2020中考英语作文：传统文化.doc

1、11 传统文化篇传统文化篇 （一）（一） 假如你是李华，来自中国，今年暑假你将参加一个国际夏令营，你需要准备一篇 60 词左右 的英文发言稿， 内容包括你的自我介绍、 中国的一个代表性事物 （如大熊猫） 和一个传统节日 （如 端午节） 。 要求：1文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2可结合实际情况，适当发挥。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分范文满分范文】 Dear friends， Im Li Hua from China Im thirteen I like sports I often play basketball after school And I go to school on fo

2、ot every dayI think its a good way to exercise （高分句型一） （要点一，介绍我的 国籍、年龄、爱好及上学的方式 ）Do you know about China？ Its the home of pandas And there are many important festivals in China， like the Dragon Boat FestivalOn that day，we eat delicious zongzi and watch the exciting boat races （高分句型二） （要点二，介绍我们中国的一个代

3、表性动物 及传统的节日 ） Welcome to China one dayThank you!（要点三，欢迎有一天来到我们中国 ） （二）（二） 你的笔友不久要来中国访友，为了不影响与他人的交流沟通，他向你询问一些关于在中国初次见面 打招呼，就餐，访友等方面的风俗礼仪习惯，请你写一封信给他提供一些意见和建议，方便他的中 国之行。开头和结尾已给出。 要求：1. 字数 6080 词左右； 2. 句子及篇章结构准确，连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关的信息。 Dear _, You must be excited about coming to China

4、soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs. _ _ _ _ Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon! Best wishes. 【满分范文满分范文】 Dear Paul, You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs.Chinese peop

5、le are very friendly,so you dont worry about the customs.In China,when you meet someone,you are supposed to shake hands.Its important for you to know some table manners.You are supposed to use chopsticks instead of knives and forks,You are not supposed to pick up your bowl to eat.Its rude to stick y

6、our chopsticks into your food.If guests have no food in their plates,its polite to put food on their plates .People in China and America behave differently at the dinner table.There are many different table manners here.I will tell you more when you come to China.If you visit someone ,youd better ma

7、ke a call first. Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon! Best wishes 【解析】 这是一篇要求给笔友介绍关于在中国初次见面打招呼，就餐，访友等方面的风俗礼仪习惯。动笔前 先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上 亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一般现在时态， 注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 （三）（三） 为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活

8、动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪 (Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。 内容提示： 1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口 2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。 要求： 1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100 左右. 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。 _ _ _ _ 【满分范文满分范文】 Long long ago, there was a man ca

9、lled Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didnt wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr.

10、Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply. After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard. 【解析】 这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪(Stand in the snow to wait fo

11、r Master Cheng respectfully)”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过 去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语 式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were.注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关 系，具有条理性。 （四）（四） 假如你是小明，你的笔友 Sam 给你发了电子邮件，请根据邮件内容进行回复 要求：1逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范 2词数 80 左右邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数 chairman：主席 unique：特别的 Dear Xiao Ming

12、How are you doing？ I am writing to ask you something about the Chinese Culture Week that we are going to hold in September As the chairman of the Chinese Learning Club at school， I am thinking about how we can organize a unique and amazing activity Therefore， could you please give me some good sugge

13、stions on what theme might be better and what exactly we are going to do？Thanks Sam Dear Sam， Its a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours， Xiao Ming 【满分范文满分范文】 Dear Sam， Its a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your schoolIts a good opportunity for you to lea

14、rn more about culture （开篇点题）First ，a papercutting exhibition is a good choice for you As a traditional Chinese art， papercutting includes different themes like plants， animals， stories and so on （剪 纸展览）Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse peoples interest， which is very

15、helpful in learning Chinese culture【高分句型一】（书法比赛） Whats more， lectures about Chinese history， poems， traditional festivals，or even food， are surely welcome（历史，诗歌，传统节日， 食物等讲座） And a Chinese painting show is always attractive（中国画展览） I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you【高分句型二】 Yours， Xiao

16、Ming 【名师点评名师点评】 高分句型一： Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse peoples interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture 第二， 举办中国书法比赛也能激发人们的兴趣， 这对学习中国文化很有帮助 arouse ones interest 激发某人的兴趣，which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture本句使用了非限制性定语从句 高分句型二： I hope m

