2020中考英语作文：兴趣爱好.doc

1、08 兴趣爱好篇兴趣爱好篇 （一）（一） 假如你是贝贝，你远在澳大利亚的笔友 Andrew 给你写了一封邮件，告诉了你关于他们读书 周的事情，并想了解你的一些情况跟看法请你根据他的提问，回复一封英文邮件 From： AndrewAustralia com To： BeibeiSuzhou com We will have a Reading Week next month Every student should read a book and share it with others Im not sure which book to read I remember you like rea

2、ding very much Here are some questions I want to ask you Can you tell me the reasons why reading is important？ How much time do you spend reading every day？ What kind of book do you like best？ Where do you get your books？ Can you tell me something about the book youve read recently and what you have

3、 learned from the book？ I hope to hear from you soon Yours Andrew 注意：1词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥使全文连贯、通顺 Dear Andrew， Im glad you will have a Reading Week _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope you will find my answers useful to you Write to me any time if you have other questions Best wishes. Beibei 【

4、满分范文满分范文】 Dear Andrew， Im glad you will have a Reading Week （引出话题）I think reading is really important because its really useful 【高分句型一】 （我的观点） It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us relaxed（作用） I usually read for an hour every day I like reading novels best 高分句型二 And I often borrow b

5、ooks from the school library （我的做法）I have just finished a book about Robinson It is a novel about how Robinson successfully survived after spending many years on a little island and finally went back to his family From him， I learned that whatever we met， we should never give up （我朗 读的书籍及给我的启示） I ho

6、pe you will find my answers useful to you Write to me any time if you have other questions（希 望） （二）（二） 为深入贯彻习近平总书记关于弘扬中华优秀传统文化的讲话精神，落实立德树人的根本任务， 2019 年 7 月 15 日定西市教育局与定西市语委办联合举办了首届定西中小学生诗词大会。大会的成 功举办，在定西市再次掀起了“全民读书”的热潮。请以“Grow up with reading”为题，根据以下思维导 图的提示，写一篇英语短文，向中学生导报投稿，谈谈你对阅读的看法，并建议大家多读书， 读好书。

7、 要求: 1. 要点齐全，适当发挥； 2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范； 3. 词数:80-100 词左右； 4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。 参考词汇:身心 body and mind 【满分范文满分范文】 Grow up with reading. Reading plays an important part in our life. First， reading can open up our eyes. The more we read, the more we know about the outside world. Second, readin

8、g can make us cleverer and happier. We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the book. Everyone can become cleverer by reading. However, some students spend most of their time on Internet games instead of reading. As a result, they fall behind others in t

9、heir schoolwork. This is harmful to them. I would like to suggest that all of us should do more reading. Lets grow up with reading! 【解析】 1.题干解读：该题目要求包含图片里的内容，写出阅读的重要作用，建议大家多读书，读好书等。 可以分点写，有条理性。 2.例文点评：例文通过对图片里的内容，写出了阅读的重要作用，建议了大家多读书，读好书等一 一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。 3.高分亮点：词组：plays an important par

10、t；open up；a healthy and happy life；become cleverer；instead of；As a result；fall behind 等； 句型：Reading plays an important part in our life./The more we read, the more we know about the outside world. /We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the book./As a r

11、esult, they fall behind others in their schoolwork. 【点睛】 书面表达： 首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要 用到的表达，例如 plays an important part；open up；a healthy and happy life；become cleverer；instead of；As a result；fall behind 等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之 间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然

12、 流畅，如 however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否 合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 （三）（三） 假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内 容给他回复。词数 80 左右。 To: Lihua 2019 From: Harry 参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺注意事项： 1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Harry, _ _

13、_ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【写作思路写作思路】 此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。 学生可根 据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。 （1）结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词； Dear Li Hua, Im glad to tell you that Ive just won the first place in a robot-making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun. What do you think of robots? Do you

14、want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Harry （2）正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点（如热点科技，对科技创新的兴趣，对生活的 改变，对医疗、救援 的帮助等） ； 写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关 键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边，以尽量规避错误。 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Harry, Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good new

15、s! I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help t

16、hem do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on. Hoping you will make greater progress. Yours, Li Hua （四）（四） 文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。 内容包括： 1. 简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动； 2. 该课外活动给你带来的收获及感受(交朋友;放松自我)。 写作要求： 1. 词数 80 词左

17、右；开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2. 文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful Nowadays after-class activities are becoming more and more important _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作写作思路思路】 这是一篇话题作文，让我们写一篇关于After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful的英文稿件， 并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达 出来。写作需要用第一

18、人称，注意各种时态的交替运用。内容要点包括：简要描述你参加过的一项 课外活动，时态用一般过去时；你参加过的课外活动给你带来的收获和感受，时态以一般现在时为 主和一般将来时为主；最后总结自己的心得体会。 【参考范文参考范文】 After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and spo

19、rts. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club, Ive made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to r

