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1、2024届黑龙江省大庆市实验中学实验高三下学期得分训练（二）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A few days before Christmas, a friend called me to see if I wanted to grab a coffee. I agreed immediately. Two coffees later, I was talking when I noticed my friend wasnt listening. She was clearly distracted by something over my sho

2、ulder. Turning around, I noticed a woman trying to get her bank card to work.“Do you know her?” I asked my friend.“I do. Give me a minute. Im going to go and see if I can help,” she replied, stood up and walked over to her. A few minutes later, my friend returned with the woman. The woman looked pal

3、e, tired, and upset. Her eyes were swollen, as if shed been crying all night. After I was introduced, my friend asked her if she was okay. She admitted she wasnt and burst into tears.I could sense she was a little embarrassed by her emotional response. To put her at ease, I quickly told her not to w

4、orry. I shared that I was a new mom with many troubles and Id already cried fourteen times that day. She laughed but soon her tears were flowing again. For the next hour, my friend and I both sat and patiently listened to her. She lost her husband before Christmas and their bank accounts were now le

5、ft nothing. As a stay-at-home mom of two, in one split second, her entire life had come crashing down around her.We tried our best to cheer her up. My friend even tried to give her some cash, which she refused. When she finally got up to leave, she wiped her tears, thanked us both for listening, and

6、 walked out.As I drove home, I couldnt stop thinking about how depressed she looked when she left the coffee shop. No one deserved to feel so sad especially right before Christmas. There must be something I could do to help. My mind raced for a solution.注意：1续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在以下位置作答。Gladly, an idea

7、 occurred to me. The kids were overjoyed and excited when hearing that Santa sent them gifts. 文章大意：圣诞节前夕，“我” 与朋友相聚咖啡店，朋友注意到一位女士在刷卡时遇到问题，上前询问后得知她丈夫刚去世，银行账户也已空空如也，家庭瞬间崩塌，情绪崩溃。“我” 与朋友耐心倾听并安慰她，虽朋友欲给予现金被拒，但她离开后，“我” 仍心系于她，不忍其在这特殊时刻如此悲伤，决心寻找办法给予帮助。伏笔及回应： 伏笔 “Her eyes were swollen, as if shed been crying al

8、l night.” 续写中通过描述孩子们收到礼物时她眼中感激的泪水与之呼应，表现出她内心的痛苦与对帮助的感激。 伏笔 “As a stay-at-home mom of two, in one split second, her entire life had come crashing down around her.” 后文 “我” 给她的两个孩子送圣诞礼物，正是针对她作为两个孩子的母亲且生活陷入困境的状况，帮助她让孩子能度过一个快乐的圣诞节。 伏笔 “We tried our best to cheer her up. My friend even tried to give her s

9、ome cash, which she refused.” 这为 “我” 另寻他法帮助她做了铺垫，因为直接给钱被拒，所以 “我” 才想到扮成圣诞老人送礼物的方式，以一种更易被接受且充满惊喜的形式给予帮助。 伏笔 “As I drove home, I couldnt stop thinking about how depressed she looked when she left the coffee shop.” 此伏笔引出后续 “我” 积极想办法帮助她的情节，“我” 因一直惦记着她的悲伤神情，所以绞尽脑汁想出送礼物的主意并付诸行动。续写要点： 第一段：详细描述 “我” 为实施帮助计划所做

10、的准备工作，包括如何精心挑选礼物、怎样巧妙地获取她家地址以及怀着怎样的心情前往她家准备给孩子们惊喜。 第二段：着重刻画孩子们收到礼物时的生动场景，如他们的表情、动作和欢快的呼喊，同时展现那位女士的神态变化以及她对这份意外惊喜的反应，体现出帮助带来的温暖与感动。情感线：开始是对女士深深的同情与担忧，在想到办法帮助她时有了一丝希望与期待，送礼物过程中充满紧张与兴奋，看到孩子们开心、女士感激时则满是欣慰与喜悦，整个情感线围绕着对他人困境的关注与帮助他人后的满足展开。故事线：“我” 在回家路上想出扮圣诞老人给女士孩子送礼物的主意，然后积极筹备，购买礼物、打听地址并前往她家，孩子们收到礼物后兴奋不已，女

