（英语）中考英语书面表达专项复习1.doc

1、【英语】中考英语书面表达专项复习1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1书面表达难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。要点如下：1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.2. 地点:六楼会议室3. 活动内容：1） 对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos.备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。Boys and gir

2、ls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts

3、for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers,

4、we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our w

5、ishes to each other.Dont be late! Thats all. Thank you!【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, w

6、e are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章

7、表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相

8、学习，共同进步）。3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. Im glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautifu

9、l, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates

10、. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is，Im glad to，Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go b

11、y, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3 写作假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。 Im the mother of a fourteen-year old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the

12、top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陈述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2条建议。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in

13、 China.My idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A stu

14、dents in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I sug

15、gest that you take your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：M

16、y idea is that，There are，Some all-A students in school have.，The reason is，So I suggest that等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of ones own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4 “inspi

17、re” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以 “The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。【答案】The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me

18、and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesnt talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is al

19、ways the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first p

20、rize in last years ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一

21、个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾

22、经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、

23、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesnt talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I cou

24、ld be a student as good as he is.等等。5书面表达某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。过去生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。污染严重，垃圾遍地。.（适当发挥一至两点）现在环境：政府采取措施来改善污染，城市变得越来越整洁。生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人有自己的汽车；生活舒适。交通：新的飞机场已投入使用多年。be in use（投入使用）；旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。将来希望（两点）要求：1. 短文的开头已

25、为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbi

26、sh was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfort

27、able life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题，介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发生的变化。题目中用表格的形式，给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并对将来提出两点希

28、望。审题可知，作文的基本框架和大概内容都有了，需要注意的是在描写过去的时候，需要适当发挥一到两点；还有对将来的希望也需要学生自己发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合理发挥，注意要与文章的其他部分能够很好的结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目要求，合情合理。表达时，需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译表格中的语句，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用，提升文章的档次。语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求，介绍了自己的家乡这些年来的变化。文章是按照时间的顺

29、序，先介绍了家乡过去的面貌，这一部分使用了过去时态，谓语动词都变成了过去式，形式准确。然后是家乡现在的样子，这里主要以一般现在时态为主。最后对家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述清晰、条理，结构合理。文章中语言得体，语句通顺，句式表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范、准确。短文里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and th

30、e city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。6自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。提示词语：powerful，happy，b

31、elieve in，keep doing提示问题：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we become more confident?Its very important to be confident【答案】Its very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So its valuable to us.When I wa

32、s in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You cant believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it su

33、ccessfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should p

34、ut in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then

35、on,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。7上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范；3.80-100词。生词提示：electric adj.电讨论结果25人表示同意35人不同意理由1.这样很方便；2.能节约上学途中的时间。1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥挤，骑电动车也快不起来。【答案】Last week， our class had a discussion about wheth

36、er junior students could ride electric bicycles to go toschool.25 students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didnt agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to g

37、et to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldnt ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇80-100词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，书写时一定注意时

38、态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯通。并且要围绕主题适当发挥。写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结构清晰，要点全面。时态运用正确，书写工整规范。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldnt ri

39、de electric bicycles quickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。考点：提纲类作文。8中央电视台经典咏流传节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示，以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。要点提示：读书的重要性1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；2. 提升自我，增强自信读过的一本书或一首诗1. 作品内容简介；2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。多读书，读好书1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；2. 多读经典文学作品注意：

40、1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：classic 经典作品； open up ones eyes 开阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us

41、 more interested in reading books, especially classics. 【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only

42、open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The books writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816.She had two sisters and o

43、ne brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you w

44、ill eventually achieve your dream.【解析】这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己读过的一本书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一，三人称，一般现在时态和过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。9书面表达假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根据以下信息, 给Angel

45、写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好处。写作要点：1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。2介绍活动的情况：（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。（2）本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。（3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。3说一说网上购书有什么好处。写作要求：1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4至少80词。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of