20、elax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future. All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 高分句型一： I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我习惯放学后打排球。 be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事。 高分句型二：And it is also a good wa

21、y to relax myself. 这也是放松自己的好方法。动词不定式to relax myself用作后置定语。 高分句型三：All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 总之，课 外活动使我的生活更加丰富多彩，更有意义。 more colorful and meaningful用作my life的宾语补足语。 （五）（五） 如你是李华，想参加 China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的 2019 年夏令营活动。请给 主办人 Mr. Smith 写一封介绍个人情况的

22、申请邮件。内容包括：1.个人信息与兴趣爱好 2.梦想职业与 个人计划 写作要求；1.词数 90 词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 Dear Mr. Smith, Its my pleasure to introduce myself to you. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【写作思路写作思路】 本文属于申请信，给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个

23、人情况的申请邮件，包含个人信息与兴趣 爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑， 可适当增加内容。 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Mr. Smith, Its my pleasure to introduce myself to you My name is Li HuaI like reading and writingI spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after schoolAnd I have a habit of keeping a dairyI

24、want to be a writer when I grow upSo After knowing your summer camp，I feel very excited because its about dream job experienceIf I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chanceAfter work，I will spend more time making a summary I do hope to join in the activity a

25、nd look forward to your reply Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【名师点评】【名师点评】 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up 以及 If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance 中 if 引导的条件句 用一般现在时，主句用一般将来

26、时，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺， 行文连贯。 （六）（六） 假设你叫李华，你校英语报正在以“我最喜欢的一天”为题，向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据 如下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。 1. 你最喜欢的是星期五； 2. 原因： (1)这天有你最喜欢上的音乐课(从小就喜欢音乐，音乐老师和音乐课很有趣)； (2) 要求： (1)所写内容必须包括以上要点和自行补充要点； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； (3)内容连贯并进行合理拓展； (4)100 词左右；题目已经写好，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Day _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路

27、】 本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我最喜欢的一天”为题，根据所给出的内容提示写一篇英语短 文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称。写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写， 注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、 单词，词汇，句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句 应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 【参考范文参考范文】 My Favorite Day Everyone has their favorite day My name is Li HuaNow let me intro

28、duce my favorite dayMy favorite day is FridayBecause it has my favorite music classI have loved music since childhoodI also like my music teacher Her music class is very interesting Theres a P E class on Fridays I like playing football in PE class I think its good for my health We can also develop f

29、riendship through sports This is also a time which I can spend together with my parentsSo I think this is the best day of the week and I love it best 【点睛】【点睛】 首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可 能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡， 必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅。 （七）（七） 假设你是李华

30、，你的英国笔友 Jack 想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学 陈东介绍给他。内容包括： 年龄与外表 16 岁；高大健壮 兴趣与爱好 喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐；最喜欢的科目是英语 性格与为人 风趣幽默；乐于助人、容易相处 注意： 1. 词数 70 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。 参考词汇： 高大健壮 tall and strong 运动 do sports 听音乐 listen to music 最喜欢的科目 favourite subject 风趣幽默 funny and h

31、umorous 乐于做某事 be ready to do sth. 相处 get on with Dear Jack, How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Im sure youd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Jack, How is everything going? Now

32、 I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you. Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to youHe is a 16-year-old boyHe has round face ，black hair and bright eyesHe is tall and strongHe likes smiling very much（高分句 型一）（要点一， 介绍男同学的外貌及特征 ） He likes doingh sports reading and liste

33、ning to music His favourite subject is English because he thinks it is very interestingHe is humorous and funnyHe is ready to help others and easy to get on with others 【要点二，介绍同学的性格】He likes doing sportsreading and listening to musicHis favourite subject is Englishbecause he thinks it is very intere

34、sting He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities （高分句型二） He likes winter very much， because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating ，making snowman and so on 【要点三， 介绍同学的喜好 】 His dream is becoming an English teacher， because he wants his students to get

35、 good grades 【要点四， 介绍同学的理想 】 Im sure youd like to have such a person as your friendWith my best wishes!（要点五，美好的祝愿） Yours, Li Hua 【名师点评】【名师点评】 高分句型一 He likes smiling very much此句是一般现在时的陈述句运用短语 like doing sth “喜欢做某事“， 短语 very much “非常，很“此句可翻译为“他很喜欢笑“ 注意 like 后加 doing 高分句型二 He also spends much time taki

36、ng part in after-school activities此句是一般现在时的陈述句运用 短语 spend some time （in）doing sth “花时间做某事“短语 take part in “参加“此句可翻译为“他还花大量 时间参加课外活动“ （八）（八） 临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Rainbow 小组的组长 zhangHong,请你为你的组员 Li Ming 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告。 内容包括：1. 他的爱好； 2. 他的优点(两条)； 3. 他的缺点或存在的问题； 4. 你对他的建议(两条)。 要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息，并适当发挥，但不得出现真实班级、姓名等； 3. 词数：不少于 80 词 (所给内容不计入总词数)。 Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow. _ _ _ _ _