2019雅思作文范文.docx

1、雅思作文【抄写范文，分析记忆很有效】小作文20minutes 动态/静态（3种题型）7分=TA+CC+LC语法时态勿出错！四天解决：静态/动态/流程图/地图开头：同意转换/不要用过去式The chart provides information/data about It can be seen from the chart,According to the chart,. The chart shows/illustrates/suggests the changes in The chart illustrates/shows how. Changed/varied /that (宾语从句

2、)中间段落：四大评分要求！多图单位一致按对象分段/不一致按图分段TA：2个以内数据得全部说明，两种对比都得对比到位【总结/归纳】占据：account for ,represent, make up, constitute 花费:the cost/spending/expenditure +on说数据：the. Figure / amount/number/proportion for the pipeline.时间：At the beginning of the 1999, by the middle/end ofFrom the 1900s onwards, 从。开始During the p

3、eriod from 1999 to 2002从。到。In the following 5 years 在随后的五年内Increased for 5 years in a row.持续增涨了五年4and 引导的并列句5while/although引导的状语从句6there be 7compared with /分词结构8when/ where引导的定语从句. eg the most sever land degradation was in Europe, where 23% of land was degraded.必备句势1倍数：A doubles B/triples A is #time

4、s as adj as B A is #times-1 adj as Beg the percentage of A is 10 times more than that of B2最高级：the. Highest percentage of N is n # takes the first /second/third place, at 3% # lies in the dominant position in3比较级：A3%,compared with 4%in B In contrast, Be significantly lower.1 多达 as much as 40% period

5、s2仅仅 n represents a mere/only 1%of N3超过 topped/exceeded 5%4多于 the consumption of fish was just over 505少于 fish was consumed (just below 50). 6总数 a total of 50 was pends on public transport 7剩余the remaining 80%8从哪到哪 ranging from 3 to 89相比 there be .(20 million in1999 versus 110 million in 2001)10分别A

6、and B V 2% and 5% respectively 9单一数据占比（动词占比/80% of N is n /the percentage of n is 30）A, accounting for5%,is the most popular N in the place.,at 5%10多个数据分别占比(respectively放句末/collectively放other之后)Sth in A and B are 2% and 5% respectively.Other reasons respect only 7% collectively=the remaining 7% was

7、other problems不变：remains stable/steady 流动：Fluctuated 最高点：Peak at /reach a peak of 最低点：Dip to the bottom at /reach a low of句型 N increased dramatically (from 20) to 50/by 30 It increased steadily from about 500km to 300km. There be an increase in /was a fluctuation in theN between 1998 and 2000CC：类似/对

8、比/动词前加程度副词轻微的Slightly, modestly，steadily ,slowly, gradually显著的Considerably, remarkably, noticeably, significantly 极为显著Dramatically rapidly类似Also，or so, similarly ,at the same time ,nearly,almost,around对比In contact, compared with, on the other hand, while介词的正确使用AtFigure/amount/number/proportion三种用法句子

9、/名词后1after peaking at 100 billion 2 ,at 5%3lower proportion of n at only 5%By表强调，增加/降低了多少The percentage gradually declines by 55%With是At之后不一样主语的使用。with 5 q in1988 ,rising to 45q in2012To加增减后的最终数值From 3 to 4/soared to almost 250括号/冒号跟在名词后表示数据防止句子零散TRi：注意词性转化！上升下降一般VIncrease, grow to 5%Decrease, drop,

10、 decline 大幅度VRocket, leapPlump, slump 句首名词The growth is N about 30%Decline /reduction句中名词There be an increase of 30%介词 , up 40% , down 30%分词 ,rising to 7% ,dropping to 6%词组A is on the rise.B is in decline 趋势There be an upward trendThe downward trend is B 结尾：必须写最值/对比/趋势不要出现数据！个人观点或者in conclusion/ the

11、refore Overall /globally /further总结我的问题1，+数据可做同位语 不要用 ，+which定语从句2副词放在动词后面修静态图表：单一数据对比类数据要依次从大到小说动态图表：大小对比+趋势对比【结尾写高值的变化趋势】TA不要丢信息对比！流程图表：开头结尾适当总结+中间做比较(审题，看清词性，注意衔接，总结)1词汇： at first-then-next-after that-the final stageThe process starts from/during the initial phase,The next phase in the process is

12、 The final phase of the procedure is about固：lay accumulate press squeeze form adjust revolveFade recycle fold absorb collect meet convey combineSeparate dry in the sun compound混合物 container液：cool down冷却/flow/pour into倒入/melt into融化/circulate Filtration 过滤 extract 提取气：expand/burn/compress压缩/release/h

