2021年江苏中考英语复习练习课件：21专题二十一　书面表达.pptx

1、 中考英语 （江苏专用） 专题二十一 书面表达 A组 20162020年江苏中考题组 题组一 提示类作文 Writing 1(2020苏州) 下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习,他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛,是学校绿色星 球俱乐部的负责人,请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容,用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。 注意:1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.文中须包括所有要点,每个要点可适当发挥,使文章连贯、通顺; 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇:workshop n.工作坊 Welcome to our school. Im Lin Tao. Im

2、 glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you. Lets work together for a green planet. Thank you! 答案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.审题:这是一篇发言稿。文章使用第一人称和第三人称,时态为一般现在时。 2.确定要点: (1)时间:每周五下午; (2)活动: 1)DIY工作坊旧物改造,如:旧衣服、旧木头等; 2)志愿者工作分发环保传单;宣传绿色生活;帮助垃圾分类;清理公园街道;(可自拟一 点)。 参考范文参考范文 Welcome to our school. Im Lin Tao. Im glad

3、to introduce our Green Planet Club to you. All our club members meet every Friday afternoon to do something meaningful. We have DIY workshops. Here, old clothes can be made into handbags. Its also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks. Working as volunteer

4、s is our task as well. We hand out leaflets and tell people the importance of living a green life. Sometimes, we teach people how to separate waste in communities and help clean up parks and streets. Be- sides, we look after flowers and trees in our school. Lets work together for a green planet. Tha

5、nk you!精彩语句 1.精美词汇 meaningful adj.有意义的;as well也;separate v.(使)分开;besides adv.此外 2.出彩结构 Here, old clothes can be made into handbags.(本句用了情态动词的被动语态,can be done能够被) Its also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks. (It为形式主语,真 正的主语为fun后面的不定式结构to use.) Writing 2(

6、2020南京) 假如你是李华,在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到招募夏令营营员的信息。请根据招募内容,用英语给校 刊写一封信。 注意: 1.内容涵盖所有要点(理由不得少于两点),可适当发挥。 2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. Yours, Li Hua 答案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.确定人称和时态。以第一人称为主;主体时态为一般现在时或一般将来时。 2.确定要点: (1)要参加什么夏

7、令营; (2)选择这个夏令营的理由(不少于两点)。 参考范文参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. I do expect to join one of them. I like sports very much, especially basketball, so Sports Camp is my first choice. If Im accepted, I think its a good chance to improve my basketball skills. Ill have p

8、lenty of time to practice playing basketball and there must be many excellent coaches and players in this camp. Besides, I believe Ill make some new friends who have common interests. That really sounds fantastic to me. I just cant wait. Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.

9、精美词汇 expect v.期待;especially adv.特别是;first choice首选;plenty of充足的;excellent adj.极好的;besides adv.此外; common interests共同的兴趣;fantastic adj.美妙的 2.出彩结构 If Im accepted, I think its a good chance to improve my basketball skills. (本句是一个主从复合句,其中If 引导条件状语从句) Besides, I believe Ill make some new friends who have

10、 common interests. (本句是一个主从复合句。be- lieve后为省略that的宾语从句;其中又有一个关系代词who引导的定语从句,修饰先行词friends) Writing 3(2020连云港) 2020年6月,我市西游文化嘉年华(carnival)活动全面启动。为了鼓励同学们更好地阅读与理解西游记, 你校组织了“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。假定你是李华,请用英语写一封信,邀请外籍教师Nick参 与评选。内容包括: (1)活动名称及目的; (2)时间地点:7月20日下午6:00前,学校网站; (3)参与方式:观看唱歌、故事讲述、短剧表演等视频作品,投票选择“最佳美猴王”;

11、 (4)希望他 注意: (1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出; (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; (4)参考词汇:西游记Journey to the West 才艺展示 talent show Dear Nick, The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. Yours, Li Hua 写作提示写作提示 1.审题:这是一封英语邀请信。主体时态为一般现在时。 2.确定要点: (1)活动名称及目的; (2)时间地点:7月20日下午6:00前,学校网站; (3)参与方式:观看唱歌、故

12、事讲述、短剧表演等视频作品;投票选择“最佳美猴王”; (4)希望他 参考范文参考范文 Dear Nick, The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. To encourage students to better read and understand 答案答案 Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. Im writing to in- vite you to vote for

13、us. Youre expected to visit our schools website before 6 p.m. on July 20.There are not only videos of songs, sto- ries but also short plays. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. Wed like you to vote for the best Monkey King. I hope youll like these works and learn more about Journey to the

14、West.Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 encourage v.鼓励;as well也;vote v.投票 2.出彩结构 There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays.(本句中用了not only.but also.结构) Writing 4(2019连云港) 减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大 家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示,以“How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题,用英

15、语写一 篇短文。 注意:(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯; (2)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; (3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息; (4)参考词汇:提升素养promote literacy。 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? 答案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.审题: 本

