英语必修一Unit1-Teenage-Life-Reading-for-Writing写作课件.ppt

1、Unit 1Unit 1 Teenage LifeTeenage LifeReading for WritingReading for WritingA letter of adviceBy the end of the class,you will be able to1.write a letter of advice properly using some writing skills in this period.2.master some words,phrases and sentences related to writing a proper letter of advice.

2、1.You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.你写信说你很担心你的朋友陈雷。你写信说你很担心你的朋友陈雷。that 引导的是宾语从句，且在句中不作引导的是宾语从句，且在句中不作成分，无任何意义。成分，无任何意义。be worried about.为为.而担心而担心Chen Lei是是your friend 的同位语的同位语2.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.我完全理解你的焦虑和糟糕的感觉。我完全理解你的焦虑和糟糕的感觉

3、。that 引导宾语从句引导宾语从句从句主语：从句主语：you,并列谓语：并列谓语：are and feel terrible adj.可怕的，糟糕的，令人讨厌可怕的，糟糕的，令人讨厌的的3.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.你认为你的朋友玩电脑游戏过于频繁而你认为你的朋友玩电脑游戏过于频繁而且上网太长的时间。且上网太长的时间。that 引导的宾语从句引导的宾语从句从句中从句中plays和和spends 为并列谓语为并列谓语too much 修饰不可

4、数名词修饰不可数名词sb.spend sometime doing sth.He spends two hours doing the homework.4.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.我建议你跟你的朋友聊聊他的行为。我建议你跟你的朋友聊聊他的行为。that 引导宾语从句引导宾语从句recommend vt.建议建议-宾语从句使用虚拟宾语从句使用虚拟语气语气recommend that sb.(should)do sth.He recommend that he(should)pay more att

5、ention to his homework.5.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.对于你们这一代的青少年来说，被电脑对于你们这一代的青少年来说，被电脑游戏和网络时间吸引没有什么不正常的。游戏和网络时间吸引没有什么不正常的。It is+adj.+for sb.to do sth.，it 为形式为形式主语，主语，to do sth.为真正的主语为真正的主语It is common for us to play games

6、.be attracted to.喜欢喜欢6.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on the other things in life.但是花费太多时间上网有损健康，也会但是花费太多时间上网有损健康，也会让人难集中精力在生活中的其他事情上。让人难集中精力在生活中的其他事情上。Spending.online,动名词作主语，谓语动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数。动词用单数。Smoking is bad for our health.and作并列谓语作并列谓语6.But

7、spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on the other things in life.make+形式宾语形式宾语(it)+宾语补足语宾语补足语(adj.)+to do/that.，to do/that 是真正的主语。是真正的主语。We should make it possible _(finish)the work in a week.I remember I made _clear to you that I was not coming.to finishit

8、7.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and can not concentrate on school and family life.有些学生甚至会沉迷于因特网，无法把有些学生甚至会沉迷于因特网，无法把精力集中在学校和家庭生活上。精力集中在学校和家庭生活上。主语：主语：some students 谓语：谓语：become.and can not concentrateaddicted adj.有瘾的，上瘾的，入迷的有瘾的，上瘾的，入迷的be addicted to(doing)sth.对作某事很入对作某事很入迷迷7.Som

9、e students even become addicted to the Internet and can not concentrate on school and family life.be addicted to(doing)sth.对作某事很入对作某事很入迷迷He is addicted to _(watch)TV.concentrate vt.集中，浓缩集中，浓缩concentrate on 集中精力集中精力watching8.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的

10、爱我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好。好。you.hobbies 为宾语从句，省略引导词为宾语从句，省略引导词that encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某人作某事鼓励某人作某事The teachers encourage their students _(study)hard.encouragement n.鼓励鼓励to study9.Why not discuss the problem together?为什么不和他一起讨论这个问题呢？为什么不和他一起讨论这个问题呢？why not+do sth?用来提建议的句型用来提建议的句型Why not _(go)camping

11、now?go10.I am not sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.我确信他会听你的话，因为你是他的好我确信他会听你的话，因为你是他的好朋友。朋友。since 引导的原因状语从句引导的原因状语从句he will listen to you 作宾语从句，省略引作宾语从句，省略引导词导词that listen to 听听1.Read a letter offering some advice on page 18 and then solve the questions below.1)What is Worried

12、 Friends problem?He is worried about his friend.2)What is Susans advice?Talk to his friend about his behaviour.Encourage his friend to try new hobbies.1.Discuss the problem together with his friend.2.What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions?Write them down.2)I recommend that.I think you

13、should.Why not.?Words:1.焦焦急急的的，担忧的，担忧的 adj._2.在网上在网上 prep._3.推荐推荐,建议建议 v._4.行为行为 n._ v._表现表现5.青少年青少年 n._6.一代人一代人 n._7.吸引吸引 v._ n._ adj._有吸引力的有吸引力的Phrases:1.对对担心担心_2.喜爱喜爱 _3.集中注意力于集中注意力于_ _4.沉溺于，对沉溺于，对上瘾上瘾_5.鼓励某人做某事鼓励某人做某事_6.祝祝一切顺利一切顺利_anxiousonlinerecommendbehaviourbehaveteenagerattractattractionatt

