成人学位英语作文部分范文解析(DOC 11页).doc

1、考试作文速成模板图表篇成教学位英语考试作文五大类型的速成模版,即:图表分析型、对比论述型、问题解决型、道理阐述型和情景应用型。写作模版在字数要求、主题确立、布局谋篇和语言表达等四个方面都给出了具体的指导。一旦掌握了这些模版,考生即可按照作文题目的要求,综合作文题意和主题内容,选择相应的模版,快速完成作文写作。1图表分析型作文模版【写作模版1】一The table/figure/graph/chart shows that from_to_二It is self-evident that,_三Three possible reasons contribute to_四One reason is

2、that_五another reason is that _六For instance,_七Whats more_八As a result,_ 九However, in my opinion_十For one thing,_十一For another, _十二To sum up,_【模版要素】图表总体描述(指出年代指出突出的数据变化具体表示急剧上升、下降或特殊现象的词或指代词代替上文内容第一原因5第二原因举例证最后一个原因总结上文作者自己的观点或看法论点论点总结上文College Students Spending More Time on Computers 【模版例文】The chart

3、shows that students are now spending much more time on the computer, from one hour to four hours per week from 1990to 1995.It is self-evident that it increases sharply to twenty hours in the year of 2000.Three possible reasons contribute to this phenomenon.One reason is that most college students no

4、w can afford a personal computer due to the sharp decline in its price.Another reason is that they find the computer a wonderful thing to have fun with.For instance, they can chat through QQ or playing games online.Whats more, from Internet, they can learn things much more quickly than simply from r

5、eading books so that they can secure a good job in the future .As a result, all these lead to much more time spent on using computers.However, in my opinion, there are some complaints from both teachers and students.For one thing, students complain about the less availability of computers and slow s

6、peed of the network.11For another,some teachers worry that the much more time spent playing computer games or surfing online will lead students to ignore their studies and even do cheating instead of doing research by their own.12To sum up,in spite of problems concerning the use of computer, compute

7、r is still of more merits than defects.问题解决型作文模版【写作模版4】Because of _ great changes have been taken place in_.Particularly,_. Besides,_.As we know, there are several ways for _ to_choose. Above all, _.Secondly,_.Furthermore,_.And finally,_. As far as I am concerned,_.In the first place,_ _. In the sec

8、ond place,_.Therefore,_.【模版要素】问题出现的背景提出问题对问题进一步解释说明提出解决问题的方法方法一方法二方法三方法四我的做法论点总结全文【模版例文】How I Overcame Difficulties in Learning English Like many other English learners, I found a lot of difficulties in learning English. Firstly, I found it difficult to understand what I read because most English wo

9、rds have more than one meaning. Besides, I found it difficult to write idiomatic English or translate Chinese into idiomatic English. Finally, my oral English was weak because I had no opportunity to communicate with native English speakers. Although I often read aloud, this didnt prove to be an eff

10、ective way to improve my spoken English.But I didnt lose heart in overcoming these obstacles. I tackled English vocabulary in two ways. First, I tried to understand and memorize the specific meaning of a word in its context. Second, I enlarge my vocabulary by breaking wordsup into roots and affixes

11、and memorize them in connection with the words of the same roots or affixes. To overcome Chinese English, I tried to think in English directly. Although I havent had any opportunity to communicate with native speakers, I have tried to improve my spoken English by listening to English broadcasts and

12、writing English compositions. These experiences have turned out to be effective. I am feeling very confident in myself while sitting here for passing my degree English today.【写作模版5】With the development of_,_.So it is of great importance for us to_.On the one hand,_.On the other hand,_. To us_, we ha

13、ve figured out many ways to_.First,_Second,_.Finally, _.In a word,_. To sum up,_. It is high time for us to_. Therefore, we must_.【模版要素】问题出现的背景提出问题必要性或后果必要性或后果2 提出解决问题的方法方法1方法2方法3总结上文重申主题; 进一步强调主题; 总结全文【模版例文】How I Finance My College Education? With the rapid development of higher education in China,

14、 more high school graduates admitted, exclusively the government can no longer finance universities and students must pay at least partly for their schooling. There are various ways for a student to pay his tuition and fees. To begin with, if the student is quite excellent in his studies, he can app