11、士也被这份善意深深打动，故事展现了一个从心生怜悯到付诸行动给予帮助并收获感动的温暖过程。主旨升华句：1. Kindness is the sunshine that can penetrate the thickest clouds of sorrow and bring warmth to the coldest hearts.（善良是能穿透最厚重悲伤云层，给最冰冷心灵带来温暖的阳光。）2. In the act of helping, we discover the true essence of humanity, which lies not in self-interest but

12、in selfless giving.（在帮助他人的行为中，我们发现人性的真正本质，它不在于利己，而在于无私奉献。）3. The echo of a single act of kindness reverberates far and wide, creating ripples of joy and hope in the lives of many.（一次善举的回声传得很远很广，在许多人的生活中激起欢乐与希望的涟漪。）4. When we reach out to those in the abyss of despair, we become the lighthouses guidi

13、ng them back to the shores of happiness.（当我们向处于绝望深渊的人伸出援手时，我们就成为引导他们回到幸福海岸的灯塔。）5. True charity is not measured by the amount given but by the love and care that accompanies it.（真正的慈善不是用给予的数量来衡量，而是用伴随的爱与关怀来衡量。）写作示范一：Gladly, an idea occurred to me. I would become a secret Santa and deliver presents to

14、 her children. I hurried to the local toy store and selected a collection of toys, games, and cozy winter wear. I then contacted a mutual acquaintance to discreetly obtain her address. With the gifts wrapped in bright paper and bows, I drove to her neighborhood. My heart raced with anticipation as I

15、 walked up the path to her house, carefully placing the presents on the porch. I rang the bell and quickly hid behind a nearby bush.The kids were overjoyed and excited when hearing that Santa sent them gifts. They burst through the door, their eyes wide with wonder and faces beaming. The younger one

16、 squealed with delight, hugging a plush teddy bear tightly. The older child eagerly opened a box of building blocks and started planning their next creation. The mother followed, her eyes filled with tears of gratitude. She looked around, a small smile of disbelief on her face. She knew this was an

17、act of kindness from a stranger, and in that moment, the spirit of Christmas was truly alive in all of our hearts.写作示范二：Gladly, an idea occurred to me. I resolved to be Santa for a day and take gifts to her kids. I spent hours in the store, choosing gifts that would bring smiles to their faces. I ma

18、naged to get her address from a friend of hers, making sure to keep it a secret. I loaded the presents into my car and set off. As I approached her house, I felt a mixture of nervousness and excitement. I quietly placed the gifts by the front door and stepped back. I took a deep breath and knocked l

19、oudly.The kids were overjoyed and excited when hearing that Santa sent them gifts. They rushed out, jumping up and down with glee. The little girl twirled around in her new dress, while the boy immediately started playing with a remote-controlled car. Their laughter filled the air. The mother came o

20、ut, her hands covering her mouth in surprise. She was speechless for a moment, then whispered “Thank you” into the air. This simple act of kindness had transformed their sad Christmas into a moment of pure joy and reminded us all of the power of giving.参考答案Gladly, an idea occurred to me.I decided to

21、 buy her family a few gifts to make Christmas a little better for them. I knew it wouldnt solve their problems, but it could relieve their pain for at least a day. On arriving home, I called my friend with excitement and explained my plan. She agreed immediately. On Christmas Eve morning, we drove t

22、o the womans house and sent a large box of food and a few gifts to her children, all addressed from Santa.The kids were overjoyed and excited when hearing that Santa sent them gifts.However, their mom seemed embarrassed to receive charity and refused the presents at first. We insisted that Christmas

23、 was a time for shared joy and Santa didnt accept returns. Eventually, the mom accepted our kindness with tears of gratitude and joy rolling down her cheeks. From that day on, I understood the power of kindness and never missed an opportunity to spread some around. I may not change the entire world with these small acts of kindness, but they can easily change someones world when done from heart