应用文练习写作之描述旅行情况的短文 讲义-2025届高三英语一轮复习写作专题.docx

1、应用文练习写作之描述旅行情况的短文任务呈现上周末，你和留学生好友Eric去哈尔滨旅行。请你以“Our trip to Harbin”为题给你校英语刊物写一篇短文，描述你们的旅行情况。要点包括：1. 旅行情况：参观了哈尔滨冰雪大世界、中央大街，品尝了当地美食、买了纪念品等；2. 此次旅行的收获或感受等。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：哈尔滨冰雪大世界 Harbin Ice-Snow World哈尔滨中央大街 Harbin Central Avenue写作步骤一、任务分析1. 审题：确定文章的人称和时态根据写作任务可知，你和留学生好友Eric去哈尔滨旅行

2、，你需要写一篇文章来描述你们在哈尔滨的旅行情况，故人称以第一人称为主；时态以一般过去时为主。2. 确定文章结构此记叙文的正文可以分为三段。第一段：介绍旅行的背景；第二段：描述旅行情况；第三段：描述旅行收获或感受。二、词语、句子罗列1. 词语(1) 旅行愉快 have a nice trip (2) 以开始 start with (3) 各种各样的 all kinds of (4) 给某人留下深刻印象 leave a deep impression on sb. (5) 令某人兴奋的是 to ones excitement(6) 拍照 take pictures/photos (7) 当地特色美

3、食 food with local characteristics(8) 玩得很开心 have great fun(9) 期待 look forward to 2. 句子(1) 上周末，我和Eric一起去哈尔滨旅行。我们的旅行很愉快。Last weekend, Eric and I traveled to Harbin together. We had a nice trip. (2) 我们在哈尔滨的第一天始于哈尔滨冰雪大世界，结束于哈尔滨冰雪大世界，在那里我们欣赏了各种各样的冰雕。Our first day started with and ended at Harbin Ice-Snow

4、World, where we enjoyed all kinds of ice sculptures.(3) 第二天，我们去了哈尔滨中央大街，在那里我们拍了很多美丽的照片。The next day we went to Harbin Central Avenue, where we took lots of beautiful pictures.(4) 最后，我们品尝了当地特色美食，还买了特别的纪念品。At last, we tasted food with local characteristics and bought special souvenirs.(5) 这是我第一次和朋友出去旅

5、行。虽然天气很冷，但我们玩得很开心。期待下一次旅行。It was the first time that I had traveled with my friend. Though it was cold, we had great fun. I am looking forward to the next trip.三、范文（扩充要点，连句成文）Our trip to HarbinLast weekend, Eric and I traveled to Harbin together. We had a nice trip.Our first day started with and end

6、ed at Harbin Ice-Snow World, where we enjoyed all kinds of ice sculptures. Then we watched wonderful performances given on the ice, which left a deep impression on us. To our excitement, we played some games on the ice. The next day we went to Harbin Central Avenue, where we took lots of beautiful p

7、ictures. At last, we tasted food with local characteristics and bought special souvenirs. It was the first time that I had traveled with my friend. Though it was cold, we had great fun. I am looking forward to the next trip.知识储备记叙文常用句式记叙文开头段I had a holiday, so I determined to relax by Last weekend,

8、my friend and I paid a visit to ,which is famous for Yesterday, a strange thing happened to , who works as a(n) Upon our arrival, we were warmly welcomed by there. 记叙文主体段At first I did feel a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down. What amused/attracted us most was The performance, which lasted a

9、bout two hours, was very wonderful. Even if it was raining, they kept working. They didnt have a rest until all the work was done. After that, we went to , where we took some photos. To record our activity/trip, we took some photos. He had left before I could thank him.记叙文结尾段That/It was the first/se

10、cond time that With all the work done, we left the farm, feeling proud and satisfied. Though we did the activity for a short time, we gained/learned a lot.It is such a meaningful activity that I want to take part in it again.Not only did it build up our bodies, but it also strengthened our determination to overcome difficulties.Not only did it reduce my stress from heavy homework, but it also promoted the friendship between us.