15、ly for scholarship. Secondly, especially in China, he can always depend on his parents for all kinds of expenditure, including living allowances. Then, he can choose to turn to the bank to for a loan to pay his education, which he can repay after graduation. If he finds the entire above not desirabl

16、e, he still has another road to take-to do a part-time job and work his way through college. In my case, I am fortunate enough to be born into a well-to-do family and have no difficulty having my parents pay for all my fees. as a college student, I dislike a totally dependent existence, so I am work

17、ing part-time as a newspaper-boy to help support myself. And I am still studying hard, hoping to win a scholarship one day so that I can be wholly self-reliant and independent.考试作文速成模板情景应用篇5情景应用型作文模版【写作模版8】(Date:_ Dear_, I am delighted to learn that_ . You are welcome to_ .I am sure_.As for_ , I am

18、thinking about_.On the one hand, _.0n the other hand,_.If_As to the_, I suggest_.Of course_. By the way, _. In addition,_.I am looking forward to_. Yours truly,【模版要素】写信原因表示欢迎期待主题词+建议建议1建议2 让步条件进一步论证建议的具体内容其他的建议提醒注意事项1; 注意事2; 寒暄结束语【模版例文】Require About How to Choose a Good Major in the UniversityJune 7

19、th , 2006 Dear Susan, I am delighted to learn that you are going to apply for admission to my university. You are welcome to be my schoolmate.I am sure you will be successful.As for the specific major you apply for, I am thinking about the international economics course.On the one hand, this is one

20、of the best specialized programs in the university. On the other hand, in todays society, students majoring in international economics are more likely to find a good job.If you have more ideas, please let me know. As to the basic requirements to be cons I dered for admissions, I suggest you reach th

21、e minimum scare set for admission to key universities in the College Entrance Exams first. Of course, you have to satisfy the special requirements in mathematics and be good at computer and English. By the way, in order to prepare for the exams, I suggest you pay attention to all the high school sub

22、jects, and maintain a balance between them.In addition. I am also going to mail you some maths revision materials and a set of New Concept English which will be of great help, I bet. I am looking forward to good news from you. Yours truly, Tom【写作模版】 Dear, This letter comes to you from_ . In it, some

23、 opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon. As you know, _. But unfortunately, we dont find_ sometimes.For one thing,_.For another, _.whats more, _.Honestly speaking,_.For example,_.And_But there is still much room for improvement. I do believe_. Sincerely yours, (Signature:【模版要素】写信人姓名及身份写信目的

24、主题词主题句问题问题问题承认好的方面举例举例复述观点;提出愿望【模版例文】Complain about the Dining Service in SchoolJanuary 6th , 2007 Dear Mr. President, This letter comes to you from one of your students. In it, some opinions are put forward for you to think about. As you know, students of us go to the dining-hall three times each d

25、ay. But unfortunately, we dont find the service there satisfying sometimes.For one thing, the food is not nutritious as it should be. For another, the fare is a little higher than we can afford. Whats more, sometimes the staff in the dining-hall just bring us steamed bread with their bare hands and

26、you cant imagine how dirty they are! Honestly speaking, some measures have been taken and things are improving there. For example, IC cards have taken the place of money in the canteen. And the attitude of the staff is also changing a little bit. But there is still much room for improvement. I do be

27、lieve that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solve the problems there and make it a better place our students.考试作文速成模板道理阐述篇道理阐述型作文模版【写作模版6】It is well-accepted that(_.For instance, (_ _.Besides, ( . Furthermore, ( . Not to mention( . In spite of all these,_.To begin with,_.At the same

28、 time,_.Finally_.Thu_.In short,_.It pays to_.【模版要素】提出主题或现象举1 举例2 举3 举例4 主题词论证123 小结上文; 总结全文; 深化主题,回应全文【模版例文】It is well-accepted that nowadays dishonesty is a common phenomenon in society. For instance, many good-hearted doctors would not tell dying patients about their real condition. Besides, poor

29、students tend to cheat on exams. Furthermore, greedy advertisers, armed with misleading advertisements, may lure customers into buying fake commodities. Not to mention such decent and famous figures as Liu Xiaoqing, used to be considered as China s movie queen, have cheated the government on income

30、taxes. 1n spite of all these, honesty is always regarded as an important part of the human character. To begin with, if you treat others fairly, those associating with you will certainly profit from your sincerity. At the same time, a sense of trust builds up in their hearts, which, in turn, will ea

31、rn you more true friends. Finally, that will benefit you in the long run. Thus it is essential for everyone to maintain an honest attitude towards the whole society. In short, honesty wins trust, respect and honor.It pays to be honest.【写作模版7】It is well-known that . For example,_.And_ . Whats more,_.

