2019人教版高中英语必修第一册全册作文指导.doc

1、WELCOM UNITWriting 写一份个人简介技法指导个人简介就是对个人学历、经历、特长、爱好及其他有关情况所作的简明扼要的书面介绍，是有针对性的自我介绍的一种规范化、逻辑化的书面表达。个人简介属于应用文的范畴，通常是针对介绍个人情况、招聘、申请等。写个人简介要讲究遣词用句，措辞要直接，不拐弯抹角；语言要礼貌，但不要过分谦卑。增分佳句1My name is Li Ming. I am a Senior 3 student of Xinhua Middle School. 我是李明，新华中学高三年级的一名学生。2Im Li Hua, an 18yearold girl student in

2、 Class One, Grade Three. Im openminded, easygoing and enthusiastic. I think my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners and I like to make friends.我是李华，18岁，是高三一班的一位女学生。我心胸开阔，性格随和，热情好客。我认为我能够与外国人用英语交流，而且我喜欢交朋友。3First of all, I am among the most diligent students in our school.首先，我是我们学校最勤

3、奋的学生之一。4He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. 他/她是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 5He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from Beijing University.他/她曾就读于当地一所高中，毕业于北京大学。 6He/She is such a learned/strongwilled person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是如此一个博学/意志坚强的人，我们都很钦佩/尊敬他

4、/她。 7He/She devoted all his/her life to the work.他/她把毕生都致力于工作。8He/She made great contributions to our country.他/她对我们国家作出了巨大贡献。 9Last but not least, he is warmhearted and willing to help others in need.最后但同等重要的是，他热心肠，愿意帮助别人。10I have been learning English for nearly six years, so I have a good knowled

5、ge of English.我已经学习英语近六年了，因此我精通英语。精品展示请根据下面的提示写一篇题为“My New English Teacher”的短文。1李老师年轻，漂亮，热情，有活力；2讲课清楚，有耐心，总是鼓励我们；3她教我们刚刚两个星期，但已经成为最受我们欢迎的老师。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇第一步：明确要求该写作属于应用文中的个人简介，人称应该用第三人称，时态为一般现在时。第二步： 确定段落第一段：指明要介绍的人是谁我的新英语老师：李老师第二段：详细描述李老师的性格特征、优点第三段：介绍李老师对我们的影响及我们对她的喜爱第三步：提炼要点1im

6、pression 印象2enthusiastic 热心的 3full_of_energy 精力充沛 4be_very_patient_with 对非常耐心 5encourage 鼓励 6avoid 避免 7embarrassed 尴尬的 8make_mistakes 犯错误 9active 活跃的 10popular 受欢迎的 第四步：句式升级1李老师是一位年轻漂亮的女士。她热情、精力充沛。(一般表达)Mrs. Li is a beautiful young lady. She is enthusiastic and full of energy.(高级表达)Mrs. Li is a beau

7、tiful young lady, enthusiastic_and_full_of_energy. (用形容词作状语)2她总是鼓励我们，并且在我们犯错误时避免让我们感到尴尬。在她的课上每个同学都很积极。(一般表达)She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes. Every student is very active in her class.(高级表达)She_always_encourages_us_and_avoids_making_us_feel_em

8、barrassed_even_when_we_make_mistakes,_so_every_student_is_very_active_in_her_class. (用so合并升级)3到目前为止，李老师教我们仅两个星期。她已经是我们班最受学生欢迎的老师。(一般表达)So far, Mrs. Li has been teaching us for only two weeks. She has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class!(高级表达)So_far,_Mrs._Li_

9、has_been_teaching_us_for_only_two_weeks,_but_she_has_already_become_the_most_popular_teacher_with_all_of_the_students_in_our_class！(合并升级为but 引导的并列句)连句成篇_参考范文：My New English Teacher Mrs. Li is my new English teacher. She has left a very deep impression on me.Mrs. Li is a beautiful young lady, enthusi

10、astic and full of energy. Now I know that she is a really wonderful teacher. She explains everything clearly and is very patient with us. She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class.So far, Mrs. Li has been t

11、eaching us for only two weeks, but she has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class! I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs. Li teaching us.UNIT 1 TEENAGE LIFE Writing 建议信技法指导建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服

12、务等方面提出建议忠告。提出建议时，多用祈使句，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第二人称。谋篇布局建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。因为本写作任务开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。建议信的正文部分分为三部分：第一部分：引出话题；第二部分：提出建议；第三部分：表达祝愿。增分佳句1建议信开头常用句式： I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独

13、。 Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on. 很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。 Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有一些建议可以帮到你。 I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. 如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。2表达建议常用句式： First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends. 首先，为什么

