2020中考英语作文：学术文化.doc

1、03 学术文化篇学术文化篇 （一）（一） 在当今信息化时代，英语已经成为了我们生活不可或缺的一部分，作为中学生，我们更应该学 好英语。请以 “My English Learning”为题，写一篇短文。 内容包括：1.学好英语对你的重要性。 2.谈谈你自己学习英语的经历。 3.谈谈你自己的感悟。 写作要求：1.词数 80 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文中不得出现真实的校名与姓名。 关键词：important, subject, progress, listen to, take notes, practice ,take part in . My English learning

2、 English is widely used in the world. _ _ _ _ _ If we do like these, I think we can become a good English learner. 【满分【满分范文范文】 English is widely used in the world. I think its important for us to learn it well. English is one of my subjects. It plays an important part in my daily study. But at the b

3、eginning, I was not good at it, and I felt worried . My English teacher told me not to give it up. And she also gave me some suggestions on how to learn English well. I made much progress in English later. I think its important for us to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes so tha

4、t I can go over my lessons later. I also try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking. Reading more books is also a good way .If we do like these, I think we can become a good English learner. 【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学好英语的重要性，谈谈自己学习英语的经历和感悟。结合所给材料， 可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结

5、构 主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：English is，I think，My English teacher told，I also try to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注 意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】 本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们学好英语非常重要，接下来介绍自己学习英语的经历， 最后认为我们可以成为一名优秀的英语学习者。此处 at the beginning, be good at, give up, make progress, take notes, practice doing sth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色

6、不少。 （二）（二） 假如你是张华，你在外地学习的好朋友王伟发电子邮件向你请教如何学好英语请你根据以下 要点提示用英语给他回封电子邮件 要点提示：1看英语电影、听英语歌曲、猜测生词意思； 2与外教交谈； 3把单词写在纸条上，利用纸条记单词 要求：1语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 2词数：100 左右；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数 _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 Dear Wang Wei， I received your email yesterday In the email， you asked me how to improve your English

7、Now Id like to give you some advice 【高分句型一】 （引出话题） First， watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English! Watch and listen several times， and guess the meaning of the new words Second， having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way Youd better

8、start it with greetings or a question 【高分句型二】 Also， smile before you speak and do not feel shy Third， write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room Read the words when you see them， and try to use them （具体介绍学好英语的建议） These are my suggestions I hope they are useful to y

9、ou （希望） Yours， Zhang Hua （三）（三） 如今， 越来越多年轻人沉迷网络游戏 请根据下面表格里的内容提示， 以“How to Beat the Computer Game Addiction“ （沉迷，上瘾）“为题写一篇英文短文，谈谈网络游戏的危害，并给出如何解决问题的 建议 网络游戏的危害 浪费时间 危害健康 其他危害 解决问题的建议 缩短在线时间 增加阅读 多散步 听音乐 多参加活动 其他建议 要求： 1词数： 80100 （开头和结尾已给出的内容不计入总词数） ； 2短文中应包括：“网络游戏的危害“部分的全部提示只容；“解决问题的建议“部分至少三项 提示内容不能出现

10、真实的人名、地名 3文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺；卷面书写工整、句式规范、标点符号使用正确 How to Beat the Computer Game Addiction Nowadays， many young people like computer games Some of them are even addicted to playing the games _ _ _ _ _ All in all， getting rid of this bad habit and leading a healthy life do help young people to enjoy mor

11、e 【满分【满分范文范文】 How to Beat the Computer Game Addiction Nowadays， many young people like computer games Some of them are even addicted to playing the games （点题） It not only wastes time， but also does harm to health 【高分句型一】Some students spend a lot of money on gamesSome students even borrow money to pl

12、ay gamesThis has brought financial hardship to families （危害） Here are some advice to solve the problemIn your free time， listen to music or go for a walkIts very relaxingTake part in some meaningful activities， such as reading activities， speech contests， volunteer work and so onBesides， I think par

13、ents should spend more time with their children 【高分句型二】 （建议） All in all， getting rid of this bad habit and leading a healthy life do help young people to enjoy more （总结全文） （四）（四） 请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文 提示： （1）What are the man and the boy doing？ （2）What kind of influence does using mobile phones

