读后续写评讲（ppt课件）-2023新北师大版（2019）《高中英语》选择性必修第二册.pptx

1、Continuation WritingHow to Complete a StoryKnowledge objective:Learn some words and expressions about sportsman.Ability objective:Know the steps of continuation writing.Emotion objective:Develop a humble and modest attitude towards learning.Learning Objectives:Works showCommon errors1、书写书写潦草潦草，卷面，卷面

2、涂改涂改；2、上下文的上下文的连贯性连贯性差差；3、错词错句多，好词好句错词错句多，好词好句少；少；4、没有没有丰富和生动的细节丰富和生动的细节推动情节推动情节的的发展；发展；5、与所给短文及段落开头语的与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度衔接程度差差；Different levels第五档：21分-25分第四档：16分-20分第三档：11分-15分第二档：6分-10分第一档：1分-5分评分标准第五档（21-25分）第四档（16-20分）作文分档标准及解读作文分档标准及解读 创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全

3、不影响理解。创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性,续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高。使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。作文分档标准及解读作文分档标准及解读 创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关。使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文情境有一定程度脱节。未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。第三档（11-15分）第二档（6-10分）作文分档标准及解读作文分档标准及解读 内

4、容或逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文,续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节。几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判;所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。未作答。0分第一档（1-5分）Principles of continuation writing七三三法则-七个“不”1.不增加人物2.不增加旁支情节3.不用过多对话4.不用负能量结局5.不在文末设置悬念6.不偏离原文主题7.不违背逻辑常理七三三法则-三个原则原文一致原则曲折性原则正能量原则七三三法则-三步骤读思写Pri

5、nciples of continuation writing原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，语言表达风格一致。正能量原则故事内容一点要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。Steps for continuation writingRead for the characters,the words and feelings.Predict the proper plots in each paragraph.Read for the characters,the words and feelings.Kuppan wa

6、s a good badminton player,His rise within the ranks of the badminton players of the school was impressive but unusual.One day he was nothing,the next he was a member of the school team.In the School Championships,he sprang a surprise by knocking out the top seed,Richard Lee,in the semi-final.In the

7、final,he easily beat another competitor Abdul Rauf by 15-3 and 15-10.He was the School Champion.It was unbelievable.The previous year he did not even get past the first round.This year he was the champion.Success got into his head.He began to think he was really good.In fact,he arrogantly(微慢地)told R

8、ichard Lee and the others that they would never beat him again.He claimed he was simply too good for them,in a league of his own.Well,it was true that Kuppan was a good and skillful player.He had natural ability and talent.So he picked up the game very quickly and soon became the best.However,he did

9、 not realize that nobody can remain at the top all the time.What goes up must certainly come down.Kuppan thought he could stay up indefinitely.The other players were annoyed by Kuppans declaration.They resolved to train harder to beat the guy who had insulted(辱)them.They even trained on their own ev

10、ery day while Kuppan wandered around talking with pride about his success.The State Individual Championships were coming up.So was the Interschool Tournament.The schools coach worked hard to improve the school players.All of them trained hard,except Kuppan.He would miss training or perform halfheart

11、edly.He was more interested in entertaining the admirers that had gathered around him.He thought he was too strong to be defeated.Read for the characters,the words and feelings.Kuppan was a good badminton player,His rise within the ranks of the badminton players of the school was impressive but unus

12、ual.One day he was nothing,the next he was a member of the school team.In the School Championships,he sprang a surprise by knocking out the top seed,Richard Lee,in the semi-final.In the final,he easily beat another competitor Abdul Rauf by 15-3 and 15-10.He was the School Champion.It was unbelievabl

13、e.The previous year he did not even get past the first round.This year he was the champion.Success got into his head.He began to think he was really good.In fact,he arrogantly(微慢地)told Richard Lee and the others that they would never beat him again.He claimed he was simply too good for them,in a lea

14、gue of his own.Read for the characters,the words and feelings.Well,it was true that Kuppan was a good and skillful player.He had natural ability and talent.So he picked up the game very quickly and soon became the best.However,he did not realize that nobody can remain at the top all the time.What go

