英语作文之叙事类介绍活动安排课件.pptx

1、写人叙事类写人叙事类介绍活动安排介绍活动安排 假定你是李华，一个英国中学文化交流团要来你校交流。请你代表校学生会给对方写一封电子邮件，介绍活动安排。内容包括：1.上午参观学校；2.下午听中国古代文化的讲座；3.晚上文艺演出。注意：1.词数100 左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题：审题：三段式三段式Para3:结尾：期待对方的到来结尾：期待对方的到来Para1:自我介绍，写信背景及目的自我介绍，写信背景及目的Para2:内容要点内容要点人称、时态、体裁人称、时态、体裁作文评分说明：作文评分说明：一、覆盖所有要点，结构完整一、覆盖所有要点，结构完整（15分分）Para 1.自我介绍，

2、写信背景（得知对方来我校交流）自我介绍，写信背景（得知对方来我校交流）2分分 写信目的（介绍活动安排）写信目的（介绍活动安排）2分分Para2.上午参观学校上午参观学校 3 分分 下午听中国古代文化的讲座下午听中国古代文化的讲座 3 分分 晚上文艺演出晚上文艺演出 3 分分Para3.期待对方的到来期待对方的到来 2 分分二、是否有适当增加的内容部分，拓展内容是否合理等。二、是否有适当增加的内容部分，拓展内容是否合理等。3分分三、字体是否工整，卷面是否整洁，字数是否够行数三、字体是否工整，卷面是否整洁，字数是否够行数 （10-12行）行）2分分四、没有书信格式或书信格式错误的扣四、没有书信格式

3、或书信格式错误的扣 1分分。五、语言表达能力强。（衔接自然；使用或尽力使用高级词汇，句型）五、语言表达能力强。（衔接自然；使用或尽力使用高级词汇，句型）4分分How to expand details:result结果结果aim目的目的example举例举例cause 原因(because,since,for,as)(as a result,so that,)(,which)1.2.3.4.5.6.(such as,for example)(aiming at;in order to.）从句解释从句解释details 具体内容细节Dear friends,Im Li Hua,chairman

4、of our school Students Union.Im honored to tell you our arrangements for your visit to our school.In the morning when you arrive,we will show you around our school.So you can get a general idea about our school.Next,there will be a report on Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.The speaker will

5、introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.Later on,we will hold an evening party,where we can put on various performances,such as singing and dancing.Looking forward to y

6、our coming!Yours Li Huashowyou around our school.where we can put on various performances,there will be a reporton Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.+4分So you can get a generalidea about our school.speaker will introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on

7、 Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.such as singing and dancing.+3分as well asEnjoy some writings CCCBBBAAAA You need at least an A to get the writing score.Read the following passages and point out what is not perfect enough.Firstly,in the mornin

8、g we will take you to visit our school.Therefore,we can communicate some culture to you.Secondly,we will go to listen to a lecture which is about Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.In this way can you learn more about Chinese culture.Last but not least,we will have a wonderful art performance

9、in the evening which will show you an unique Chinese culture.I hope that you will introduce some English culture to us and I would appreciate it if you could show your kindness.How to expand details:result结果结果aim目的目的example举例举例cause 原因(because,since,for,as)(as a result,so that,)(,which)1.2.3.4.5.6.(

10、such as,for example)(aiming at;in order to.）从句解释从句解释details 具体内容细节Dear friends,Im Li Hua,chairman of our school Students Union.Im honored to tell you our arrangements for your visit to our school.In the morning when you arrive,we will show you around our school.So you can get a general idea about ou

11、r school.Next,there will be a report on Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.The speaker will introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.Later on,we will hold an eveni

12、ng party,where we can put on various performances,such as singing and dancing.Looking forward to your coming!Yours Li Huawhere we can put on various performances,So you can get a generalidea about our school.speaker will introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.such as singing and dancing.details 细节result 结果 example 举例 从句解释知识储备：good phrases/sentencesHomework