14、may bring？ （3）What is your attitude （态度） towards this behavior？ 要求： （1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数 80 个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 参考词汇：secretly； technology； natural； convenient； focus on （集中注意力在上） We can see a man and a boy in the picture The man is _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满【满分分范文范文】 We can see a man

15、 and a boy in the picture The man is teaching a class The boy is having a class， but he is playing with his mobile phone secretly （介绍图中的人在干什么） With the fast development of technology， it is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand 【高分句型一】 They can use their mobile phones to do something th

16、ey like at any time in any place It seems very convenient But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life They cant focus on their study They lose themselves in their own life and dont want to communicate with others 【高分句型二】 （使用手机的危害） As students， I think we should pay a

17、ttention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones Whats more， we cant spend too much time playing with the phones in our free time （我的态 度） （五）（五） 今年的“史上最长“寒假让同学们有了不同寻常的体验空中课堂、 居家自学、 居家运动等 或 逍遥自在过，或纠结迷惘过，或用心改变过请根据下图提示，结合自身经历， 写一篇英语短文 分享你的心路历程，并发表观点 At first I felt， later I started

18、to Now I Fact Opinion： I realize that Ive changed 注意：1 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名； 2 词数 110 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 My winter holiday has come to an end this year and it has brought me an unforgettable experience At first， _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 My winter holiday has come to an end this year and it has brought me an

19、unforgettable experience （点题） At first， I didnt use to online classes I felt so upset because I could only stay at home 【高分 句型一】Later， I began to study online at homeI gradually got used to this kind of lifeNow， I keep up having online classes every day（我的心情变化） In fact， online classes are more conve

20、nient， because we dont have to go to schoolIt can improve students learning abilities Its good for students to communicate with excellent teachers online 【高分句型二】 The teachers and students can share better educational resources （事实） I realize that Ive changed a lotI think online classes are not only

21、interesting but also improve students learning ability （我的观点） （六）（六） 南京阳光中学每年要接特来自世界各地的交流学生。为了让他们更好地在南京学习生活，校学生 会面向全体学生招募“阳光志愿者”。假如你是李明，请根据下面招募广告，用英文写一封自荐信。 Volunteers Wanted Required Qualifications Good English and Chinese Helpful, patient, outgoing Good knowledge of Chinese culture Duties Teach Ch

22、ineseintroduce Chinese culture Show exchange students around Nanjing Working hours 4:00 p.m.-5:00 p.m. Wednesday, 8:00 a.m.-12:00 am. Sunday Contact Info. Ms. Yang Email: iindayang Join us! 注意： 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。 2. 词数 80 左右，自荐信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等 Dear Ms. Yang I would t

23、o be a sunshine volunteer. _ _ _ _ _ _ I will be very happy if I am chosen .to be a volunteer Im really looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming 【满分【满分范文范文】 Dear Ms. Yang, I would like to be sunshine volunteer.First I am good at both English and Chinese.And I am sure I can teach exchan

24、ge students Chinese well.I am also helpful and I am always ready to help those in need.Besides,I am patient enough everything in detail.i have such a good knowledge of the Chinese culture that can help them know the beauty of it.I can make good plans for their trips because I know Nanjing well.I am

25、outgoing and I think its easy for me to make friends with them,I am free from 4:00p.m. to 5:00p.m. on Wednesday.I can teach them Chinese during this time.I can also spend the whole Sunday morning showing them around Nanjing. I will be very happy if I am chosen to be a volunteer.Iam really looking fo

26、rward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【解析】 这篇书面表达是写一封作学校“阳光志愿者”的自荐信。这是篇材料作文。招募广告即写作的主要内 容，考生可从自己是否满足招募要求入手。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能 力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各 个要点组织成一个完整的整体。 （七）（七） 现在很多同学使用智能手机（smart phone） 。智能手机给我们学习生活带来便利的同时， 也产生许 多不好的影响。比如我们身边越来越多的同学成了“低头族”（phubbers） 。假如你