14、不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。 Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better. 其次，你应该尽力与他人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。 Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down. 第三，看书或听音乐是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。 Last but

15、 not least, you should talk with her first. 最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。 As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。3建议信结尾常用句式： I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with

16、you if you can follow the above. 如果你听从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。 I believe that if you follow my advice, youll get along well with your classmates. 我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。 I believe, with your trying, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. 我相信，通过努力，你会克服这些困难的。建议信模板(一)Dear _，Im glad/so

17、rry to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _(引出主题). Here are a few suggestions.First, it is important to _. Then, it also helps to _. Besides, it should be a good idea to _. You can also _.(此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to _， I suggest _ (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, _ (其他建议). Im sure _ (预测可能的结果，给

18、对方以行动的信心和决心)Im looking forward to _ (表达愿望)Sincerely yours，Miss Wang(二)Dear _，(问候语)You wrote that _.(你知晓对方面临的问题) I understand that _.(你理解对方的处境或想法)I think _， because _.(告知对方如何去做并如此做的理由)I am sure that _.(表达自己的期望)Best wishes!_精品展示假设你是你校英语报社的编辑Miss Wang，现在小冬因不善于交流在交友过程中遇到了困难，请你用英语给他写一封100词左右的回信，给他提出一些建议或

19、意见。审题谋篇第一步：明确要求该写作属于应用文类的书信，故要用第一人称来写；信的主要内容是写建议，根据题意，首先明确书信双方的身份，自己为报社编辑，对方是寻求建议的小冬，主题是关于交友中遇到的困难。需要给对方提出下一步的意见和建议，故用一般将来时，同时兼顾书信的特点，会用到表达愿望的情态动词。第二步：确定段落本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手：第一段：首先要陈述自己的关心第二段：指出问题产生的原因，并提出建议第三段：表达自己的希望与祝福第三步：提炼要点1have_trouble_in_making_friends交友有困难2likes_and_dislikes 好恶3get_along_well_

20、with 与相处得好4in_trouble 处于困境中5take_an_active_part_in 积极参加第四步：句式升级1听说你交友困难，我很难过。(一般表达)Im sorry to hear that you cant make friends.(高级表达)Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends.2首先，了解你同学的喜好。(一般表达)First, get to know what your classmates like and what they dont like.(高级表达)First, why not learn ab

21、out your classmates likes and dislikes?3第二，积极参与班级讨论会帮你显示你的友好。(一般表达)Second, taking an active part in the discussions in your class helps to show you are friendly.(高级表达)Second, it will help you to show you are friendly if you take an active part in the discussions in your class.连句成篇_参考范文：Dear Xiao Don

22、g，Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.First, why not learn about your classmates likes and dislikes? Then you can have much in common with them, which helps you get along well with them. Sec

23、ond, it will help you to show you are friendly if you take an active part in the discussions in your class. Third, it would be a good idea to help others when they are in trouble.With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you follow the tips above.Yours

24、，Miss WangUNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUNDWriting 有关旅游的电子邮件技法指导电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样，也包括信头、正文和结尾部分； 电子邮件写作要简单明了，便于阅读；电子邮件的人称及时态则需根据所写的具体内容来确定。增分佳句 It would be a good idea if you travel a lot in your spare time. 如果在你的业余时间能进行多次的旅游实在是太好了。 How is everything going with you？/How are you getting on with

25、 everything? 你最近一切都好吗？ Id like to be your guide and sincerely invite you to come to my house. 我很乐意做你的向导，并诚心地邀请你来我家里做客。 As a native here, Id like to give you some recommendations of the scenic spots here. 作为当地人，我很乐意就这儿的景点向你提一些建议。 Id like to share my travel experience with you. 我很乐意与你分享我的旅游经历。电子邮件模板De

26、ar ，How happy I am to _ (表明收到来信). Im much pleased to inform you _ (简述个人的近况)Last week, we _ (描述具体事情). The landscape was _ (描写具体的景物)I felt _ (描写感受)By the way, Im going to _ (表明意愿与期望)Best wishes.Yours sincerely，精品展示假设你是王涛，暑假期间你和父母一起外出旅游玩得很开心，你想将你的旅游经历用邮件形式与你的英国笔友Tom分享。注意：词数100个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。_ 审题谋篇