17、y suggestions will be of great help to you 我希望我的建议对你有很大帮助be of great help 有很大帮助 （五）（五） 广州某电台英文频道将开设 Welcome to Guang zhou 栏目， 目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文 介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。 注意：1. 词数：80 词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. _

18、_ _ _ _ _ _ Guangzhou is waiting for you. 【写作思路写作思路】 这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容：广州 市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处，并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进 行写作，为时内容丰富、充实，应对每个话题进行拓展，详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般 现在时，第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内 容，不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构，要分清主次，合理安排 各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据

19、汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的 整体结构出发，可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升作文档次。同 时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。 【满分范文满分范文】 Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China， Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of

20、 China. With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food. I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you cant help being fascinated by

21、 it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower. As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good ch

22、oice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou. Guangzhou is waiting for you. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点：首 先短文内容完整，包含来了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了 介绍：第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色，简单的几句话包含了大量的信息；第二段 是主体段，主要给读者推荐了一个好去处，并阐述了自己的理由；第

23、三段和第四段是一个结尾，对 自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰，叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范， 用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句与复合句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化。 文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如 Located in the south of China，Guangzhou，with a history of more than two thousand years，plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton T

24、ower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、 Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等 等。

25、 (六六) 假如你是遵义育才中学的大明，你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施“山与海对话“（ Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea）项目今年暑假，你的“手拉手“活动伙伴小海将来遵义进行首次交流活 动请根据下列提示给他写一封 80 词左右的书信内容包括： 自我介绍 年龄、性格、爱好 校园生活介绍 社团活动 家乡介绍 自然环境，名胜古迹 你的建议 上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化 注意：1文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数 提示词：遵义海龙囤 Zunyi Hailongtun Castle 遵义会址

26、Zunyi Conference Site Dear Xiaohai， Im glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea Now let me tell you something about me and my city_ _ _ _ _ _ _ Welcome to my city! Im looking forward to meeting you Yours sincerely， Daming 【写作思路写作思路】 本题是一篇材料作文

27、，也是书信作文。注意书信格式。本文人称主要是第一称，时态主要是一 般现在时和一般将来时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根 据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词， 使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓 一致等）。 【满分范文满分范文】 Dear Xiaohai， Im glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea No

28、w let me tell you something about me and my city I am fourteen years old. I am outgoing and like making friends. I like sports, like playing balls and running. I also like collecting stamps. Our school life is very colorful. We can not only study very hard but also do all kinds of activities after c

29、lass. After school, we often do some sports such as playing basketball, volleyball, Pingpong and so on. I join basketball club. I play basketball every Thursday afternoon after school.The natural environment in Zunyi is beautiful and therere many famous scenic spots and historical sites in Zunyi, li

30、ke Zunyi Hailongtun Castle and Zunyi Conference Site. If you want to know more about Zunyis history and culture, you can go online for it. Welcome to my city! Im looking forward to meeting you Yours sincerely， Daming 【名师点评】【名师点评】 书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的 能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和

31、句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复 杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总 结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、 主谓一致等。 写作六步法： 1.审题：文体，时态，人称。 2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。 3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。 4.连句成文，合理使用连词。 5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。 6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。 （七）（七

32、） 5 月 18 日是国际博物馆日，下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参 观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。 注意：1. 词数：80-100 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇图表，是同学参观博物馆的情况，结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报 告，并在英语课上汇报。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把 这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意人 称和时态的不同，注意标点符号及大小写等问题

33、，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系， 语意连贯。 【参考范文参考范文】 Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc. Among them, t

34、he science museum is our favorite. Ive been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What Im interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, whic

35、h has left a deep impression on me. Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more? （八八） 为弘扬中华传统文化，你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华，请你将活动的相关 情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。 要点： 1. 时间：5月16日下午2:30; 2. 地点：学校操场; 3. 内容：校长在开幕式上致辞；戏曲知识竞赛；师生戏曲表演等； 4. 感受：对

36、传统文化有了进一步的了解 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名； 2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥； 4. 词数：80100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 表演 performance ( n.) 致辞 make a speech Dear John, How is everything going? Im writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school. _ _ _ _ _ _ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【满分范文满分范文】 Dear John， How is every