香港朗文-3B-Chapter4-My-diary-写作课件.ppt

1、Primary Longman Elect3B Chapter 4Writing a diary entry using a timelineThis is Annie.She wants to write a diary entry about yesterday.Can you help her?We write about events in a day in the correct order in a diary.You can use a timeline to help you write down the events.In the eveningIn the afternoo

2、nIn the morningThese are the things Annie did yesterday.Put them in the correct order in the timeline.In the eveningIn the afternoonIn the morningIn the eveningIn the afternoonIn the morningNow help Annie write sentences about the events.In the morning I played with my dog.I painted a picture.Use th

3、e simple past tense in diary entries.Link sentences with words such as and.In the morning I played with my dog and painted a picture.In the afternoon I watched a cartoon.I tidied my room.In the afternoon I watched a cartoon and tidied my room.In the evening my uncle and his family visited me.I playe

4、dcomputer games with my cousin.Good!Now you can help Annie write the diary entry.Write the date and the day of the week.Sunday 25th JulyWetDraw or write about the weather.Sunday 25th JulyWetWrite about the events in the morning.In the morning I played with my dog and painted a picture.Sunday 25th Ju

5、lyWetWrite about the events in the afternoon.In the morning I played with my dog and painted a picture.In the afternoon I watched a cartoon and tidied my room.Sunday 25th JulyWetWrite about the events in the evening.In the morning I played with my dog and painted a picture.In the afternoon I watched

6、 a cartoon and tidied my room.In the evening my uncle and his family visited me.I played computer games with my cousin.Sunday 25th JulyWetAdd details to make the entry clearer.In the morning I played with my dog and painted a picture.In the afternoon I watched a cartoon and tidied my room.In the eve

7、ning my uncle and his family visited me.I played computer games with my cousin.It was wet today.I stayed at home all day.I was bored in.My room was messy.IAfter that,I was tired.We had a goodtime.Sunday 25th JulyWet It was wet today.I stayed at home all day.In the morning I played with my dog and pa

8、inted a picture.I was bored in the afternoon.I watched a cartoon.My room was messy.I tidied my room.After that,I was tired.In the evening my uncle and his family visited me.I played computer games with my cousin.We had a good time.Use linking words like so to link sentences.It was wet today so I sta

9、yed at home all day.In theI was bored in the afternoon so I watched a cartoon.My room was messy so I tidied my room.After that,I was tired.Write about your feelings at the end.We were happy.Sunday 25th JulyWet It was wet today so I stayed at home all day.In the morning I played with my dog and painted a picture.I was bored in the afternoon so I watched a cartoon.My room was messy so I tidied my room.After that,I was tired.In the evening my uncle and his family visited me.I played computer games with my cousin.We had a good time.We were happy.Write a diary in English.HomeworkThe End