2025届高考英语一轮复习读后续写练习：11岁的少年送午餐的所见所闻所感 ppt课件.pptx

1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习11岁的少年送午餐的所见所闻所感1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文At eleven years old during my summer holiday,my main concern was money.I wanted to buy the new must-have thing my classmates had.I already had a“job”as a sales representative with a kids-based sales company,and I sold wrapping paper an

2、d greeting cards with the best of them.On my bedroom floor,I arranged the bills and change from my purse to see what I had.I wished it would multiply before my eyes,but of course it didnt.I went to my mom.Mom,I need more money,”I said,leaning against the kitchen counter while she cooked dinner.”What

3、 else can kids do for a job around here?”Mom responded with a smile,“Okay,let me ask around.”The next day,she had an answer“Your grandmother will pay you to help her deliver lunch each day to the elderly.”Yes!I pumped my fist into the air.I couldnt wait to start my new job on Monday after school dis

4、missed for the summer.4续写原文When my grandmother picked me up,I thanked her for the job and started asking the job.“Its simple.We pick up a large container full of hot meals in a nearby town and then we go on our delivery route,”she answered.We arrived at the pick-up kitchen and got dozens of little s

5、hiny silver boxes with white lids that were hot.After our load was arranged in the backseat,my grandmother drove us to our first stop:a small white house.I took a meal and a small box of milk from the back and walked beside my grandmother to the front gate.She opened it and nodded to me to go in.I w

6、alked along the cracked walkway.Tall grass tickled(使发痒)my ankles.Did someone really live here?I couldnt imagine that.The house didnt look nice,but I kept going.In front of the door leading to the enclosed front doorway,I paused,and my grandmother called out,“Mrs.Hershel,weve brought you some lunch.”

7、5段首句Para 1：The reply in a low voice came from my left,“Come on in.”Para 2：On the road home,my grandmother said,”For some of them,were the only person they see and a kind word and a smile go a long way.”6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者11岁的时候很需要钱，奶奶给了他一份给人送午餐的工作。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于

8、续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析 Para 1：The reply in a low voice came from my left,“Come on in.”由第一段首句内容“我的左边传来一个低低的声音:“请进。”可知，第一段可描写作者跟随奶奶去到一个老奶奶家所看到的情形。10续写思路分析 Para 2：On the road home,my grandmother said,”For some of them,were the only person the

9、y see and a kind word and a smile go a long way.”由第二段首句内容“在回家的路上，我的祖母说:“对他们中的一些人来说，我们是他们唯一能看到的人，一句友善的话语和一个微笑会有很长的路要走”可知，第二段可描写作者听了奶奶的话以后的感受和改变。11续写素材 续写素材 走近她盯着她退了出去微笑打招呼12续写素材 续写素材 行为类 走近她：draw near to her/approach her 盯着她：stare at her/gaze at her 退了出去：withdraw/back out 打招呼：greet/say hello 情绪类 感谢：t

10、hank/show her gratitude 孤独的：lonely/solitary13续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1However,I stared at her and just stood there holding the food,unsure what to do.（用现在分词作状语）高分句型2That summer I did something incredible not only earning money but making a difference to someone.（用现在分词作状语）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现The reply in a low v

11、oice came from my left,“Come on in.”I turned around and found an old lady in the corner looking at me.She was in her nineties with grey hair.She was sitting in a rock chair in a loose dress.When I drew near to her,she smiled at me.My grandmother introduced me to her.She thanked me again.However,I st

12、ared at her and just stood there holding the food,unsure what to do.Under the guide of my grandmother,I placed the food on her kitchen table.I was unwilling to stay there and withdrew at once.16范文呈现On the road home,my grandmother said,“For some of them,were the only person they see and a kind word a

13、nd a smile go a long way.”And she asked if I would try it again the next day.With the lonely woman coming to my mind,I nodded.The next morning,I saw each person a little differently.I smiled at each one and greeted them.With those smiles I saw true happiness in their eyes.That summer I did something

14、 incredible not only earning money but making a difference to someone.17范文译文我的左边低声回答说：“进来吧。”我转过身，发现角落里有一位老太太在看着我。她已经九十多岁了，头发灰白。她穿着宽松的裙子坐在摇椅上。当我走近她时，她对我微笑。我祖母把我介绍给她。她再次感谢我。然而，我盯着她，只是站在那里拿着食物，不知道该怎么办。在祖母的指导下，我把食物放在了她的厨房桌子上。我不愿意呆在那里，立刻撤退了。在回家的路上，我祖母说：“对他们中的一些人来说，我们是他们唯一看到的人，一句友善的话和一个微笑会有很长的路要走。”她问我第二天是否愿意再试一次。我想起了那个孤独的女人，点了点头。第二天早上，我看到每个人都有点不同。我对每个人都微笑着向他们打招呼。带着这些微笑，我看到了他们眼中真正的幸福。那个夏天，我做了一件不可思议的事情不仅赚钱，而且对某人产生了影响。18Part 4努力方向19高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语20定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）21Thank you!