13、eat up/be fueled by/ignite点燃2句式 一般现在+被动语态（不能有祈使句和第一人称）in the next period,great chance take place in.In the next .develop into a new stageIn the next the development of entered a new stageThe followingwitnessed/saw a new development ofA and B are crushed into powder by a crusher 范例作文The diagram shows

14、 that there are /In summary, the two diagrams show the manufacturing process of .地图类：1选址题/变迁题（hut/village）词汇：A is A is located/ next to /close to/right across from B /faces northExtended from to A is sited in /on /atA is transformed into B remove/disappear /experiences/witnessed The size /length/wid

15、th/height/depth/weight of A is 分段（根据几个选址/不同时间顺序）-比较优缺点和不同时间段的变化时态+结尾（would/过去将来）哪一个更好/如何发展变化的This map mainly shows the development of .From the map we can clearly find that 大作文写法总结第一种观点类：1agree or disagree (two kinds)100%!高分写法！70%让步段3句破题写法（开头写法） It is widely acknowledged that （解释现象为什么发生？背景+原因） Howev

16、er,题干建议 can hardly improve such/this situation，Although题干建议have value，I do not agree with the Idea of dong Seth .中心段1Tv can interfere with childrens studies and other activities, which can benefit these childrens intellectual development./they may not be able to achieve good grades in exams because

17、screen time displaces the time they could spend doing homework./it is also worrying to see that Tv can crowd out those activities, which can improve childrens intellectual skills, such as reading, playing chess and board games.Another problem is that long screen time can limit childrens social devel

18、opment.those children who sit in front of TV for many hours ,instead of playing games with their peers and communicating with teachers, will become unsocial and unwilling to express their views.without they will On the other hand, I understand that. To summarize, I would urge that P and T although T

19、V shows are a source of knowledge.watching TV can have an adverse impact on exam grades and social kills. 总结中心段落破题写法（开头结尾）The advent of internet has changed the way people live their lives and complete work. (背景)A growing number of people are now considering distance education , which allows them to

20、 complete a degree at home.（题干观点陈述）although distance learning differs from traditional college education in some aspects, learners will possibly find that they can gain as much knowledge from an online course as they do at university.（自己观点） In conclusion, interactive technology has enabled learners

21、to communicate with lectures easily and gain qualifications(总结中心段落观点), so I believe that the distance education is now as good as traditional ways of completing a degree At university.2 Positive/negative (individual/social)50% 破题写法（开头写法）As the world is increasingly globalized ,the changes of commodi

22、ties across the border is proceeding at an astounding rate. (背景)From my point of view, this development can help improve living Standards of customers.（观点）The product from foreign countries are competitively priced and offer good value for money.the main reason is that countries that export these go

23、ods normally have technology and know-how to reduce the cost of production to ensure that these products are highly affordable. For example, china specialists in production of textile products so china-made clothes ,bed linen and footwear are cheaper than local counterparts in many parts of the worl

24、d.Another benefit is that imported goods have challenged domestic manufactures dominance and intensified competition, thereby pushing these producers to put cut prices. It is beneficial to domestic customers because they can spend less on some products essential to their such as food, and the cost o

25、f living will decline. eg:Living alone Positive :independent /how to manage bill/freedom (time/space)rent/construction industry /a rise in the demand for housingNegative :lioness helpless /sense of isolation /unsafe (the old/single we/disa) Depression-anxiety/lack of sene of safety /financial Borden

26、 Push up the priceCC:however/ on the other hand / as /since/foreg :on the other hand/compared with the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone experience some negative feelings ,such as loneliness worry, and sense of isolation.as a result/even is such trend continues/situat

27、ion gets worse, they would suffer from some diseases.like anxiety or depression. Since those living by themselves, are Lack of on immediately emotion support and daily conversation from families and roommates.As for the single women,Obviously,People with diseases no one can sent them to hospitalExpl

28、ain:causes-have no daily communication/immediately accompanyExample-kinds of peopleifthey.when/disturbance interference Effect-exact bills第二类论述类：economic 1discuss both view and give your opinion双边讨论 (1) viewA+ViewB+My opinion：已知观点+再来一个补充例/两个加合/新观点破题写法（全文构架）children are expected to obey different rul

29、es either at home or at school.(背景)strict discipline is sometimes important, but I would argue that it would have an adverse impact on childrens problem-solving abilities.(转折)some people are strong advocates of imposing rules, because rules can hold children accountable for their behavior and help t

