_ontime._Climax(Climax(故事高潮故事高潮)Ilacked_andtriedmultiplewaysbutcouldnt_thetaxi,andthebuswasaboutto_._Midpoint(Midpoint(故事中间故事中间)I_backtoGunterandtoldhimthe_news._EndingEndingFourdayslater,whenIwasbackin_,I_Gunteras_._ataxithelastflightGunterstationcashpaydepart/leaveran bad Viennacalled promisedanxiousrelievedhelplesssad_grateful_hopefuljoyfulKnowthethemeofthestoryKnowthethemeofthestory理解故事的主题理解故事的主题WhywouldthewritercallGunterfourdayslater?Whatdoesthewriterintendtotellus?kindness Step II 构思框架构思框架第一步：先把最后一句写好，即：主题句第一步：先把最后一句写好，即：主题句Noactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,willgowasted.无论多小，善行都不会浪费。无论多小，善行都不会浪费。Inprosperityourfriendsknowus.Inadversityweknowourfriends.在顺境中，朋友结识了我们。在逆境中，我们了解了朋友。在顺境中，朋友结识了我们。在逆境中，我们了解了朋友。第二步：再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句第二步：再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句(必须与第必须与第二段给出的首句融为一体）：二段给出的首句融为一体）：Para 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad newsPara 1最后一句：Para 2 第一句：Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised我告诉了他我的名字，我们还交我告诉了他我的名字，我们还交换了电话号码。我上了那最后一班大巴后，向我在换了电话号码。我上了那最后一班大巴后，向我在维也纳的新朋友挥了挥手。维也纳的新朋友挥了挥手。第二步：再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句第二步：再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句(必须与第必须与第二段给出的首句融为一体）：二段给出的首句融为一体）：Para 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad newsPara 2 第一句：Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promisedPara 1最后一句：Itoldhimmynameandweexchangedphonenumbers.IgotonthelastbusandwavedtomynewfriendinVienna.第三步：紧接着写第一段的衔接句第三步：紧接着写第一段的衔接句Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.(继续我们的交互继续我们的交互)令令我我惊惊讶讶的的是是，Gunter笑笑着着安安慰慰我我，让让我我平平静静下下来来。我我担担心心会会错错过过公公共共汽汽车车，带带着着一一丝丝绝绝望望说说：“我我四四天天后后回来。您能借我车费吗？回来。您能借我车费吗？”第三步：紧接着写第一段的衔接句第三步：紧接着写第一段的衔接句Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.(继续我们的交互继续我们的交互)ToTomymy surprise,surprise,GunterGuntercomfortedcomforted meme withwithaabigbigsmile,smile,whichwhichcalmedcalmedmemedown.down.FearingFearingI Imightmightmissmiss thethe bus,bus,I I saidsaid withwith aa tingetinge ofofdesperation,desperation,“Ill“Ill bebe backback inin fourfour days.days.CouldCould youyou possiblypossiblylendmethebusfare?”lendmethebusfare?”第四步：紧接着写第二段的衔接句第四步：紧接着写第二段的衔接句Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.我我们们在在四四天天前前他他送送我我去去的的公公交交车车站站见见了了面面。我我一一看看到到Gunter，就就走走到到他他跟跟前前，给给了了他他一一个个大大大大的的拥拥抱抱。他他高高兴兴又又兴兴奋奋，笑笑着着说说他他不不知知道道我我会会来来。我我告告诉诉他他，多多亏亏了了他的慷慨，一切都很顺利，我把欠他的钱递给了他的慷慨，一切都很顺利，我把欠他的钱递给了Gunter。(二人会面的具体细节二人会面的具体细节)第四步：紧接着写第二段的衔接句第四步：紧接着写第二段的衔接句Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.(二人会面的具体细节二人会面的具体细节)WeWe hadhad aa meetingmeeting atat thethe busbus stationstation wherewhere hehe hadhaddroppeddroppedmemeoffofffourfourdaysdaysearlier.earlier.AsAssoonsoonasasI IsawsawGunter,Gunter,I Iwalkedwalkedoverovertotohimhimandandgavegavehimhimaabigbighug.hug.HappyHappyandandexcited,excited,hehelaughedlaughedandandsaidsaidhehehadhadnonoideaideaIdIdturnturnup.up.I Itoldtoldhimhimthat,that,thanksthankstotohishisgenerosity,generosity,everythingeverythinghadhadgonegoneveryvery smoothly,smoothly,andandI IhandedhandedGunterGunterthethemoneymoneyI Iowedhim.owedhim.Step III:补充细节（补充细节（3大原则）大原则）接下来就是把每段的中间补充完整，记住三大原则：接下来就是把每段的中间补充完整，记住三大原则：1.ActionResponse1.ActionResponse原则原则：某个角色所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其它角色的反应。