读后续写：委婉语 ppt课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项.pptx

1、 When things went wrong,Fein always had something nice to say.When Dad forgot about the pizza and it burned,Fein comforted him by saying it would still taste good.And he was right.The pizza edges were dark and crispy,but the middle wasnt half bad.When Fein s friend got a low score on the spelling te

2、st,Fein said that she would do better next time.And,sure enough,she studied hard and got 100 percent the next week.When his teacher bumped into a bookstand in the library,Fein told him not to worry as the librarian wouldnt be upset.He was right.The librarian just laughed and helped pick up the books

3、.Fein looked on the bright side.And everyone liked that about him.Everyone,that is except Hazel.Hazel was the new kid in the class.On her first day,Fein said,“Nice to meet you,Hazel.I think youll like it here.”Hazel stared at him.“I doubt it.”Fein didnt know what to do.Hed never met anyone like Haze

4、l.When the teacher said theyd take a break inside because of the rain,Fein said,“Every cloud has a silver lining.”“A silver lining?”Hazel shook her head.“Clouds are white.Maybe gray.Where do you get this stuff?”Fein felt as if the wind had been knocked out of him.Outside the window,the clouds had ro

5、lled over the sun.The room felt darker.“Bad things come in threes,”said Hazel.“No outdoor break is number one.What will be the second thing?”The class didnt have to wait long to find out.Emma was carrying a tray of paints(颜料)during art class.She tripped,and the paint went flying.There was blue on th

6、e floor and red and black on the walls.Hazel declared it to be the second bad thing.Fein didnt know what to say.Hazel seemed so sure about the Rule of Three Bad Things.Emma came to look at Feins painting.“Its beautiful.I especially like the grassland.”she said.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

7、。Paragraph 1：She picked up the painting,not realizing she had paints on her fingers._ Paragraph 2：“Want to add one on the painting?”Fein asked Hazel._续写走向续写走向第一段第一段:She picked up the painting,not realizing she had paints on her fingers.(衔接)Emma的指印留在了Fein的painting上，Hazel认为这是第三件bad thing（过渡）Fein如何look

8、 on the bright side并想出解决办法（将fingerpaint变成花朵或者蝴蝶等等）（承上启下）Fein和Emma合作，hazel在一旁愣住了第二段第二段:“Want to add one on the painting?”Fein asked Hazel.（衔接）Hazel的反应：犹豫，不确定，但还是尝试了（过渡）完成的画作很赞，阳光也正好出来了，美好的事情发生了（收尾）呼应前文：Fein鼓励Hazel抛弃“坏事成三”，看到积极的一面。bad things come in threes到good things come in threes：optimism/kindness/

9、inspiration;outdoor break/a refreshed paiting/friendShe picked up the painting,not realizing she had paints on her fingers.A fingerprint was left on the canvas,seemingly reinforcing Hazels Rule of Three Bad Things.Hazel pointed out,“Fein s picture is ruined!That makes three.”Distressed,Emma apologiz

10、ed to Fein,her face flushing with embarrassment.Fein offered her reassurance with a gentle pat on the shoulder and gazed at the print for a moment.Suddenly,his eyes brightened and he dipped his finger into the yellow paint and added two more fingerprints to the artwork.Together with Emmas print,they

11、 resembled three vibrant butterflies fluttering above the verdant grassland.“Want to add one on the painting?”Fein asked Hazel.She hesitated for a fraction of a second.“It could be enjoyable.”Fein encouraged her further,prompting her to have a try.Hearing that,Hazel tentatively dipped her finger int

12、o the paints,carefully pressing it onto Feins canvas to craft delicate wings.At that moment,the sky cleared,casting a warm golden light over the field of butterflies.Fein then addressed Hazel,saying,“Cast aside your Rule of Three Bad Things.While misfortunes may occur,so do moments of joy.Occasional

13、ly,good things can be found in the most unexpected places.”委婉语（委婉语（Euphemism）是人类语言使用过程中的一种普遍现象，是人们谈论那些令人不快或尴尬的事情时所使用的较为礼貌的说法。它是一种修辞格，更是一种文化现象。委婉语英文是委婉语英文是“Euphemism”，起源于希腊语，起源于希腊语“euphemisms”，“eu是好、开心的意思、是好、开心的意思、“pheme”是语言，话语的意思。是语言，话语的意思。“euphemism”就是说就是说“讨人喜欢的话讨人喜欢的话”。当人们感到直接的说法。当人们感到直接的说法可能会使对方产

