高考英语复习课件：高分作文抢眼表达法课件.pptx

1、高分作文“抢眼”表达法 知识梳理23课堂练习4课堂小结5课后作业6CONTENTS目录典型例题 课堂导入1写作秘诀六个好，让阅卷老师“无话可说”卷面整洁好印象明确分段好形式要点全面好给分虎头凤尾好内容巧用连接好逻辑(本节课内容）好词好句好语言(本节课内容）：高级词汇和复杂句式 要点分档，语言给分一.十大必用句型1.我认为（Low）I think/In my opinion,高考十大必用句型1.我认为（Low）I think/In my opinion,From my point of view,As far as Im concerned,On a personal level,2.感谢你（L

2、ow）Thank you for2.感谢你（Low）Thank you for make sincere thanks and gratitude to sb.并列结构表达法：形成震撼力 worthy and wealthy有价值的 pleasant and precious珍贵的 safe and sound非常安全的 memorable and meaningful有意义的 honorable and respectable值得尊敬的 colorful and wonderful美好的3.越来越多的（Low）More and more3.越来越多的（Low）More and more St

3、h.is in increasing number a growing number of sth.are例：现在，有越来越多的人使用互联网。In recent decades,a growing number of people are using Internet.4.有机会（Low）have a chance to do sth.4.有机会（Low）have a chance to do sth.own/possess an opportunity to do sth.be in possession of the opportunity that例：很高兴有机会给您写信。I appre

4、ciate being in possession of the opportunity to write to you.5.我们将尽最大努力（Low）We will try our best to5.我们将尽最大努力（Low）We will try our best to We will make every effort to We will spare no effort to不遗余力例：我们将尽最大努力来保护环境。We will spare no effort to protect the environment.6.做是很重要的（Low）Doing sth.is important6

5、.做是很重要的（Low）Doing sth.is important It is important for sb.to do sth.=it is of importace for sb.to do sth可替换的形容词：important(重要的);necessary(必要的);difficult(困难的);vital(极重要的);useful(有用的);helpful(有帮助的);essential(基本的);valuable(有价值的);indispensable(非常必要的);challenging(有挑战的);beneficial(有益的);convenient(方便的)7.我希望

6、所有人（Low）I hope all the people7.我希望所有人（Low）I hope all the people My sincere expectation is that individuals8.如果（Low）If8.如果（Low）If Provided that Assuming that Given that On condition that9.形容词：男：handsome,responsible,aggressive（有进取心的+）,tough（硬汉）humorous=a sense of humor,strong-willed（意志顽强）女：beautiful,c

7、harming,good-looking,brilliant,lovely,sexy,attractive 物：valuable,fantastic(极好的）,wonderful,vivid,lovely,interesting,imaginary（有想象力的）,realistic（真实的，现实主义题材的）10.高考“四大金刚”（历年高考中出现频率高）和谐社会 环境污染 生活便利 不良现象 10.高考“四大金刚”（历年高考中出现频率高）和谐社会 harmonious society 环境污染 environmental pollution 生活便利 convenient life 不良现象 h

8、armful phenomenon二.高级句式：1.There is no denying/doubt that 不可否认2.We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。3.It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.众所周知As is known to all,4.On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能.unde

9、r no circumstance5.When it comes to playing computer games,he will be very excited.当一谈到时，就6.Given/Concerned her qualifications,I think she is suited to the job.考虑到7.动词不定式做连接词 to be frank;to be honest;to tell the truth;to be safe;to be short;to make things worse=unfortunately;to start with8.That is t

10、he reason why I dont like you.那就是.的原因The reason is that.9.It is through reading that we get our knowledge.强调句型10.A good idea suddenly occurred to me that I could use my pocketmoney to buy a present for my mother.It occurred to me that 某人突然想到 strike（struck）、hit11.No sooner had I arrived home than I s

11、tarted to read.Hardlywhen 一就on/upon+doing,the minute/second/moment,instantly+从句，主句On hearing the noise,I opened the door三.名人名言：1.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。2.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。3.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。4.When there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。5.One false step wil

12、l make a great difference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。6.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。7.Experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知。8.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。9.More hasty,less speed.欲速则不达。10.Its never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。11.A journey of a thousand miles begins with

13、 a single step.千里之行始于足下。12.Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功。13.Great minds think alike.英雄所见略同。14.Well begun,half done.好的开始等于成功的一半。15.Facts speak plainer than words.事实胜于雄辩。16.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。17.Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言。18.Its not the gay coat that makes the

14、gentleman.君子在德不在衣。19.Do as Romans do in Rome.入乡随俗。20.An idle youth,a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。21.To live is to learn,to learn is to better live.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。四.各地作文必考内容起：描述现象故事承：表达感情好恶/阐述观点态度转：解释说明原因合：升华主题思想【例1】(2014北京)你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；起2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；承3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