每段对话1-2句，不一定每个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种response。2.ConflictSolution2.ConflictSolution原则原则：问题最终会找到解决方法3.NegativePositive3.NegativePositive原则原则：写作中一定要体现情感的变化，无论前面是怎样的变化，最终都是积极的。Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.(我我们们的交互的交互)Tomysurprise,Guntercomfortedmewithabigsmile,whichcalmedmedown.FearingImightmissthebus,Isaidwithatingeofdesperation,“Illbebackinfourdays.Couldyoupossiblylendmethebusfare?”在在不不舒舒服服的的停停顿顿之之后后，他他只只是是点点了了点点头头，说说：“没没问问题题！”他他笑笑了了。我我告告诉诉他他我我的的名名字字，我我们们交交换换了了电电话话号号码码。我我上上了了最最后后一一班班公公交交车车，向向我我在在维维也也纳纳的的新新朋朋友友挥挥手手致致意。意。(Gunter的反应的反应)Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.(我我们们的交互的交互)Tomysurprise,Guntercomfortedmewithabigsmile,whichcalmedmedown.FearingImightmissthebus,Isaidwithatingeofdesperation,“Illbebackinfourdays.Couldyoupossiblylendmethebusfare?”Following an uncomfortable pause,he simply nodded,saying,“No problem!”he smiled.I told him my nameandweexchangedphonenumbers.IgotonthelastbusandwavedtomynewfriendinVienna.(Gunter的反应的反应)Paragraph2:Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter aspromised.(我们的会面我们的会面)Wehadameetingatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysearlier.AssoonasIsawGunter,Iwalkedovertohimandgavehimabighug.Happyandexcited,helaughedandsaidhe had no idea Id turn up.I told him that,thanks to his generosity,everythinghadgoneverysmoothly,andIhandedGunterthemoneyIowedhim.“一一起起喝喝一一杯杯吧吧，我我的的朋朋友友，感感谢谢你你对对我我的的信信任任和和你你的的慷慷慨慨善善意意”，我我感感恩恩地地说说道道。“我我相相信信上上帝帝会会保保佑佑你你这这样样的的好好人人的的，我我知知道道有有一一家家酒酒吧吧的的啤啤酒酒非非常常棒棒，你你绝绝对对会会很很喜喜欢欢。”冈冈特特回回复复到到。无无论论多多小小，善善行行都都不不会会浪浪费费。我我握握了了握握冈冈特特的的手手以以表表谢谢意意，一一起起和和他他向向着着酒酒吧吧前前进进。在在顺顺境境中中，朋朋友友结结识识了了我我们们。在在逆逆境境中中，我我们们了了解解了了朋朋友友。谢谢谢谢你你，我我的维也纳朋友。的维也纳朋友。(我们的互动我们的互动)Paragraph2:Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter aspromised.(我们的会面我们的会面)Wehadameetingatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysearlier.AssoonasIsawGunter,Iwalkedovertohimandgavehimabighug.Happyandexcited,helaughedandsaidhe had no idea Id turn up.I told him that,thanks to his generosity,everythinghadgoneverysmoothly,andIhandedGunterthemoneyIowedhim.LetsLetshavehaveaadrinkdrinktogether,together,mymyfriend.friend.ThankThankyouyouforforyouryourtrusttrustininmemeandandyouryourgenerosity,generosity,I Isaidsaidgratefully.gratefully.IIbelievebelieveGodGodwillwillblessblessaagoodgoodpersonpersonlikelikeyou.you.I Iknowknowaabarbarwithwithexcellentexcellentbeerbeerthatthatyoullyoulldefinitelydefinitelyenjoy,enjoy,GunterGunterreplied.replied.NoNoactactofofkindness,kindness,nonomattermatterhowhowsmall,small,willwillgogowasted.wasted.I IshookshookGuntersGuntershandhandiningratitudegratitudeandandwalkedwalkedtowardstowardsthethebarbarwithwithhim.him.InInprosperityprosperityourourfriendsfriendsknowknowus.us.InInadversityadversityweweknowknowourourfriends.friends.ThankThankyou,you,myViennafriend.myViennafriend.(我们的互动我们的互动)
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