高中英语作文指导 特殊句式 ppt课件-2024年高考语文复习.pptx

1、 高三一轮复习课高三一轮复习课特殊句式特殊句式/高频句式在写作中的运用高频句式在写作中的运用Activity 1.Lead-in_ China _ helped to build the Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail,the first high-speed rail in Southeast Asia.It wasthat _ more than eight years _ the Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail was built.It tookbefore So _that hundres of thousands of

2、people went to try it as soon as it opened.excited were Indonesians_ the Jakarta-Bandung HSR,they_about four hours traveling from Jakarta to Bandung.Without would have spent _ the“Belt and Road Initiative”put forward,more and more“made in China”is going to the world.With1.It was China that helped to

3、 build the Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail,the first high-speed rail in Southeast Asia.2.It took more than eight years before the Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail was built.3.So excited are Indonesians that hundres of thousands of people went to try it as son as it opend.4.Without the Jakarta-Bandung

4、 HSR,they would spend about four hours traveling from Jakarta to Bandun.5.With the“Belt and Road Initiative”put forward,more and more“made in China”is going to the world inversionEmphatic Sentenceitsubjunctive moodwith 写作写作评分标准评分标准 应用文第五档应用文第五档(13-15分分)1.写出全部合理的内容要点。2.使用多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构的句子多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构

5、的句子，表达流畅，语言很少错误且完全不影响理解。读后续写读后续写第五档第五档(21-25分分)1.创造了丰富合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整与原文情境融洽度高。2.使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解有效地使用了语句间的衔接手段。3.全文结构清晰，意义连贯。I.运用强调句，突出重点运用强调句，突出重点 His brave heart and strong faith made something unusual happen finally.升级：_ made something unusual happen finally.基本结构

6、：运用强调句可以加强语气，突出所表达的情感态度或者突出某些人物或事件。It was his brave heart and strong faith thatit is/was+强调部分强调部分+who/that+其它其它1.然而，正是我妈妈的鼓舞使我重新获得自己的勇气来继续炒蛋。However,_ made me regain my courage to continue to fry theeggs.（2023全国乙卷）2.正是因为约翰的好主意和他的执行方式，才使得伯纳德的生活发生了很大的变化。_Johns bright idea and the way he carried out th

7、at made agreat difference in Bernards life.(2020新高考I卷)It was because of it was my mothers inspiration that过了多久才要过多久才会自从有多久了该做了某人第一次/第二次做碰巧/似乎做某人突然想到如果会感激认为理所当然当提及II.运用运用“it”句型，优化表达句型，优化表达It took/was+时间+before（did）it will take/be+时间+before(do)it is/has been+时间+since(did)it is(high)time that（should do

8、/did）it is/was the first/second time that（have done/had done）it happens/appears/seems that it dawned on/occurred to/hit/struck sb.that sb.would appreciate it ifsb.take it for granted thatwhen it comes to sth 1.Facing the stern reality,I think its high time that we _(stop)it.2.It was not long _ a per

9、fect breakfast was well done,giving off a nice smell.(2021新高考I)3._(我突然意识到）a small action of kindness could make a difference to a harmonious and mutually trustworthy world between humans and animals.(2023浙江卷)4._（当提及）the historical figure I admire most,the first that comes to my mind is Li Shizhen,an

10、 outstanding medical scientist living in Ming Dynasty.(2023全国甲卷)5.如果你能考虑我的建议我会很感激。(2023新课标I）When it comes toId appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.It suddenly occurred to me thatbeforestopped/should stop III.运用倒装句，以示强调运用倒装句，以示强调1.否定副词位于句首（never、seldom、little）2.so/such that3.

11、hardly when，no sooner than（一就）4.only+状语/状语从句位于句首5.not onlybut also 6.as引导让步状语从句我们一到了农场就开始种树。We got to the farm and then started to plant trees.升级:Hardly _we started to plant trees.恰当地使用倒装句能够使文章句式更丰富，重点恰当地使用倒装句能够使文章句式更丰富，重点更鲜明。更鲜明。had we got to the farm when 1.你不仅仅帮我提高了英语，还给了我学习的信心。_,but you also gav

12、e me more confidence in learning.(2019浙江卷）2.母亲感动得双眸满是喜悦的泪水。_ her eyes were shining with tears of great joy.(2021新高考I卷)Not only did you help improve my EnglishSo moved was mother thatIV.运用虚拟语气，传递情感运用虚拟语气，传递情感 If从句从句 主句主句过去现在将来had done did/weredid/wereshould dowere to dowould/should/might/could have d

13、onewould/should/might/could dowould/should/might/could do你无私的帮助让我在英语方面取得了如此大的进步。Your selfless assistance made me achieve such great progress in English.升级：_,I couldnt have achieved such great progress in English.虚拟语气可以用来传递强烈的情感，表达说虚拟语气可以用来传递强烈的情感，表达说话人的心理和真实感受。话人的心理和真实感受。Had it not been for/without

14、your selfless assistance 2.回家的路上，我的姐姐提醒我说要不是我的老师的鼓励，我的英语写作就不会取得这么大的进步。On the way,my older sister reminded me that _ _in writing in English.（2023新课标I卷）1.If I _(not quarrel)with Tom and gone into theforest,I _(not be)trapped in the awful place now!Jane was filled with regret and anxiety and gradually

