初中英语人教新目标七年级下册Unit 3写作指导.doc

1、七年级英语下册Unit3写作指导【写作目标】用英语介绍他人和自己的出行情况。【写作任务】假如你是某双语学校的周琳，为了了解同学们乘坐校车的需求，英语老师兼班主任要求大家填写一份关于上学出行情况的调查问卷，并于下周英语口语课上两人一组汇报调查结果。你和Laura 一组，请你代表你们组写一篇英语短文，为汇报做准备。【指点迷津】根据调查问卷，汇报小组成员上学出行的相关情况和对校车的需求这类实用性文体写作要点如下：(1) 内容要素：从家到学校的距离、选择的出行方式、用时情况、出行的整体感受和对校车的需求，即问卷上的1-5。(2) 人称：汇报 Laura 的情况用第三人称，汇报自己的情况用第一、三人称。

2、(3) 时态：一般现在时。【谋篇布局】【巧衔接】在介绍上学的出行方式时，可以通过词汇纽带(如交通方式的不同表达)来使上下文连贯，这体现了语义搭配的衔接方式。在 从介绍Laura的情况过渡到介绍“我”的情况时，可用however (然而)来衔接前后段落，使文章过渡自然，衔接紧密。【连句成文】同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔完成汇报吧！【收藏夹】关于出行情况及感受的表达集锦出行方式及用时The Browns enjoy travelingby sea.Brown一家喜欢乘船旅行。The delivery workersuse electric bikesto deliver food.送餐

3、员用电动自行车送餐。You need totake Subway Line 2to arrive at the market.你需要乘地铁二号线到达市场。The flightfrom Shanghai to Guangzhoutakesabout two hours.从上海到广州的航班大约需要两小时。We willspendaround fifteen minutes getting there.我们将花大约十五分钟时间到达那里。表达感受Shared bikesprovide a lot of convenience.共享单车提供了很多便利。Iam impressed bythe speed

4、of the high-speed train.高铁的速度令我印象深刻。Bus travel to Lanzhou iscomfortable and cheap.乘大巴去兰州旅行既舒适又便宜。High-speed trainis the first choicefor my family to travel.高铁是我们家出行的首选。Flying on a plane is great! Ilove looking out of thewindow and seeing everything below from the sky.坐飞机真是太棒了！我喜欢透过窗户从天空俯瞰一切。【小试身手】假期

5、出行时，你和家人会选择哪种方式呢？本期英语角将围绕这一话题进行交流。请你根据以下提示信息，并结合自己的实际情况，用英语写一篇短文，为此次交流做准备。答案：【谋篇布局】(1) lives not far from / doesnt live far from(2) is two kilometers from school(3) rides a / the / her bike to school / goes toschool by bike every day; only takes her tenminutes(4) is relaxing for her to ride a / the

6、/ her bike toschool / go to school by bike(5) doesnt need to go to school by school bus /take the school bus to school(7) about six kilometers from my home to school(8) by car; takes fifteen minutes(9) take the subway to school / go to school bysubway; takes me thirty minutes(10) long and boring【连句成

7、文】Hello, everyone.Here are the questionnaireresults of our group.Laura lives not far from school.Her home istwo kilometers from school.Sherides her biketoschool every day.It only takes her ten minutes.Itis relaxing for her to go to schoolby bike.SoLaura doesnt need totake the school bustoschool.Howe

8、ver, my home is a little far fromschool.It is about six kilometers from my home toschool.Usually, my father takes me to schoolbycar.The car ride takes fifteen minutes.SometimesItake the subwayto school.It takes me thirtyminutes.My trip to school is long and boring.Ihope to take the school bus to sch

9、ool.Thats all.Thanks!【小试身手】One possible version:Every year, my family and I like to go onvacation to Chengdu.Usually, the high-speed train is the firstchoice for my family.It usually takes us aboutfour hours to get there from Xian.The train rideis easy and cheap.Sometimeswe get there byplane and it takes about two hours.Flying on aplane is also great.We like the two ways becauseboth of them make the trip enjoyable andcomfortable.In short, its fun to go to Chengdu either byhigh-speed train or by plane on vacation.3