16、文话题为如何让课余生活更有意义。 2.确定要点: (1)帮助父母以表达爱心; (2)阅读书籍以了解世界; (3)亲近自然以放松自己; (4)你的建议(至少两条); (5)总结:充分利用课余时间,提升自身素养。 参考范文参考范文 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? My schoolmates give the foll

17、owing suggestions. First, its good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthi

18、er. Whats more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In a word, lets make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy. Writing 5(2019南京) 假如你是李华,在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征 集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。 IDEAS NEEDED Brite

19、ch is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners ex- plore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed! Heres what to do: Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative! Please let us know: Whats the name of the app? What

20、 problem does the app solve? What does the app do? Contact us at appdesignB 注意: 1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。 2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for English writing. Yours, Li Hua 答案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.审题: 本文是一篇回信类作文。以第一人称为主,主体时态为一般现在时。 2.确定要点: (1)

21、这个app的名称; (2)这个app解决什么问题; (3)这个app应有的具体功能。 参考范文参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam, Thanks for designing an app for English writing. Id like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”? Many of us have difficulty in writing. We dont know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hop

22、e it can solve these problems. Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct m

23、istakes and offer suggestions. I hope my advice is worth taking. Yours, Li Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难;and so on等等;correct mistakes纠错;offer suggestions提供建议 2.出彩结构 The more we read, the better we write.(本句用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构,表示“越,就越 ”) Second, the app should have an onli

24、ne course so that we can develop our writing skills. (so that引导目的状 语从句) Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions. (who引导定语从句,修饰 先行词an e-teacher) Writing 6(2018无锡) 假设你名叫张华,是“2018无锡马拉松”组委会的一名工作人员。近日,对外联络部转发给你一位牙买加 选手的电子邮件,并附上了组委会的处理意见。请根据邮件内容及处理意见给他回复。 Dear si

25、r/madam, Im Alfred from Jamaica. I took part in 2018 Wuxi Marathon on March 25 and I got a silver medal. I didnt re- alize you had got my name wrong until I showed the medal to my friends. My family name is Morrison, with double r. However, theres only one ron the medal. How could this happen?!-( Yo

26、urs sincerely, Alfred MoRRison 处理意见: 1.重制奖牌,6月25日前寄出; 2.提供一张免费机票作为补偿(compensation),两年内可从世界任意地点飞往上海; 3.旧奖牌须收回。 注意事项: 1.邮件内容须根据处理意见自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境; 2.词数在80个左右,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Morrison, It is true that we have got your name wrong. I am sorry for making such a mistake. Yours sincerely, Zhang H

27、ua 答案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.审题: 这是一篇回信类作文。邮件需明确处理意见,语言需符合作者身份。 2.确定要点: (1)表达歉意。 (2)处理意见: 制作一块新奖牌; 6月25日前寄出; 补偿一张免费机票,两年内可以从任意地点飞往上海; 旧奖牌收回。 (3)保持联系,表达祝愿。 参考范文参考范文 Dear Morrison, It is true that we have got your name wrong. I am sorry for making such a mistake. We have decided to make a new medal for you afte

28、r discussing it. It will be sent to you before June 25. Mean- while, we will offer you a free air ticket as compensation. You can fly to Shanghai from anywhere over the world within two years. But the old medal must be taken back. If you have anything else, please contact us any- time. Thank you for

29、 supporting our work and wish you a good trip! Yours sincerely, Zhang Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 meanwhile adv.同时;from anywhere over the world从世界的任何地方;contact sb.联系某人 2.出彩结构 We have decided to make a new medal for you after discussing it.(句子有两个非谓语动词作宾语的结构:de- cide to do和after doing) To: From: Subject:Schoo

30、l life Writing 7(2017苏州) 假定你是苏华,你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解你初中三年来在学习和生 活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下面的邮件,根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。 Dear Su Hua, Glad to hear youre graduating from junior high. Im interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things? What

31、 do you like best about your school life? Whats the biggest problem as a junior student? Who has helped you most? And why? Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not? I look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, David 注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数; 2.回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺; 3.文中不得提及真实的

32、人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear David, Thank you so much for your email. Im very happy to tell you about my school life. How about your school life? Write to me soon. Best wishes, Su Hua 答案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.审题: 本文属于书信类作文。以第二人称为主,主体时态为一般现在时。 2.确定要点: (1)What do you like best about your school life? 写最喜欢学校生活的哪一部分,并说出理由。

33、(2)Whats the biggest problem as a junior student? 学习或生活中最大的问题是什么。 (3)Who has helped you most? And why? 对你影响最深的人,并举例说明。 (4)Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not? 表达自己对学校生活的看法,并说出理由。 参考范文参考范文 Dear David, Thank you so much for your email. Im very happy to tell you about my school life. I like t