14、生怀疑和厌恶的时候，本着尊重，可能会使对方产生怀疑和厌恶的时候，本着尊重，就用其它的词来暗指自己想表达的意思，这种代替就用其它的词来暗指自己想表达的意思，这种代替的语言就叫做的语言就叫做“委婉语委婉语”。1.Euphemisms for Death讨论死亡可能令人不舒服，因此委婉语常被用来使谈话变得轻松一些。诸如 passed away（去世）或“gone to a better place”（去了一个更好的地方）这样的短语比直接说某人死了要温和。例如：Direct:John died last night.Euphemism:John passed away last night.2.Eup

15、hemisms for Bodily Functions某些身体功能的讨论可能会显得尴尬。委婉语帮助保持一定的体面：Direct:I need to use the toilet.Euphemism:I need to powder my nose.3.Euphemisms in the Workplace在职业环境中，委婉语常被用来以不那么直接的方式传达敏感信息：Direct:You are fired.Euphemism:We have to let you go.4.Euphemisms for Aging衰老是一个敏感话题，委婉语可以帮助更为细腻地处理它：Direct:She is o

16、ld.Euphemism:She is getting on in years.5.Euphemisms for Economic Downturns讨论经济困难时常需要谨慎措辞，以避免恐慌或不安：Direct:The company is going bankrupt.Euphemism:The company is facing financial challenges.6.Euphemisms in Politics政治家常用委婉语来以更为有利的方式呈现政策或情况：Direct:Civilian casualties occurred.Euphemism:Collateral damag

17、e happened.英汉委婉语的一般表现方法英汉委婉语的一般表现方法委婉语作为一种修辞格，既是一种“手段”，也是一种目的。大量的英汉委婉语运用了各种各样的表现手段来达到“委婉”这个目的。（一）借助隐喻法（一）借助隐喻法英文中人们常借助生动而又通俗的隐喻来婉转、幽默地表达自己的说话艺术。如After three days in Japan,the spinal column becomes extraordinarily flexible.作者把日本人习惯于鞠躬说成“the spinal column becomes extraordinarily flexible”，十分幽默有趣。在汉语中，

18、“墓地”被比作“人生后花园”。除了把“死亡”比作长眠安息外，汉语中还把“死”比作像神仙一样“仙逝”、“仙游”；或用“星陨”、“花落”来比喻伟大人物的逝世，以表达无限惋惜和崇敬之情。“墓地”被比作“人生后花园”。（二）迂回陈述法（二）迂回陈述法对于有伤大雅、令人不快的话，人们常借用迂回陈述法拐弯抹角地来表达，旨在文雅，如：We have three main difficulties with regard to those terms.“Three main difficulties”，实际上是拐弯抹角地说我们“有三点反对意见”。汉语有时为增强语意、文饰辞面或者为了达到讽刺或戏谑的目的，会运用

19、折绕、兜圈子的方式来代替直截了当的表达方式。人们不直说某人“理论水平差”，而说“理论水平亟待进一步提高”；不直说“不赞成某个观点”，而说“有待商榷”。（三）降格处理法（三）降格处理法人们对于严重的事态，有时故意轻描淡写，降格处理，以达到委婉效果。如：In private I should merely call him a liar.In the press you should use words:reckless disregard for truth.And in Parliament-that you regard he should have been so misinformed.

20、把一个liar(说谎者)说成是“reckless disregard for truth”或“should have been so misinformed”，是一种典型的降格陈述处理法。It was a rainy November morning.Overcome with anger,I knew if I didnt leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband,Joe.As rain came down in sheets,Joe offered to take me to work.I struggled i

21、nto my jacket,seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him.He insisted and reached for his boots.I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table.“Dont you have enough to do?I can take care of myself.”I stormed out,not even kissing him good-bye.Joe shouted after me not

22、 to take the shortcut(捷径).Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned.As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over

23、the housework.The new arrangement was a disaster.Exhausted after a day of full work,all I wanted was a hot homecooked meal and a good nights sleep.However,what greeted me at the table was a microwave package.Sometimes he would serve oatmeal(燕麦)for several nights in a row.One night when I dragged mys

24、elf to bed,I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue.He told me he had found out how to save on water,soap and electricity.He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret.Ten minutes later,ignoring Joes warning I turned off the

25、 main route(道路).I thought it hadnt rained enough to flood the road,but as I rounded the corner,water rushed across my path.After a few feet,the car got stuck.I opened the door and water poured in.I hurriedly closed the door.I couldnt risk walking in this.Almost 20 minutes passed.The car began to sha

