最新中考英语书面表达经典题型带答案经典.doc

1、最新中考英语书面表达经典题型带答案经典一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1 如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以Bike-sharing为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。要点提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）Take exerciseProblems Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolenAdvice Civilized（文明的）,

2、 follow the rules, take good care of注意：1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Bike-sharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. _【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is

3、 becoming more and more popular in many cities. Its known that it has many advantages. So its enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bi

4、ke-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, its helpful to peoples health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilize

5、d and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）【解析】【详解】这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: Its known that it has many advantages.，First of

6、 all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。【点睛】本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。2你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇

7、文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study._【答案】Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an exp

8、erience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset. How to make good use of our time? I think we should

9、 make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play

10、a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing cle

11、arly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词

12、汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy想要感受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。提示词语：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示问题：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional cultu

13、re. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Lets meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you

14、.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to，We are going to，We can，Lets meet at等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来介绍我们去那里做什么，最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。此处want to do sth, invite sb

15、 to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势随处可见，出行方便有益健康，减少污染费用不高，负担得起存在问题未及时归还占道挡路你的观点我认为-参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中“你的观点”一

16、栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be

17、 seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people cant return publi

18、c bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, its a way of living a green life.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括4个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真

19、审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。5书面表达为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。常 识历史悠久，深受喜爱世界杯4年举行一次好 处男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1点）偶 像梅西，有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟（至少1点）注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；1

20、.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西 MessiDear classmates,Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，Im very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 20

21、20Football has a very long historyIt is liked by people all over the worldThe World Cup takes place every four yearsPlaying football has lots of advantagesFirst，both boys and girls can take part in itSecond，it helps develop team spiritWhats more，playing football is good for our healthIm a football f

22、anMessi is my heroHe has a gift for playing footballMy dream is to become a famous football player like MessiI hope China will hold the World Cup some dayThank you for your attention【解析】【详解】试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定

23、逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. Whats more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作

24、表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。6 中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。提示词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示问题： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn f

25、rom the activity? What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the ac

26、tivity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. Whats more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really

27、had a good time on the activity.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，Whats more，have a good time。句型：被动句型。7为了宣传和弘扬中华

28、优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。内容提示：1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。要求：1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called

29、 Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didnt wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Chen

30、g woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for M

31、aster Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were.注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。8随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变， 购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点（advantage）1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累2.价格通常比较便宜3.可供选择

32、的范围广，品种多缺点（disadvantage）1.只看到图片， 看不到商品本身2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西， 造成浪费你的观点提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Int

33、ernet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what youre interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the c

34、rowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, its very easy for you to buy goods that arent like the pictures you see on the Internet. On th

35、e other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. Thats a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如convenient，disadvantage，

36、in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们

37、要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。9上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；3.80-100词。生词提示：electric adj.电讨论结果25人表示同意35人不同意理由1.这样很

38、方便；2.能节约上学途中的时间。1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥挤，骑电动车也快不起来。【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go toschool.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school.

39、 But the other 35 students didnt agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldnt ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一

40、次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇80-100词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯通。并且要围绕主题适当发挥。写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结构清晰，要点全面。时态运用正确，书写工整规范。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them l

41、ess time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldnt ride electric bicycles quickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。考点：提纲类作文。10李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：1. 中秋节的时间；2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；3, 我最期待的活动。要求：1.80-100词开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。Dear Jessica, Im glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you._