27、 是李华, 你校的 英语园地正在征文。请你投稿，谈谈你对智能手机的看法以及你是如何 正确使用智能手机的。 提示词语：advantages, convenient, proper, study 提示问题： What do you think of smart phones? What do you do with your own smart phone? Refuse to be phubbers More and more people are using smart-phones nowadays. _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 Refuse to be phubbers M

28、ore and more people are using smart phones. Smartphones are helpful to our lives. We can use them to read news, shop online and so on .It is very useful and convenient. In fact, smartphones make our life colorful. However, every coin has two sides. Sometimes some of us spend too much time playing ga

29、mes on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. It has caused bad effects on us Phubbers can be seen here and there. One Sunday morning, I was looking at my smartphone while walking. A car nearly hit me. How terrible! I wont do it any more. So I think we should use our smartphones properly and d

30、ont use them too much. We should pay more attention to our schoolwork. I will use my smart phone wisely and try not to be phubbers. 【解析】 题干分析：阅读题干，要求谈谈对智能手机的看法以及是如何正确使用智能手机的。智能手机给我 们学习生活带来便利的同时，也会产生许多不好的影响。所以在写作文时，我们不仅要写出弊也要 写出利，同时要表达自己观点。 例文点评：例文采取的是三段式写作手法，第一段首先阐述了目前的使用手机的状况，点明使用手 机有利有弊，第二段重点写使用手机

31、造成的坏处；最后写自己的观点及看法。例文中运用的是一般 现在时为主，同时使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺， 行文连贯。 高分亮点： 短语：be helpful to 对有帮助；here and there 到处；not any more 不再；pay more attention to 注意；try to do sth 努力做某事。 句型：(1)In fact，smartphones make our life colorful事实上，智能手机让我们的生活丰富多彩。 in fact 事实上， make +n+adj make our life colorf

32、ul 让我们的生活丰富多彩； （2）Sometimes some of us spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams有时我们中一 些人花太多时间在智能手机上玩游戏，考试结果很糟糕。and 连接两个并列谓语，spend some time doing sth 花时间做某事。 （八）（八） 因疫情防控，全国各地大中小学被迫延迟开学“线上教学“应运而生，学生们借助各大网络平台开 启了精彩纷呈的网上学习之旅为使得这一新型学习方式更好的发挥效用，教育部与某英文报纸合 作，开设专栏，鼓

33、励同学们以对话教育部长的形式，对目前的“线上教学“问题展各抒己见假设你 是李华，请你写一封信给教育部长，谈一谈你对线上学习的感受，内容包括： 1简要介绍说明写信意图； 2“线上教学“的好处； 3“线上教学“存在的问题及原因，并提出你的建议 作文要求： 1不能照抄原文； 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名 2语句连贯，词数 80 个左右 Dear Minister， I hope this email finds you in good health _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I am looking forward to your reply Best regards. Li H

34、ua 【满分【满分范文范文】 Dear Minister， I hope this email finds you in good healthSchools and colleges across the country have been forced to delay the start of classes because of controlling the outbreak Online teaching has been more popularHere I would like to express my opinion （写信意图）Online teaching has ma

35、ny advantages First， students dont have to go to school They can take lessons at home on computers or mobile phones Secondly， students can repeat what they dont understand In addition， online teaching costs less because both teachers and students can share resources 【高分句型一】 （好处） There are also probl

36、ems with online teachingSome students play games on the Internet instead of studyingBesides， online teaching cant communicate face to face （问题）I hope parents pay more attention to their children to prevent them from spending time playing computer games 【高分句型二】I also hope to improve online teaching s

37、o that teachers and students can communicate better （建议） I am looking forward to your reply Best regards. Li Hua （九（九） 2020 年新年伊始，由于受新型冠状病毒（novel coronavirus）的影响，全国 人民都在各自的家 中进行学习和工作而作为初三的我们也经历了人生里的第一 次学校线上学习课程我们的线上学 习已经持续了将近两个月的时间，在这段时 间里，你肯定也深有感悟近期英语学习报邀请你用英 文来写一篇文章，介绍你 对线上学习的认识 内容：1线上学习和在校学习的不同 2可以推荐的线上学习的方法 要求：1内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范 2短文中不能出现真实姓名，校名100 词左右 _