26、ke.I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks(喇叭声).Paragraph 1:Looking over my shoulder,I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.Paragraph 2:I screamed that I couldnt make it.1.文章大意：故事开头即是妻子生气离开家去上班，中间用了插叙的方式，介绍老夫妻矛盾产生的原因家庭里的生活琐事，继续按时间顺序描写妻子不理会丈夫的提醒，抄近路上班，结果涨水，车子被困。2.故事主题：不难从字里行间看出丈

27、夫虽然在生活琐事上不够完美，但是是一个暖心的丈夫，文章应体现真善美，通过描写丈夫冒险救援妻子，消除彼此的隔阂，体现夫妻之间的真情。3.续写难点：首段应结合原文最后一句I heard three long honks和I stared into the flashing lights of a truck合理推测“来人就是Joe”，其次就是设想丈夫如何营救妻子，并且同时思考第二段“I couldnt make it”,那么Joe提出的做法是什么。(虽然同学们会思考各种各样的救援方式，确实有合理性，但是问题解决类续写，尽量避免添加额外人物，并且解决问题的细节紧扣主题，突出主要人物的特点以及最后点题

28、）。（每个步骤的顺序可能有所变化，尤其是1+2和6+7的顺序要充分考虑given sentences的衔接，有时候主要是情节的推动）第1-情绪：消极情绪/积极情绪第2-细节：回应第一段given sentence第3-反应：角色的action+response，并伴随表情，语言，情绪描写等。第4-细节：想到solution来解决conflic，以及角色对solution的反应反思或看法第5-衔接：段尾如何与第二段given sentence衔接第6-情绪：积极或消极情绪第7-细节：conflict成功得到解决，伴随主角表情，语言，情绪描写等。第8-收尾：点题，呼应前文或画面定格Paragrap

29、h 1:Looking over my shoulder,I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.Peeking throughthe pouring rain,I managed to make out a vague figure shouting and waving violently at me.It was Joe!I wound down the window,tears of horror mixed with rain streaming down my face.The truck pulling up beside my

30、car,Joe rolled down his window,yelling“you all right?”,his face etched with concern.But before I could utter any word,my car began to shake increasingly wildly.“Joe!”I felt death was waiting for me.“Climb out of the car and wait for me!”Joe yelled and got off the truck,battling the rising water.Para

31、graph 2:I screamed that I couldnt make it.The current was too strong.But Joe,reassured me,“Be brave!You can do it!”his voice cutting through the noise of the storm.With his encouragement,I made one last effort,managing to climb out of the car and catching his hand.“Im sorry,”I whispered,overwhelmed

32、with regret.Joe looked at me,his expression softening,and squeezed my hand.“We always figure thing out,remember.”The warmth in his voice was like a balm to my weary soul.As we drove home,I knew that we had turned a corner,not just on the road,but in our lives.参考范文一Looking over my shoulder,I stared i

33、nto the flashing lights of a truck.A familiar figure leaped out,rushed towards me and waded into the water.Thank goodness,it was Joe who came to my rescue.However,the water was running so rapidly that he had to go back.Frightened and a little angry,I could hardly help shedding tears.How I wished tha

34、t my husband were like a superman who could save me from disaster.But,after a while,it turned out that Joe returned with one end of a rope in his hand and the other end tied to the truck.He struggled to throw the rope to me and shouted,Catch!Open the door!I screamed that I couldnt make it.At that mo

35、ment,the sound of the raging water outside grew louder,and the car rocked more violently.Worse still,the water came up to Joes waist and he almost lost his footing in the water.After several vain attempts,Joe realized that there was no chance to make it.He put every ounce of strength into getting cl

36、ose to me and said soothingly,Dont panic,honey!Im here.With Joes help,I burst the door open,and Joe immediately tied the rope around my waist.The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water,the car was washed away.What a narrow escape!I hugged Joe tightly,happiness and love welling up inside me.参考范文

37、二Paragraph 1:Looking over my shoulder,I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.It was Joe！I couldnt help bursting into tears.Joe shouted to me not to be frightened.Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him.I opened the door,grabbed it and inched out.Ho

38、wever,a sudden fall left me in the rushing water.I struggled to my feet,only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me.Paragraph 2:I screamed that I couldnt make it.Joe,however,remained calm！He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it.I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms.Sobbing against his chest,I apologized that I shouldnt have taken the shortcut.Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety.Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.