15、fell asleep with tears in her eyes.(2016浙江卷）had not quarreledwouldnt bewithout my teachers encouragement I wouldnt have made much progressV.运用运用With 复合结构，提升表达复合结构，提升表达 Tears of gratitude rolled down his cheeks.Peter said thankfully,Youve saved me today.I couldntthank you enough.升级：_,Peter said thank

16、fully,Youve saved me today.Icouldnt thank you enough.运用with复合结构对简单句进行整合，使句子更加简洁、凝练，表达更高级。with+o.(n/pron)+o.c.(adj/adv/prep介词短语/v-ing/v-ed/to do)With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks 1.随着火的加热，滚烫的锅里突然冒出滚烫的油，把我吓坏了。_(heat),the boiling oil suddenly splashed out of the hot pan,which scared me al

17、ot.（2023全国乙卷）2.一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新业务。_,Bernard started out on hisnew business.(2020新高考I卷）With the fire heatingWith everything ready写好英语写好英语作文作文多样且恰当的词汇合理丰富的内容多样语法结构的句子适当的连接词强调句倒装句虚拟语气“it”相关句型“with”复合结构独立主格结构/非谓语动词各种从句Summary(2022全国甲)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.词数10

18、0左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Our Oceans,Our ResponsibilityJune 8th was officially named by the UN in2009 as World Oceans Day.Activity 3:Practice Why should we protect the ocean?The reason is that it provides various benefits.To begin with,the sea is asignificant source of food.随着世界人口的增长（with)，we are relying

19、on the ocean more and more for survival.In addition,海洋不仅仅产生大量的氧气 ,but it also absorbs much carbon dioxide,which remarkably contributes to regulating the Earths climate.Also,海洋也是大量医药产品的来源（强调句）,including ingredients that help fight cancer and heart disease.However,the sea is being damaged.它虽然巨大（as),it

20、 is more sensitive than we think.Thus,是我们采取有效措施保护它的时候了（it）。Otherwise,future generations will not forgive us.With the world population growingnot only does the ocean produce much oxygenit is the ocean that vast amounts of medicinal products come from Huge as it isit is high time that we took effectiv

21、e measures to protect it.The scerets to reducing pressure 最近，由于考试临近，学生压力逐渐增大，你的英语老师希望大家在课上分享自己最喜欢的放松方式，请你写一篇短文，分享自己的减压秘籍。内容包括：1.减压做法；2.效果介绍。注意：1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。self-evaluationQuestionsYes No SuggestionsDo you organize the article logically and frequently?Do you use any special sentence par

22、tens?Do you make your expressions vivid and colorful?I.假定你是Cindy,一位印尼博主，你的中国朋友李华写信询问你乘坐雅万地铁的感受，你写信回复,内容包括：1.乘坐雅万高铁的感受。2.雅万高铁的意义。注意：1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。Possible sample:Im more than glad to hear from you.Now Im writing to share with you my feelings about Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail.Last sun

23、day I had an opportunity to ride Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail.Firstly,_.(是它的现代设计给我留下了深刻印象）Secondly,_(它很快我只花了40分钟）traveling from Jajarta to Bandung,without which it _(take)more than 3 hours to travel between two cities.Last but not least,it was very comfortable._(有了宽敞的座位和大大的窗户）on the train,I could

24、 enjoy beautiful scenery along the way.Overall,Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail is a significant project._(它不仅仅可以提高交通）but also it will boost tourism and stimulate economic growth.it was the modern design that left a deep impression on meso fast was it that I spent only 40 minuteswould have takenwith

25、spacious seats and large windows Not only can it improve our transportation possible sample:Im more than glad to hear from you.Now Im writing to share with you my feelings about Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail.Last sunday I have an opportunity to ride Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail.Firstly,it was t

26、he modern design that left a deep impression on me.Secondly,so fast was it that I spend only 40 minutes traveling from Jajarta to Bandung,without which it would have taken more than 3 hours to travel between two cities.Last but not least,it was very comfortable.with spacious seats and large windows

27、on the train,I could enjoy beautiful scenery along the way.Overall,Jajarta-Bandung high-speed Rail is a significant project.Not only can it improve our transportation but also it will boost tourism and stimulate economic growth.With bitter smile,Lily decided to join her family._(她一走近）her family when

28、 Jake,her little brother invited her to play with the sand together.Having hesitated for a moment,she began to join him.They scooped up sand,poured it onto the ground and created all kinds of shapes randomly._.(这是她第一次漫无目的的玩沙).with sand _(slip)through her figures and her parents _(smile)at them,a wav

29、e of happiness and relaxation flooded over her.At that moment _（她突然明白）what matters in life is not to drive for perfection but to enjoy the process.Hardly had she approachedIt was the first time that she had played with sand aimlesslyslippingsmilingit dawned on her that With bitter smile,Lily decided

30、 to join her family.Hardly had she approached her family when Jake,her little brother invited her to play with the sand together.Having hesitated for a moment,she began to join him.They scooped up sand,poured it onto the ground and created all kinds of shapes randomly.It was the first time that she had played with sand aimlessly.with sand slipping through her figures and her parents smiling at them,a wave of happiness and relaxation flooded over her.At that moment it dawned on her that what matters in life is not to drive for perfection but to enjoy the progress.