读后续写--爱的陪伴：帮助失明妻子重拾生活信心 讲义-四川省绵阳市高中2024-2025学年高三上学期第一次诊断性考试英语试题.docx

1、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整短文。Due to a medical misdiagnosis (误诊), Susan, 34, had been left sightless, and was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness, anger, frustration and self-pity. And all she had to depend on was her husband, Mark.Mark was an officer and he loved Susan with all his heart

2、. When she first lost her sight, he watched her sink into despair. He was determined to help his wife gain confidence to become independent and return to her normal life again. But how would he do that?Susan used to take the bus to work, but now she was too frightened to face the whole world. Mark d

3、ecided to convince Susan to take the bus again. Perhaps one day she could enjoy a city tour all by herself or buy some daily grocery in the supermarket three stops away. But she was still so moody and sensitive. How would she react?One day, Mark summoned up his courage and said “Honey, life shall mo

4、ve on, lets try taking the bus as the first step, OK?” Just as he predicted, Susan was scared at the idea of taking the bus on her own. “Im blind!” she responded bitterly. “How am I supposed to know where I am going? I feel like youre abandoning me.”Marks heart broke hearing these words, but he knew

5、 what had to be done. He promised Susan he would ride the bus with her until she got the hang of it. And that was exactly what happened. For a whole week, Mark accompanied Susan on the bus. He taught her how to rely on her other senses, specifically her hearing, to determine where she was and how to

6、 adapt to her new environment. He helped her befriend the bus drivers who could watch out for her, and save her a seat.Finally, Susan decided to try the trip on her own. Mark encouraged her and decided to continue watching out for her until she got off the bus, only in secret.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下

7、格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。With the help of her walking stick, she slowly made it to the bus stop._She asked the driver, “Why do you say that Im very lucky?”_文章大意34 岁的苏珊因医疗误诊失明，陷入黑暗、愤怒、沮丧和自怜的情绪中，丈夫马克全心全意地爱着她，决心帮助她重获自信、独立生活。马克想让苏珊重新乘坐公交，苏珊起初很抗拒，但马克陪伴她一周，教她利用其他感官适应公交出行。最终苏珊决定独自尝试，马克则在暗中守护。这篇文章展现了夫妻间深厚的情感以及面对困难时的相互

8、扶持，体现了爱的力量能帮助人克服恐惧、重新拥抱生活。五要素分析1. 人物：苏珊（失明的妻子）、马克（爱妻子的丈夫）2. 环境：主要是公交站和公交车内等日常出行环境3. 情节：苏珊失明后马克帮助她克服对独自乘坐公交的恐惧4. 冲突：苏珊因失明而恐惧独自乘坐公交，与马克希望她独立的愿望产生冲突5. 主题：爱与帮助能使人克服困难，重拾独立和自信伏笔与回应1. 伏笔：马克决定暗中守护苏珊。1. 回应：司机提到有个男人每次都跟着苏珊，让苏珊知道了马克默默的守护。2. 伏笔：马克教苏珊依靠其他感官出行。1. 回应：苏珊在独自乘坐公交时利用听力来判断行程。续写要点情感线： 第一段：从苏珊独自乘车的紧张到成功

9、下车后的自豪，再到得知马克守护后的感动。 第二段：延续感动之情，同时体现苏珊对马克爱的更深理解和对未来生活的积极态度。故事线： 第一段：苏珊顺利乘车、下车的过程以及和司机的对话引出马克的守护。 第二段：苏珊在知道真相后的心理活动和对未来生活的展望。主旨升华句1. Love is like a lighthouse in the dark, guiding us to overcome difficulties.（爱是黑暗中的灯塔，指引我们克服困难。）2. True love not only accompanies but also empowers us to face the challe

10、nges of life.（真爱不仅陪伴我们，还赋予我们力量去面对生活的挑战。）3. The power of love can turn the most difficult journey into a beautiful adventure.（爱的力量能把最艰难的旅程变成一场美丽的冒险。）4. In the face of adversity, love is the strongest driving force for us to move forward.（在逆境面前，爱是我们前进的最强动力。）5. Love gives us the courage to step out of

11、the darkness and embrace the light of life.（爱给我们勇气走出黑暗，拥抱生命之光。）写作示范第一篇With the help of her walking stick, she slowly made it to the bus stop. She took a deep breath, trying to calm her nerves. As the bus pulled up, she got on with a sense of determination. On the bus, she focused on the sounds aroun

12、d her, the engines rumble, the announcements. When she got off at her stop, she felt a huge sense of accomplishment.She asked the driver, “Why do you say that Im very lucky?” The driver replied, “Theres a man whos been following you every time. He watches over you from a distance. You must be precio

13、us to him.” Tears welled up in Susans eyes. She realized how much Mark loved her. From that day on, she was no longer afraid of the world, for she knew love was always with her.第二篇With the help of her walking stick, she slowly made it to the bus stop. The world around her was a symphony of sounds -

14、the footsteps of passers - by, the honking of cars. When the bus arrived, she felt her way on. During the ride, she remembered Marks words and felt his presence. When she got off, she was beaming with pride.She asked the driver, “Why do you say that Im very lucky?” The driver said, “Theres a man who

15、s been shadowing you. Hes your guardian angel.” Susan was deeply touched. In that moment, she understood that love was her eyes in this dark world. With Marks love, she could conquer any fear and embrace life anew.One possible version:Paragraph 1:With the help of her walking stick, she slowly made i

16、t to the bus stop.When she was struggling to get on the bus, a kid lent her a helping hand. Some kind passengers even offered their seats to her. She managed to sit down, so grateful for the assistance of the warm-hearted people. She also tried to feel the position of the seat and paid close attenti

17、on to the announcements of the bus in case she missed her stop. As she stood up and was about to get off the bus, the driver said, “Susan, youre very lucky.”Paragraph 2:She asked the driver, “Why do you say Im very lucky?” The driver responded, “You know, your husband has been watching over you sile

18、ntly, with his eyes on you all the time. You are one lucky lady!” Tears of happiness poured down Susans cheeks. Indeed, she was so lucky, not only because of her caring husband who presented her with the gift of love, but also for the considerate strangers on the bus who brightened her day with kindness. At that moment, she realized that love and kindness had the power to light up even the darkest path.