34、he Football Club best because Ive made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, its an excel- lent chance to learn team spirit. However, Ive also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance be- tween my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I am in gre

35、at need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high. All in all, I enjoy my school life because its colourful and meaningful. How about your school life? Write to me soon. Best wishes, Su Hua 精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇 quite a few许多;moreover adv.而且;how

36、ever adv.但是;achieve a balance取得平衡;all in all总的说来 2.出彩结构 Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high.(whenever引导时间状语从句,so连接并列分句,who引导定语从句) Writing 8(2016镇江) 假如你是阳光中学校报英语专栏的小记者,上周日参加了学校为迎接世界环境日组织的远足活动,请 你给校报写一篇报道。 活

37、动情况 活动地点 北海公园 参与人员 七年级全体师生 活动内容 上午:环保(environmental protec- tion)演讲比赛 下午:自由活动(唱歌、游戏、 放风筝) 活动评价 要求: 1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,并适当发挥。 2.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 3.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Last Sunday was a sunny day. Our school organized a hiking to greet World Environment Day. 答案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.

38、审题: 本文为应用文中的新闻报道。以第一人称为主,主体时态为一般过去时,对活动评价时用现在时。 2.确定要点: (1)活动情况: 活动地点:北海公园; 参与人员:七年级全体师生; 活动内容: 上午:环保演讲比赛; 下午:自由活动,如:唱歌、游戏、放风筝等。 (2)活动评价:考生自拟。 参考范文参考范文 Last Sunday was a sunny day. Our school organized a hiking to greet World Environment Day.All the Grade 7 students and teachers took part in the act

39、ivity in Beihai Park. In the morning, we had a speech competition on environmental protection.The speakers talked a lot about pro- tecting the environment, like saving water and reducing air pollution.In the afternoon, we did what we like.We sang and played games together. Some of us enjoyed flying

40、kites. Some volunteered to pick up rubbish in the park. It was a meaningful and exciting day.Weve realized its our duty to help protect the environment.We had a lot of fun the whole day.I hope more activities like this will be organized in our school. 题组二 图画类作文 (2019徐州) 假设你是阳光中学九年级学生李平。你的英国笔友Henry向你

41、请教成语“守株待兔”。请你给他写一封 邮件, 内容包括: (1)描述故事; (2)概括寓意。 注意: (1)词数90左右。 (2)邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 右图供参考。参考词汇:野兔hare 树桩 tree stump 答案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.审题: 本文为记叙文,但要以书信类形式呈现。以第三人称为主,主体时态为一般过去时。 2.确定要点: (1)书信抬头:收信人:Henry; (2)叙述守株待兔这一故事发生的背景、起因和过程; (3)概括故事寓意:心存侥幸坐等意外收获而不主动努力是不可取的; (4)书信结尾:写信人:Li Ping。 参考范文参考范文 Dear Henry

42、, Im glad to tell you the story of Wait for Windfalls. In ancient China, there was a farmer. Though he worked on his farm, his harvests could only support his own life. The farmer wanted to change his life, but he was too lazy to work hard every day. One day, while the farmer was working on the farm

43、, a hare ran so fast that it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer was very happy to take the hare home and cooked a delicious meal. From then on, he didnt work any more. He waited near the tree stump for hares day after day until he was dying. Also, the crops in the field all died because

44、 of lack of care. This story tells us we should not always depend on good luck. The past experience doesnt always work. Happy life comes from hard work. Yours, Li Ping B组 20162020年全国中考题组 题组一 提示类作文 Writing 1(2020湖北武汉,七) Topic Today ABC English校园版邀你投稿! My English Study Plan 假如你是李明,打算向ABC English投稿,谈你的

45、英语学习计划。请根据以下内容提示用英语完成稿 件。 内容要点如下: 1.时常阅读,培养良好语感; 2.看英文影片,了解西方文化; 3.坚持写英文日记,提高写作技巧; 4.向他人学习,改进学习方法; 5.补充一两点个人想法。 注意: 1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 2.词数:6080; 3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译; 4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:develop v.培养 sense n.感觉 Western adj.西方的 My English Study Plan I will put more time and energy into English study. 答

46、案答案 写作提示写作提示 1.人称:第一人称为主。 2.时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。 3.要点:(1)时常阅读,培养良好语感;(2)看英文影片,了解西方文化;(3)坚持写英文日记,提高写作技巧;(4)向 他人学习,改进学习方法;(5)补充一两点个人想法。 参考范文参考范文 My English Study Plan I will put more time and energy into English study. First, I will read regularly and develop a good sense of lan- guage. Second, I plan to w

47、atch some English movies to know more about Western culture. Third, I will keep di- aries in English. I think it will help improve my writing skills. Fourth, to improve my learning methods, I will discuss how to learn English well with my friends and learn from them. Last but not least, I plan to join an Eng- lish club to practice my spoken English. No pain, no