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1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My brother and I set off shortly after sunrise. The air was cool, but I knew that wouldnt last long. Id chosen this hike for a hot day like today so that wed climb down into a redrock canyon (峡谷) , where we would swim in a pool and camp by a picturesque waterfall

2、. I knew it wouldnt be an easy hike, though. Id researched and planned for weeks, knowing climbing down into the canyon is challenging. About a mile in, the trail started to dip down to the river and the footing became steep (陡峭的) . After repeated slips on the loose ground, my brother decided to tur

3、n back to the car. Unwilling to give up on my plan so soon and remembering there was another car where we parked, I believed there was someone else going to the canyon. So I chose to continue alone. He gave me the bag which contained food and water. Then we decided to meet up at the car the next day

4、. After another mile or so, the river came into view below me, but the trail became less obvious. I chose to go down along a bush-covered slope (斜坡) . As soon as I began hiking down, though, I realized the ground was much looser than Id thought. I decided to climb back up and find another way. I tri

5、ed to pull myself up, but, unfortunately, the rock I was standing on broke beneath me. My face struck earth first. I was rolling with my bag, dirt and red sandstone flying beneath me as I picked up speed. I was going to die, I thought. Then I fell flat on my back, my head hitting on a baseball-size

6、stone. To my surprise, I was alive, but everything hurt. After lying in confusion for a few moments, I tried to look around. One of my eyes was already swollen shut, and through the other, the world spun around me. I could hardly move my left hand, and my right ankle hurt terribly. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左

7、右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Fighting my unsteady vision, I pulled out my phone, only to find there was no service. _It had been about 2 hours since my fall when I heard the sound of several people. _文章大意这篇文章讲述了作者和他的兄弟在日出后不久出发去远足的故事。作者选择了一条通往红岩峡谷的路，计划在那里游泳并在瀑布旁露营。尽管知道这将是一次艰难的徒步旅行，但作者已经研究并计划了数周。在徒步过程中，由于地形

8、变得陡峭，作者的兄弟决定返回。作者独自一人继续前进，但不久后，他意识到地面比预期的要松得多，决定寻找其他路线。不幸的是，当他试图爬上去时，他站立的岩石破裂了，导致他滚下山坡并严重受伤。在受伤后，作者发现自己的手机没有信号，无法寻求帮助。在恐慌和痛苦中，他试图保持冷静并评估自己的状况。大约两小时后，他听到了其他人的声音，是一群徒步旅行者。他们帮助作者，并提供了水和绷带，还制作了临时担架将他抬回安全地带。这次经历让作者意识到，即使在逆境中，他人的帮助和团结一致的精神也能带来希望。主要矛盾：1. 地形挑战：作者选择的徒步路线非常具有挑战性，特别是进入峡谷的部分，这导致了作者在陡峭、松散的地面上行走时

9、受伤。2. 孤独无助：当作者的兄弟因为地形险峻而返回，作者独自一人继续前进，受伤后没有直接的援助。3.通讯困难：作者在受伤后发现手机没有信号，无法联系外界寻求帮助。解决方法：1. 利用现有资源：作者在受伤后尝试利用手机，虽然没有信号，但手机可能是使用SOS功能或其他紧急服务的工具。2. 发出求救信号：作者使用身边的岩石发出声音信号，成功吸引了其他徒步旅行者的注意。3. 团结协作： 当其他徒步旅行者发现受伤的作者时，他们迅速采取行动，提供急救和物理帮助，共同制定了将作者带离险境的计划。4. 心理调适：作者在受伤后努力保持冷静，评估自己的状况，并尝试自我安慰，这有助于他保持清晰的思维，寻找解决问题

10、的方法。通过这些解决方法，作者最终得到了救援，并从这次危险的经历中获救。主旨升华句1. In the face of adversity, the human spirit can find strength in the most unexpected places.2. The incident served as a stark reminder that preparation and awareness are crucial for survival in the wilderness.3. The kindness of strangers can be a lifeline w

11、hen we find ourselves in dire situations.4. This experience highlighted the importance of perseverance and the will to live, even when all hope seems lost.5. The unity and compassion of fellow hikers exemplified the power of community in overcoming lifes challenges.参考答案Fighting my unsteady vision, I

12、 pulled out my phone, only to find there was no service. That was too bad. Now I noticed Id landed in the canyon bottom about 20 feet from the rivers edge. My bag was lying not far from me. Gathering my strength, I dragged myself to the river to clean myself and then used some tree branches to creat

13、e a spot of shade, knowing the temperature would climb above 100F later on. With my injuries, there was no way I could get myself up and out of the canyon. I could do nothing but wait. It had been about 2 hours since my fall when I heard the sound of several people. They were hikers. They must be th

14、e owners of the car. Then I spotted a family of three picking their way down the canyon wall. “Help!” I screamed. The father rushed to my side and I told him what had happened. Shortly after his wife and daughter arrived, the man turned and ran off to call for help. I was luckily rescued and sent to

15、 hospital for treatment. The lesson I drew from this lucky survival is that you should never ever hike alone to an unfamiliar destination.下水文1Fighting my unsteady vision, I pulled out my phone, only to find there was no service. Panic started to set in as I realized the gravity of my situation. Alon

16、e, injured, and with no means to call for help, I had to rely on my own strength and wits to survive. I took a few deep breaths to calm myself, then began to assess my injuries and the supplies I had. With only a small amount of food and water, I knew I had to conserve them carefully.It had been abo

17、ut 2 hours since my fall when I heard the sound of several people. To my immense relief, it was a group of hikers coming down the trail. I used what little energy I had to call out to them. They quickly located me and, upon seeing my condition, immediately sprang into action. One of them had a first

18、 aid kit and began to tend to my wounds while the others set up a makeshift stretcher to carry me back up the slope. Their presence not only provided physical assistance but also a morale boost that gave me hope in the face of adversity.下水文2Fighting my unsteady vision, I pulled out my phone, only to

19、 find there was no service. The screens glare stung my one open eye as I struggled to think clearly amidst the pain. I was alone, and the reality of my predicament was sinking in. I had to find a way to climb back up to the trail or find another route to safety. With great effort, I managed to sit u

20、p and take stock of my supplies, which were now scattered around me.It had been about 2 hours since my fall when I heard the sound of several people. Their voices echoed faintly through the canyon, and I felt a surge of hope. Gathering all my strength, I used a nearby rock to create a makeshift sign

21、al, striking it repeatedly with a small piece of the broken rock that had caused my fall. The sound seemed to carry, and to my immense relief, the voices grew louder, and soon, a group of fellow hikers appeared over the ridge. They were astonished to find me in such a state but quickly took charge, offering water, bandages, and moral support. Together, we devised a plan to get me out of the canyon and to safety.