27、第一步：明确要求该写作属于应用文旅游话题的电子邮件，主要是分享旅游经历，故应该以第一人称为主；介绍旅游经历时用一般过去时；期望和祝福时应该用一般现在时。第二步：确定段落第一段：引入话题(暑假旅游)第二段：旅游的过程及收获第三段：希望与祝福第三步：提炼要点1originally原本；起初2appreciate 欣赏3historical 历史的4travel_experience 旅游经历5a_collection_of 收集6cultural_treasures 文化财富7natural_scenery 自然景观8have_a_wonderful_time 过得愉快9go_on_a_trip

28、旅行第四步：句式升级1我爸妈和我去了西藏首府拉萨旅行。拉萨也是这个地区政治、经济和文化中心。(一般表达)My parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lhasa.Lhasa is also the political, economic and cultural center of the region.(高级表达)My parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lhasa, which_is_also_the_political,_econ

29、omic_and_cultural_center_of_the_region.(定语从句)2我们都对那儿的自然景观感到震惊， 那儿的自然景观让我们感到平静祥和。(一般表达)We were all surprised by the natural scenery there.The natural scenery there made us feel peaceful and quiet.(高级表达)We were all surprised by the natural scenery there, which_made_us_feel_peaceful_and_quiet.(定语从句)3我们

30、首先参观了布达拉宫，它始建于七世纪。(一般表达)We first visited the Potala Palace which was originally built in the 7th century.(高级表达)We first visited the Potala Palace originally built_in_the_7th_century.(分词作定语)连句成篇_参考范文：Dear Tom，Id like to share my travel experience with you. During this summer holiday, my parents and I

31、 went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lhasa, which is also the political, economic and cultural center of the region.We first visited the Potala Palace originally built in the 7th century. And then, we appreciated a rich collection of cultural treasures in Tibet Museum where we learned some

32、useful historical knowledge about Tibet. During those days, we were all surprised by the natural scenery there, which made us feel peaceful and quiet. I strongly suggest that you travel to Tibet with me next time and Im sure you will have a wonderful time.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Wang

33、TaoUNIT 3 SPORTS AND FITNESSWriting 有关健康生活习惯的说明文技法指导写有关健康生活习惯的说明文时，一般要写明什么样的做法会对健康有利或有害，人们应该怎样做才能保持健康等。该类文章一般采用以下写作策略：1开门见山提出主题，说明自己所发现的关于健康问题的现象。2分析所给内容，然后进行详细说明。说明所给内容时可以先说现象，也可以先说结果，再说引起这种结果的原因。3最后归纳总结或发表意见。这一部分的内容主要是提出解决办法及给出自己的保持健康的建议。增分佳句As far as I am concerned, health is more important than

34、wealth. 依我看，健康远比财富重要。Taking exercise is closely related to health. 运动和健康息息相关。Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealthy and wise. 早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。It is widely believed that plenty of fresh air contributes to good health. 人们普遍认为足够的新鲜空气有助于健康。Nowadays people are beginning to pay mor

35、e attention to their health than ever before. 目前人们开始比以前更关注健康。We should reject junk food, such as instant noodles and hamburgers. 我们应该拒绝垃圾食品，例如方便面和汉堡。Doctors advise us teenagers to sleep at least 8 hours each day. 医生建议我们青少年每天至少要睡8个小时。People come to realize that good health is the most valuable thing

36、a person can have. 人们开始意识到健康是人所能拥有的最有价值的东西。精品展示假设你是王林。过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的健康出现了问题。之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健康。请你根据此经历写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1之前不健康的生活习惯：不吃早饭，经常熬夜，很少锻炼；2导致的问题：肥胖，易生病；3解决的办法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起；4给其他同学的建议：尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯，以保持身体健康。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇第一步：明确要求该写作属于应用文健康话题的应用文写作，主要介绍过去不良健康习惯及导致问题应该用一般过去

37、时；解决办法及给同学们的建议用一般现在时。第二步：确定段落第一段：介绍过去不健康的生活习惯以及造成的危害第二段：阐述介绍摆脱不良习惯的几种方式第三段：总结给其他学生提出建议第三步：提炼要点1unhealthy_living_habits/unhealthy_lifestyle 不健康的生活习惯2skip_breakfast/no_breakfast 不吃早餐3junk_food/rubbish_food 垃圾食品4stay_up_late 熬夜5take_exercise/have_physical_training/do_physical_exercise 锻炼6as_a_result/therefore/thus 结果；因此7become_aware_of 意识到8keep_fit/healthy 保持健康9break_oneself_of/get_out_of_bad_habits 摆脱坏习惯10a_balanced_diet 均衡饮食第四步：句式升级1我经常熬夜，并且很少进行体育锻炼。我肥胖，易生病。(一般表达)I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise. I became too fat and often fell ill.(高级表达)I often stayed up late and to