15、转 合五.各个部分的高频词句.我得知.I knowthat（low）(湖北)我从网上得知你们学校提供食宿。(天津)我从老师那儿得知你将来我校交换。(安徽)我从你的来信中得知你近日容易发脾气，使 正常的学习和生活受到了影响。1.我(从)得知 I know that（low）I was informed bythatI was kept up to date onsb./sth.keep me up to date on2.随着的发展，With the development of our society,.(low)(湖南)随着科技的发展，创新精神越来越重要了。(辽宁)随着校园生活的极大丰富，创

16、意无处不在。(浙江)随着学生们对图书的需求增加，我们应该为他们提供更多有意义的书籍。2.随着社会的发展，With the development of our society,.(low)高大空With the development of our education/economy/culture,The education/economy/culture developing,独立主格3.因为(现象)，人们Because/Because of(重庆)因为手机的出现，人们的生活发生了很大变化。北京)因为自行车太多，人们不得不排队等待。(福建)因为众多草根精英的出现，人们对成功有了不同定义。O

17、wing to the phenomenon that（同位语从句）,individualsOur living conditions are faced with a number of changes due to不能置于句首Thanks to,our life are experiencing huge changes,which4.xxx非常喜欢做某事sb.likes/loves/prefers（low）(山东)我非常喜欢这样一句谚语。(湖北)在我小时候，我很喜欢收集邮票。(广东)McCarty 女士热衷于捐款，帮助别人。清晰明确，感情丰富才会吸引阅卷老师4.xxx非常喜欢做某事sb.

18、is fascinated withsb.is immersed insb.is in love withsb.is crazy about sb.is addicted to（贬义）sb.is devoted to5.我们在中应该高度重视这个问题。We should pay attention to（low）(辽宁)我们在校园生活中，应该高度重视创新。(江西)我们应该高度重视高中阶段。(江苏)我们在学习英语的过程中应该高度重视(缩写)这个现象。5.我们应该高度重视这个问题。This phenomenon/issue is supposed to draw our attention.We a

19、re supposed to bear this issue in our mind.We are supposed to be concerned about this phenomenon to the great extent.6.我们将尽最大努力We will try our best to(low)(四川)我们将尽最大努力在高考中发挥出最好水平。(湖南)我们将尽最大努力利用好生活中的废弃物品。(广东)McCarty女士将尽最大努力帮助身边的人。6.我们将尽最大努力We will devote ourselves toWe will be dedicated to.We will ma

20、ke every effort to doWe will spare no efforts to六.好词好句是“换”出来的1.给2.想3.想要4.感谢5.希望6.应该7.真实的 好词好句是“换”出来的1.给give2.想think3.想要want4.感谢thanks5.希望hope6.应该should7.真实的 true好词好句是“换”出来的1.给giveoffer/hand2.想thinkemphasize/insist(虚拟语气）3.想要wantbe eager to/long for4.感谢thanksappreciation/gratitude5.希望hopeexpect6.应该sho

21、uldbe supposed to7.真实的 true in the case8.好的good?9.开心的happy?10.重要的important?11.困难的difficult?12.必要的necessary?13.有用的useful?14.基本的basic?8.好的 good remarkable/outstanding/splendid/fabulous.9.开心的 happy cheerful/delighted/be full of cheer/joy10.重要的important vital(必修一到选修八，越后面出现的词汇越高级）11.困难的difficult challeng

22、ing/tough12.必要的necessary indispensable13.有用的useful contribute to sth/beneficial14.基本的basic essential15.现在nowadays16.机会chance 17.人们people/persons18.一就as soon as19.想出think of 20.节约save 21.提到mention 15.现在nowadaysin recent decades16.机会chance opportunity17.人们people/personsindividuals18.一就as soon ason doi

23、ng/hardly.when/the minute/instantly19.想出think of sb come up with20.节约save set aside21.提到mention refer toSome students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.22.非常 very23.一点 a little/bit24.有时 sometimes25.如果 if26.不得不做 have to do22.非常 very more than23.一点 a little/bit a ha

24、ndful of(把抽象的东西具体化作文就能得到高分）24.有时 sometimes occasionally25.如果 if on condition that/assuming that/given that/considering that26.不得不做 have to do cant help but Im very happy to learn that you are coming in September.Im very happy to learn that you are coming in September.Im more than cheerful to be info

25、rmed that youare coming in September.27.对感兴趣 be interested in28.忙于做某事 be busy doing29.在期间during 30.大多数most of 31.只要 as long as 32.例如 for example 33.事实上 in fact27.对感兴趣 be interested inbe absorbed in/be caught up in28.忙于做某事 be busy doingbe rushed off ones feet29.在期间during in the course of30.大多数most of