32、Even_. However,_ . First of all,_.Meanwhile,_.And_ .Therefore,_.In a word, _. We should_.【模版要素】提出主题或现象举例1举例2 举例3 举例4 主题词论证1 论证2 论3 小结上文,做好过渡总结全文; 强调主题论点【模版例文】Fight Against the Fake Commodities.It is well-known that with the development of economy, fake commodities prevail in many placesof our countr

33、y.For example, fake medicines and fake diplomas are widespread all over the country.And there are many reasons explaining this phenomenon, one of which is that some profiteers, regardless of peoples interest, cant wait to make a fortune; They just take risk making and selling fake commodities. Whats

34、 more, the punishment is not severe enough to stop the violators.Even the violators are not afraid of it. However, fake commodities are extremely harmful to consumers as well as to the whole society. First of all, fake commodities may cause losses to consumers. Meanwhile, fake commodities may harm p

35、eoples health, sometimes even lives.And in the 1998 fatal alcohol poisoning case in Shanxi Province, for example, a peasant produced alcohol, dreaming of becoming rich overnight; Which, with 27 people killed and about 700 poisoned, caused great sufferings to the victims and shocked the whole country

36、 as well.Therefore, it is really high time we took measures to crack down on the production and sale of fake commodities. In a word, fake commodities are really harmful to everyone concerned. we should fight against the fake commodities.范文Overseas Study at an Early Age1.目前很多父母在孩子高中毕业前就送他们出国学习2.导致这种趋

37、势的原因3.我对此的看法Nowadays more and more parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost. It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they place high expectations on their children. T

38、hey are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study. With the development of economy, companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too. Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut in gaining

39、a better future. Moreover, there is still one underlying reason for this rush-economic reason. The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their childrens overseas study.As for me,overseas study is surely a helpful way to g

40、et both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor beneficial. The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves. I do think that overseas study can contribute to ones self-improvement, but its better to

41、 be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and livin g on his own.题目:爱是人类普遍而伟大的感情,请以“love”为题,写一篇100单词左右的英语小短文。文章每一段的前一句话已经给出。1Love plays an important part in this world today.2The love between you and your parents is a specials love.3There are o

42、ther kinds of love.【范文】LoveLove plays an important part in this world today. With the increasing modernization of society,relationship between people are becoming looser and looser. It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other. Love is the caring and concer

43、n for, and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses. To love and to be loved is the true happiness in life.The love between you and your parents is a special one. This love, as any other sincere love, must be honest and be shared by both parents and children.

44、 The love of parents is a great support in their childrens lives. It will remain with them and help them overcome all the difficulties and make them feel secure.There are other kinds of love. Love between friends, partners, human beings and animals. The power of love makes us endure the difficulties

45、 in our lives, even though we may not have the chance to think about it, it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart.【评语】该文逻辑清晰,词语简练,先从“爱”的普遍意义谈起,说到“爱”的含义,“爱”对我们的重要。在第二段里又重点地谈了谈父母和孩子之间的“爱”,然后结尾处点到了其他种类的“爱”。有序有节,完整精干。并不是好文章必须追求艰涩的词语,平易的语言只要运用得当,也会有极好的效果。作文地带提纲:1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员 2. 引起此现象的原因你的看法 审题概

46、述本文是一篇论述大学生报考公务员人数增多的原因和对此的看法。第一段,主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段,侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段,重点谈自己对此的观点。【参考范文】Craze for Civil Service ExaminationsEvery year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college gra

47、duates are a fast-growing force that cant be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as its a lso gaining popularity among science and engineering students. In the final analysis,this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors ambitions and comforts. On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as