15、es up must certainly come down.Kuppan thought he could stay up indefinitely.The other players were annoyed by Kuppans declaration.They resolved to train harder to beat the guy who had insulted(辱)them.They even trained on their own every day while Kuppan wandered around talking with pride about his s

16、uccess.The State Individual Championships were coming up.So was the Interschool Tournament.The schools coach worked hard to improve the school players.All of them trained hard,except Kuppan.He would miss training or perform halfheartedly.He was more interested in entertaining the admirers that had g

17、athered around him.He thought he was too strong to be defeated.Read for the characters,the words and feelings.Predict the proper plots in each paragraph The State Individual Championships reached us in time._Kuppan tried to make a difference in the second round._KuppanIn the first roundPredict the p

18、roper plots in each paragraph his competitorthe endingIn the second roundPredict the proper plots in each paragraph Kuppanhis competitorthe endingPredict the proper plots in each paragraph 1.写好三个衔接句 第一段首句译文：_ 第二段首句译文：_（1）第一段首句后的衔接句：_（2）第一段尾句（必须能和第二段首句合理衔接）：_（3）第二段首句后的衔接句：_2.写好结尾句：结局性：_ 启示性：_州个人锦标赛如期

19、而至，.Kuppan试图在第二轮有所作为Kuppan信心满满地踏进赛场。Kuppan很遗憾地输掉第一轮比赛 Kuppan努力奋力拼搏，努力挽救将输的赛局，但无奈对手太强大。Kuppan输掉比赛。骄兵必败，必须努力刻苦学习。Discuss with your partners,and share your predictions in classPredict the proper plots in each paragraph Paragraph 1:admirerscheerstep intoconfidentlypeacock receive his prize在在仰慕者仰慕者的的欢呼欢呼

20、和呼喊中，库潘像一只骄傲的和呼喊中，库潘像一只骄傲的孔雀孔雀一样一样自信地自信地走进走进球场，仿佛他不是去参加比赛，而是球场，仿佛他不是去参加比赛，而是去领奖去领奖。wordsParagraph 1:他认为自己即将像以前一样轻轻松松击败对手。like before/as usualbeat/defeat/kick outwordsopponent/rival/competitorParagraph 1:但事情并没有如他所愿。他很快就很难得分，因为他的对手技术高超，他几乎没有机会接球。live up ones hopeshad difficulty in doing sthskillful ca

21、tch the ballscorewordsParagraph 1:goalworriedanxious看到对手的得分越来越多，库潘开始看到对手的得分越来越多，库潘开始担心和焦虑担心和焦虑。be beaten上场不到十分钟，他就以3比15的成绩被对手击败了。wordsParagraph 2:他开始更加认真地对待这场比赛。想着他所有的进球技巧和秘诀，他尽他所能在比赛中表现出色。然而，他的竞争对手总是比他做得好得多 take sth seriously.skills and secrets better than him.wordsParagraph 2:库潘满头大汗，热泪盈眶，奋力将对手击倒。但

22、是没用，在第二轮比赛中，他以5:15的比分被击败了。直到那时，库潘别无选择，只能接受他输掉比赛的事实。sweat,full of tears,knock out in vainhave no choice but to do sthwordsParagraph 2:俗话说，骄者必败。从那时起，库潘就下定决心，努力勤奋学习，希望再次成为冠军。pride goes before a fall make up ones mind to do sth,hard and diligently,champion wordsParagraph 1:1.在仰慕者的欢呼和呼喊中，库潘像一只骄傲的孔雀一样自信地走