14、ractivegenerationbe worried aboutbe attracted tofocus onconcentrate onbe addicted to encourage sb.to do sth.best wishesSentences：1.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior._2.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies._3.Why not discuss the problem together?_我建议你和

15、你的朋友聊聊他的行为。我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好。为什么不和他一起讨论一下这个问题呢？在写建议信时，应具体点明写信的目的、建议的内容、提出建议的理由和根据，理由要合情合理，语气一定要礼貌。建议信的正文通常采取“三段式结构”：首段(Topic sentenceyour point of view)：一般指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自己的立场作一些解释。中段(Bodyyour advice)：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学委婉地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况，选择得体用语。切忌用语生硬强制，泛泛而谈。尾段(Conclusionyour wishes)：简单予以希望简单予以希望

16、。希望自己的。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助，同时阐明你所提供的建议仅供对方参考。建议能对对方有所帮助，同时阐明你所提供的建议仅供对方参考。1.Im sorry to know that you are now having trouble(in)doing sth.知道你现在在知道你现在在方面有些麻烦方面有些麻烦,我很抱歉。我很抱歉。2.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.很高兴收到你就很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。征求建议的来信。3.My advice/suggestions are as follows./The

17、following is my advice./Here are some tips to help you.我的建议如下我的建议如下/这里有帮助你的一些建议。这里有帮助你的一些建议。第一部分：交代背景第一部分：交代背景+写信目的写信目的First/First of all，why not.？If you do this，you can.Secondly/Whats more,you should/had better do.Then/That way,.It is also helpful/useful to do.,which will Thirdly/In addition/Beside

18、s,it would be a good idea if.By doing this,.As far as Im concerned/Last but not least,doing.is a better choice.When it comes to this problem,I suggest that you should.第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议1.I hope you will find these ideas useful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。我希望你会发现这些办法有用。2.I believe/am sure that if you fol

19、low my advice，youll.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会。I would be grateful if you could consider my advice.I would appreciate it if you could take my adice into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激。3.Looking forward to your early reply.盼望你的早日回复。盼望你的早日回复。第三部分：提出希望采纳建议第三部分：提出希望采纳建议+感谢感谢+盼望回复盼

20、望回复While-writing假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友谊需要时间和投入友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。【审题要素】【审题要素】写作时应注意下面几点：写作时应注意下面几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注

21、意书信的常规格式。书信的常规格式。2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。主。4.内容要点：问题介绍；建议一；建议二；建议三；我内容要点：问题介绍；建议一；建议二；建议三；我的愿望。的愿望。5.注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。【思路引导】【思路引导】本题要求写一封回信，谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：本题要求写一封回信，谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：首先，回应来信中提出的

22、问题，并分析原因。首先，回应来信中提出的问题，并分析原因。其次，针对该问题，提出其次，针对该问题，提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。条合理的建议并说明理由。最后，写一两句结束语，如：希望我的建议对你有帮助等等。最后，写一两句结束语，如：希望我的建议对你有帮助等等。Step 1List the outline of the passage.Paragraph 1：the _ of the letterParagraph 2：the _ that you giveParagraph 3：the writers _purposesuggestionshopeStep 2List the words，

23、phrases and sentences.1.Words and phrases _ n.建议 _ n.情况 _ 交朋友 _ 做有困难 _ 接受某人的建议_ 和同甘共苦 _ 需要 _ 全心全意 tip/advice/suggestion situationmake friendshave trouble/difficulty in doing.take ones adviceshare happiness and sorrow with.call forput ones heart into2.Sentences知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(have trouble/difficult

24、y in.)I am sorry to know _如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(beadj.to do)The situation _要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why not)_，if you want to make friends?我认为一个朋友应该友好、诚实、负责任的。(I think)I think a friend should _你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldnt it be a good idea.？)Wouldnt it be a good idea _that you are having trouble in making fr

25、iends.is easy to change if you take my advice.Why not be a friend firstif you share happiness and sorrowwith your friend?be friendly,honest and responsible.正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes)Just as a saying goes,_我建议你全心全意地交朋友。(recommend that)I recommend that_众所周知，友谊需要时间和投入。(It is well known

26、that/As we all know)It is well known that_.a friend in need is a friend indeed.you(should)put your heart into making friends.friendship calls for time and effortStep 3Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.however，to begin with，in addition，last but not leastDear Su Ru，I am sorry

27、to know that you are having trouble in making friends.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you.To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends？I think a friend should be friendly,honest and responsible.In addition，wouldnt it be a good

28、 idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend?Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed.Last but not least，I recommend that you put your heart into making friends.It is well known that friendship calls for time and effort.I hope you will find these ideas useful.All the bes

29、t.Yours，Li Hua Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order?Does the writer give reasons for the advice?Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions?Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?Is the handwriting easy to read?Step 4 Exchange drafts.Use the checklist to give feedback on your partners draft.Step 5 Summary:What have you learnt in this class?1.Words,phrases and sentences2.Writing skills:Topic,Body,Conclusion