26、 the majority of31.只要 as long as given that/considering that/considered that32.例如 for example for instance33.事实上 in fact as a matter of fact七.高考作文常考话题【校内】教学相长；互帮互助；课外丰富【校外】郊游参观；爱心志愿；环保能源；生活百科八.“5步检查法”挽救你的“烂”作文1查：时态、语态、主谓一致2查：句子结构3查：句式重复4查：词汇拼写、词数5查：Chinese-English1查：时态、语态、主谓一致纠错:When I were a little

27、 boy,I always think that once I grow up,itwill be much better.时态：When I were a little boy,I always think that once I growup,it will be much better.主谓不一致：When I were a little boy 句式冗余，主语不明朗：When I were a little boy,I always thinkthat once I grow up,it will be much better.2查：句子结构陈述不如倒装好，状从不如分词好，肯定不如否定

28、好，主动不如被动好。陈述不如倒装好例:我们学校坐落在一条河边。Our school lies by the side of a river.陈述不如倒装好例:我们学校坐落在一条河边。Our school lies by the side of a river.By the sides of a river lies our school.例:我一回到家就开始看书。I started to read as soon as I arrived home.例:他一听到呼救，就跑去救那个小男孩。I started to read as soon as I arrived home.No sooner

29、had I arrived home than I started to read.Hardly had I arrived home when I started to read.状从不如分词好例:因为我是一个学生，所以我应该努力学习，尽力成为一个对国家有用的人。Because I am a student,I should study hard and try mybest to become a useful person for our country.状从不如分词好例:因为我是一个学生，所以我应该努力学习，尽力成为一个对国家有用的人。Because I am a student,I

30、should study hard and try mybest to become a useful person for our country.Being a student,I should study hard and try my bestto become a useful person for our country.肯定不如否定好例1：每个人都在或多或少得影响着别人，也受着别人的影响。Everyone is affecting others more or less,and at the same time affectedby others.肯定不如否定好例1：每个人都在或

31、多或少得影响着别人，也受着别人的影响。Everyone is affecting others more or less,and at the same time affectedby others.There is hardly a man or a woman who is not affecting or affectedby others.例2：老师每天都准时来The teacher comes on time every day例3：他们总是工作They always work.例2：老师每天都准时来The teacher comes on time every dayThe tea

32、cher never fails to come on time例3：他们总是工作They always workThey hardly have time to rest主动不如被动好例:当今社会，我们也可以用手机来拍照或当电脑使用。Nowadays,we can also use cell-phones as cameras and laptops.主动不如被动好例:当今社会，我们也可以用手机来拍照或当电脑使用。Nowadays,we can also use cell-phones as cameras and laptops.Nowadays,cell-phones can also

33、be used as cameras and laptops.3查：句式重复纠错:I know that.I learn that.It will be that.She thinks that And finally she decided that突破主谓宾，用上倒装、强调、定语从句等4查：词汇拼写、词数5查：Chinese-English连接词的巧妙选择低级连接词：按照时间顺序and,but中级连接词：按照逻辑顺序firstly,secondly,besides,moreover高级连接词：非谓语动词 to be honesthaving considered.,.having done

34、主动已完成done被动已完成好作文中必须出现的几个句式(必写的标配）1.分词的使用2.With结构3.It句式4.倒装5.定语从句1.分词的使用1）分词表时间先后：Hearing this,a few people began to run after him.(辽宁)2）分词写景物：Bathed in the sunshine and delighted byfantastic scenery,we headed for 3)分词写逻辑关系：Encouraged by the fact that,wemade every effort to do 2.With结构（独立主格）描写人物：He

35、was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on hisshoulder,with a large suitcase in his left hand.描写景物：With the brilliant sunshine carpeting the way home,Irushed to the destination,energetic and excited.描写事件：A terrible accident happened yesterday,with nine people killed and almost eighty injured.3.It句式 I

36、t is+adj./n.+for sb.to do sth.It is vital for us to learn computer well,because it has changed our life so much.It is+被强调部分+thatIt is through the Internet that we can learn more.It做形式主语It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tapeand learn what is covered in the talk.（全国卷）4.倒装 Only/Not only

37、 位于句首Only in this way can weOnly by this means can weOnly via/through this means can weMerely via this means can we 地点状语位于句首On the wall hangs a picture of our family.As引导的前置结构 although the picture seems ridiculousRidiculous as the picture seems,it still represents aphenomenon/tendency/trend that 5.定

38、语从句.新事物新人物出场时用于介绍 两句并一句：The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not farfrom Jianxin Chinese School.主语一样时，两句可并一句 which指代前一句话：It was quite an experience for us both,which Ill neverforget for the rest of my life.(北京卷)5.定语从句 两句并一句：The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not farfrom Jianxin Chinese School.The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is notfar from Jianxin Chinese School.(全国卷)which指代前一句话：It was quite an experience for us both,which Ill neverforget for the rest of my life.(北京卷)一、好词好句是“换”出来的二、高考作文常考话题三、“5步检查法”挽救你的“烂”作文四、连接词的巧妙选择五、好作文中必须出现的几个句式