23、进球场，仿佛他不是去参加比赛，而是去领奖。2.他认为自己即将像以前一样轻轻松松击败对手。但事情并没有如他所愿。他很快就很难得分，因为他的对手技术高超，他几乎没有机会接球。3.看到对手的得分越来越多，库潘开始担心和焦虑。4.上场不到十分钟，他就以3比15的成绩被对手击败了。sentencesParagraph 2:1.他开始更加认真地对待这场比赛。2.想着他所有的得分技巧和秘诀，他尽他所能在比赛中表现出色。3.然而，他的竞争对手总是比他做得好得多。4.库潘满头大汗，热泪盈眶，奋力将对手击倒。5.但是没用，在第二轮比赛中，他以5:15的比分被击败了。6.直到那时，库潘别无选择，只能接受他输掉比赛的

24、事实。7.俗话说，骄者必败。8.从那时起，库潘就下定决心，努力勤奋学习，希望再次成为冠军。sentencesParagraph 1:1.在仰慕者的欢呼和呼喊中，库潘像一只骄傲的孔雀一样自信地走进球场，仿佛他不是去参加比赛，而是去领奖。2.他认为自己即将像以前一样轻轻松松击败对手。但事情并没有如他所愿。他很快就很难得分，因为他的对手技术高超，他几乎没有机会接球。With the admirers cheering and shouting,Kuppan stepped into the court confidently just like a proud peacock as if he wa

25、s not going to compete but to receive his prize.He thought he would beat the opponent like before.But things didnt live up his hopes.He soon had difficulty in scoring because his competitor was so skillful that there was little chance for his to catch the ball.sentencesParagraph 1:3.看到对手的得分越来越多，库潘开始

26、担心和焦虑。4.上场不到十分钟，他就以3比15的成绩被对手击败了。Seeing the goals of his competitor becoing more and more,Kuppan was getting worried and anxious.Within ten minutes on the court,he was beaten by 3-15.sentencesParagraph 2:1.他开始更加认真地对待这场比赛。2.想着他所有的得分技巧和秘诀，他尽他所能在比赛中表现出色。3.然而，他的竞争对手总是比他做得好得多。He began to take this compet

27、ition more seriously.Thinking about all his skills and secrets to get goals,he did what he could to perform the copmetition well.However,his competitor always did much better than him.sentencesParagraph 2:4.库潘满头大汗，热泪盈眶，奋力将对手击倒。5.但是没用，在第二轮比赛中，他以5:15的比分被击败了。6.直到那时，库潘别无选择，只能接受他输掉比赛的事实。Sweating and full

28、 of tears,Kuppan struggled to knock out his rival.But in vain,he was defeated in the second round by 5-15.Until then,Kuppan had no choice but to accept the fact that he had lost the game.sentencesParagraph 2:7.俗话说，骄者必败。8.从那时起，库潘就下定决心，努力勤奋学习，希望再次成为冠军。As the saying goes,pride goes before a fall.Since

29、then,Kuppan has made up his mind to work hard and diligently,hoping to be the champion again.sentencesParagraph 1:The State Individual Championships reached us in time.With the admirers cheering and shouting,Kuppan stepped into the court confidently just like a proud peacock as if he was not going t

30、o compete but to receive his prize.He thought he would beat the opponent like before.But things didnt live up his hopes.He soon had difficulty in scoring because his competitor was so skillful that there was little chance for his to shot.Seeing the goals of his competitor becoing more and more,Kuppa

31、n was getting worried and anxious.Within ten minutes on the court,he was beaten by 3-15.paragraphParagraph 2:Kuppan tried to make a difference in the second round.He began to take this competition more seriously.Thinking of all his skills and secrets to get goals,he did what he could to perform the

32、copmetition well.However,his copetitor always did much better than him.Sweating and full of tears,Kuppan struggled to knock out his rival.But in vain,he was defeated in the second round by 5-15.Until then,Kuppan had no choice but to accept the fact that he had lost the game.As the saying goes,pride goes before a fall.Since then,Kuppan has made up his mind to work hard and diligently,hoping to be the champion again.sentencesSummaryWhat have you learnt from this lesson?Homework1.整理课堂笔记。整理课堂笔记。2.背默读后续写参考答案。背默读后续写参考答案。3.完成六校联考读后续写练习。完成六校联考读后续写练习。