初中英语外研版七年级下册Module 12写作指导（介绍一位中国著名的作曲家）.doc

1、七年级英语下册Module12写作指导【写作目标】用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位中国著名的作曲家。【写作任务】某公众号就“中国著名的作曲家”这个话题征集稿件。你对该话题感兴趣，打算介绍作曲家冼星海。请用英语写一篇短文并向该公众号投稿。【指点迷津】本次写作任务要求用英语写一篇短文介绍中国著名的作曲家冼星海，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：首先对该作曲家作简要评价，然后具体介绍该作曲家的主要经历及主要成就，最后总结该作曲家对后世的影响。(2) 人称：第三人称。(3) 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时。(4) 文体：记叙文（人物传记）。【谋篇布局】The famous Chinese composer Xia

2、n Xinghai人物评价(1) 冼星海是中国伟大的古典音乐和传统音乐作曲家之一。他被称为“人民音乐家”。Xian Xinghai is one of the great composers of _ _ _ _in China. He is called the“Peoples Musician”.人物主要经历及主要成就(2) 冼星海于1905年出生于中国澳门。Xian Xinghai _ _ _ Macao, China in 1905.(3) 冼星海使用中国传统音乐写歌。他的歌曲激励人们抗击侵略者。Xian Xinghai used traditional Chinese music t

3、o _ _. His songsinspired people to fight against invaders.(4) 冼星海于1939年创作黄河大合唱，后因它而出名。Xian Xinghai wroteThe Yellow Riverin 1939 and he _ _ _ itlater.冼星海于1945年英年早逝。Xian Xinghai died young in 1945.影响(5) 冼星海的许多歌曲今天仍然受欢迎。Many of Xian Xinghais songs are still _ today.【巧衔接】在写人物传记时，要注意选择恰当的时态。在进行人物评价及介绍影响时

4、，用一般现在时来表示客观事实；在叙述人物的主要经历及主要成就时，用一般过去时来讲述过去发生的事情。这样，文章显得更有逻辑性。【连句成文】同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔完成这篇短文吧！The famous Chinese composerXian Xinghai 【收藏夹】介绍音乐类型及喜欢音乐的原因音乐类型pop music, rock and roll / rock music,jazz(爵士乐),hiphop(嘻哈音乐),R&B(节奏布鲁斯),folk music(民间音乐),electronic music(电子音乐), country music, light music喜欢

5、的原因 beautiful, wonderful, relaxing, exciting,powerful(有力量的),inspiring(鼓舞人心的) . make sb. happy / relaxed / excited, help sb. relax, cheer sb.up, inspire sb. to move on, give sb. hope, tell sb. never togive up(放弃), inspire sb. to face difficultiesbravely(勇敢地) .【小试身手】假如你是王阳，你想向你的英国笔友 David 介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型及

6、喜欢的原因。请用英语给 David写一封电子邮件告诉他。Dear David,How is everything going? Thats all. Would you like to tell me about your favourite music?Yours,Wang Yang【答案】谋篇布局(1) classical and traditional music(2) was born in (3) write songs(4) was famous for (5) popular连句成文The famous Chinese composer Xian XinghaiXian Xing

7、haiisone of the great composers ofclassical and traditional music in China. Heiscalled the“Peoples Musician”.Xian Xinghaiwasborn in Macao, China in1905. Heusedtraditional Chinese music to writesongs. His songsinspiredpeople to fight againstinvaders. HewroteThe Yellow Riverin 1939 andhewasfamous for

8、it later. Hediedyoung in 1945.Many of Xian Xinghais songsarestillpopular today.小试身手One possible version:Dear David,How is everything going?Do you like music? Ilike music. My favourite music is rock music.When I am in trouble, I like to listen to it. Itspowerful and inspiring. It can always inspire meto face difficulties bravely. One of my favouriterock songs isWe Will Rock You. Its old but reallygreat. I listen to it every night.Thats all. Would you like to tell me about yourfavourite music?Yours,Wang Yang3