最新中考英语书面表达点+例题-全面解析经典.doc

1、最新中考英语书面表达点+例题-全面解析经典一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。学生们认为1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学2.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣3.家长们认为1.影响孩子视力2.增加家庭负担你的观点1.2.注意：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥；3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

2、；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method._【答案】iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and

3、parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students dont think they have to carry heavy bags any more. Its cool to have lessons over iPads. Its very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influe

4、nce childrens eyesight. And some poor families cant afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. Its easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。

5、文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。点睛：对立观点式第一段：提出现象。第二段：SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat_支持X的第一个原因。Theyalsoarguethat_支持X的另一个原因。第三段：However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.Theyconsideritharmf

6、ultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat_反对X的第一个理由。Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:_一个例子。第四段：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabovementionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX的有一个坏处。2你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。内容包括

7、：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study._【答案】Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this

8、. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset. How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday p

9、lan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，

10、spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the

11、paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的

12、分数。3（题文） 书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定时做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数） 3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时emergency 紧急情况 ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now

13、 Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old

14、people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. Whats more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.Im sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly

15、. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，Id like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in t

16、he future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学

17、英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4书面表达你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，

18、并按要求适当发挥。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, _【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding

19、 school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention

20、 to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句

21、型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。5书面表达初中毕

22、业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演. 请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。提示：（1）What was the event?（2）How did you make it?（3）Whats your feeling?要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!_Thank you for yo

23、ur listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldnt understand it.

24、 I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into i

25、t, English didnt seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I wont be afraid of the difficulties in my life

26、and Im sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力

27、，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部

28、分内容安排合理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and

29、told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didnt seem that difficult、In the future, I wont be afraid of the difficulties in my life and Im sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。6书面表达假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The C

30、hanges in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。 要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class._【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us stude

31、nts a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We c

32、an get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【详解】假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。 结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用

33、。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。7 “美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确

34、，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students

35、,_Lets take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junio

36、r high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. Its kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On t

37、he other hand, there are many things we shouldnt do. We shouldnt make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We cant spit anywhere and we shouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldnt break traffic rules.Lets take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beau

38、tiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主

39、谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should

40、be polite to others and try to behave well. 、Its kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We cant spit anywhere and we shouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldnt break traffic rules.等等。8请根据表格内Zhang Yin

41、g的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（争吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play computergames for mor

42、e than an hour要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。3、词数不少于60个英语单词。4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。【答案】One possible versionDear Mary,Im very glad to introduce（介绍） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But sh