30、hem develop good behavior patterns from a young age./unlike Adults, children are normally not aware of bad behavior, and sitting rules can help them realize how to behave in a socially acceptable way./for example, they can learn how to greet others, make polite requests and show table manners, if th

31、ey are required by adults to do so./in addition, rules can also forbid inappropriate behavior, such as bullying, using profanity, cheating in exams and interrupting teachers. Opponents, however, argue that rules can limit the development of problem-solving skills, if those parents who establish stri

32、ct rules give priority to childrens obedience, children will rely heavily on rules./for instance, some rules may dictate what children should do everyday, but when children wen to workforce, they will not know how to manage time without instruction of their parents and teachers. They are unlikely to

33、 achieve success . In my view, strict rules can stifle childrens creativity and they are not破题写法(全文构架)The government sometimes faces opposition when spending its budget on public art, especially in economically tough times.(背景) I reckon that we should give priority to essential services and infrastr

34、uctures and then fund the arts when there is a budget surplus.（作者观点）The supporters of the public funds for the arts argue that cities can become more visually attractive because of art.it is true thatDespite this , many people would argue that public facilities deserve more of public money.In my vie

35、w, improvements in public facilities can promote economy development, but the arts may be less important in economic terms.To sum up, I believe that the government should focus on services and facilities vital to wellbeing of the general public, even though artistic projects can make our cities spec

36、tacular破题写法(结尾可有可无)for the reasons mentioned above, I would suggest that,despite the fact that strict discipline can reduce poor behavior.第三类说明文1 cause and solution (traffic congestion)Cause /result from/stem from/root in/on account of/due to +短语individual:private cars /disobey rules Government:unre

37、asonable plan of traffic/narrow road/undeveloped public tSolutionL individual improve-take public transportation/traffic facilities Take action /spare no effort to do /take measures involves suppose. 1 electronic device/boring/too much homework 2less homework/activity/rules 第一部分作文首段改写总：background +i

38、ntroduction topic+viewpointit is suggested that.should do.Some believe/consider thatwhile othersThere is an discussion about whether Or not It is common/popular that .现象类There is no doubt that It is widely acknowledged/admired thatThere is a fact that However,题干建议 can hardly improve such/this situat

39、ion.同意转化！the former/the latter例题：1背景when/because引导+转折看法but it would have a impact on ability of eg ：Because of science and technology and xx increasing X,现象Although senior citizens can contribute extraordinarily to the society,I would .eg ：doing has been recognized as an effective method of learning

40、, because.Although have highly educational valued, I disagree that2前后对比+树立文章写作思路和目的eg ：people are likely toinstead of It is important to know why and how to reverse this trend?Even though.distant learning has some advantages in some aspects.第二部分分论点叙述分：topic sentence +supporting +further explanation

41、1中心句：topic make/enable/allow to do (一定要出现关键词+连接词)1） topic can have important implications to a countrys economy2） Levying tax can also regulate peoples behavior.3） On the other hand, if taxpayers are subject to high taxes, they may not have the incentive to work hard and entrepreneurs are also not w

42、illing to set up a business.2下定义3讲原因because4做对比：1)In contract/by comparison/despite this,/Opponents, however, argue that2)某件事情产生了什么情形，如果不发生则otherwise, they may migrate to3)虚拟语气（假如发生了一件不可能的事，则）if was/were done, it might be5举例子for example/for instance/in some Asian countries/if 虚拟语气1)they are likely t

43、o.,if .is higher.6说影响this is总in conclusion,+重申观点不要重复+总结所有分论点【不要展望+出新】It would be a better investment for sb Ps：注意观点类题目的限定词（individual/society/family）折中段用词一定不能强硬，in some cases/might/ be likely to多想原因/结果/举例话题一人口老龄化Peoples life expectancy has increased in many countries possibly ,because of improvement

44、s in technology and the increases in personal wealth.Although senior citizens can contribute extraordinarily to society, I would agree that this demographic change can bring about some problems.One Problem associated with an aging population is that health care costs will climb, imposing a burden on

45、 taxpayers.On the other hand, many people would postpone retirement and extend their working life, it is true that their experiences and wisdom are valuable asset to the whole society.2 advantages and disadvantages 双边讨论Advantages: maximize the chance of employment educational resources Make friends

46、from different nationalities to broaden our horizon elitesBe independent learn life skills decent job 远离父母宠爱和即刻的支持Disadvantage: individualism/collectivism meet the language barrier, if they cant speak the language well, they will have a hard time getting messages across.what is more, they are likely to creat culture shock and even conflicts. because they have different cultural ,what they talk about and what the eat are also different.we need to learn about their eating habits, work