初中英语人教新目标七年级下册Unit 5写作指导.doc

1、七年级英语下册Unit5写作指导【写作目标】用英语介绍动物。【写作任务】假如今天你参观北京动物园后，在朋友圈发了一张明星大熊猫的照片，你的澳大利亚好友Betty 看到后给你发微信说她想了解更多关于照片中这只明星大熊猫的信息。请你写一段话回复她。【指点迷津】回复微信，属于应用文，回复的主要内容是介绍明星大熊猫，属于说明文，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容要素：介绍其名字、出生地、现居住地、年龄、生日、外貌、性格、生活习性等。(2) 人称：以第三人称为主。(3) 时态：一般现在时。【谋篇布局】明星大熊猫萌兰【巧衔接】文章围绕北京动物园的明星大熊猫展开介绍，首次提及时出现 MengLan，下文中再次提及

2、时，可以用 he来指代 Meng Lan。一方面，使用代词可以使文章简洁，避免重复提到Meng Lan的名字；另一方面，将Meng Lan拟人化，更容易让读者对Meng Lan产生一种亲近感。在描述萌兰的外貌时，先整体描述“看起来很可爱”，然后进行细节描写，如“黑白相间”、“有着圆圆的脑袋和身体”。同样，在介绍萌兰的性格时，先整体描述他“很活泼”，然后介绍他喜欢的几项活动。这种整体描述和细节描写相结合的方法，可使文本更加生动，同时引发读者的情感共鸣。【连句成文】同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔回复Betty的微信吧！【收藏夹】澳大利亚的明星动物考拉【小试身手】假如今天的英语作业是为一段

3、介绍考拉的视频配音。请你用第一人称的口吻写一篇英语短文，为视频配音做准备。答案：【谋篇布局】(1) The name of the star panda(2) many / lots of / a lot of people call him(3) comes / is from(4) lives in Beijing Zoo(5) is eight (years old); is on July 4th(6) looks very cute(7) is black and white(9) likes playing and eating with family andfriends(10)

4、 are his favorite food(s)【连句成文】The name of the star panda isMeng Lan.Heis doing kung fu in the photo, so many people callhim“Kung Fu Panda”.Hecomes fromSichuan,China.Nowhelives in Beijing Zoo.Heis eightyears old.His birthday is on July 4th.He looksvery cute.He is black and whiteandhas around head an

5、d body.He is very lively.Helikesclimbing treesand likesplayingand eatingwithfamily and friends.Bamboo and apples are hisfavorite foods.Thats something about MengLan.Im glad that you like him.【小试身手】One possible version:Hi, friends! Im a koala, a star fromAustralia.I wear a grey coat and have round ea

6、rs.Do I look cute? Im shy and kind of lazy.I love tosleep usually for about twenty hours a day.Wheredo I sleep? In eucalyptus trees in forests.And Ilove eating eucalyptus leaves.But you knowwhat? These days I dont feel very happy.Imlosing my home because people cut too manytrees.May 3rd is a big day for meInternationalWild Koala Day.My dear friends, please take careof my home and us.3