高考英语书面表达高分写作指导课件.pptx

1、 英语书面表达高分写作指导英语书面表达高分写作指导Beautify your CompositionBeautify your Composition书面表达在评阅书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则时遵循三原则语言第语言第一一位位(语语言言高高级级)内容第内容第二二位位(要要点点齐齐全全)结构第结构第三三位位(文文章章分分段段)漂亮、地道漂亮、地道高考作文的美高考作文的美语言第语言第一一位位(语语言言高高级级)一、高级词汇和句式一、高级词汇和句式二、修辞手法二、修辞手法三、有效的连词三、有效的连词四、名人名言或谚四、名人名言或谚语语1.高级词汇短语词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多多少少,

2、也也是衡量英语水平的一个是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。重要标志。词汇使用的原则词汇使用的原则人靠人靠衣衣装装,文文靠词装靠词装 1、词组优先原则、词组优先原则2、地道原则。、地道原则。3、避免重复原则、避免重复原则4、后、后、高高、长原则长原则 后学到、较高级、较长词汇。后学到、较高级、较长词汇。四项原则四项原则1、词组优先原则、词组优先原则原文原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2、地道原则、地道原则原文Through trav

3、eling,I learned a lot of knowledge.修正Through traveling,I gainedobtained a lot of knowledge.3、避免重复原则、避免重复原则原文原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television.修正修正I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.4、后高长原则、后高长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇。后学到、较高级、较长词汇。原原 词词 替换词替换词hardverypay attent

4、ion tohappymore and moreDiligentlyrather extremelyattach importance todelighted enjoyablethe increasing number ofAdj.聪明的、脑筋好的聪明的、脑筋好的cleversmartwisebrightintelligent电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computers are very important in our life.2.Computers play a very important role in our puters are

5、 of great importance in our life.5 5、运用高级词汇：、运用高级词汇：As a result,the plan failed.(一般一般)Suddenly I thought out a good idea.(一般一般)The plan turned out to be a failure.(高级高级)A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me(高级高级)She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.(高级高级)She wen

6、t to Austria in order to study music.(一般一般)At the news of her death,he went.(高级高级)She has trouble in pronouncing the word.(高级高级)When he heard she had died,he went pale with sorrow.(一般一般)She cant correctly pronounce the word.(一般一般)运用高级词汇：运用高级词汇：2.句式句式多多样样,文文章增章增“靓靓”使用较丰富的句式：使用较丰富的句式：运用得当运用得当的句子结构可以给文

7、章增色的句子结构可以给文章增色不不少少,从从而使整篇文章因此而生辉而使整篇文章因此而生辉 他昨天下午来的。他昨天下午来的。1.He came here yesterday afternoon.2.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文 无遗漏信无遗漏信息息点点(审题审题)篇章条理清晰：分

8、段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词句式多样句式多样地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？强调句强调句倒装句倒装句 with复合结构复合结构advancedsentences定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句非谓语动词非谓语动词常用谚语常用谚语被动句被动句化腐朽为神奇十十 式一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。操作难度 写作效果I got up late this morning.I didnt catch the early bus.(一般一般)I got up late this morni

9、ng,otherwise I could have caught the early bus.(高级高级)If you go through the gate,youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(一般一般)Go through the gate,and youll find.(高级高级)The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.(高级高级)When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(一般一般)二、主动句与被动句的互换。二、主动句与被动句的互换。操作难度 写作效

10、果The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.Immediate measures should be taken to deal with the present financial crisis.三、将陈述句改为感叹句。操作难度 写作效果1.To prevent the pollution is very importantHow important it is to prevent the pollution!2.She is a clever girl W

11、hat a clever girl she is!四、将陈述句改为倒装句。四、将陈述句改为倒装句。操作难度 写作效果1.We did not realize our mistakes until at that time.Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes.五、将简单句改为强调句。五、将简单句改为强调句。操作难度 写作效果1.Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.It is through hard work that our money is earned b

12、y our parents.六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。操作难度写作效果1.1.同位语和同位语同位语和同位语从从句句(常常用于描述人物、地点等介用于描述人物、地点等介绍性绍性文文段段)1)Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete.He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.(用同位语改写用同位语改写),won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Game

13、s.2.定语从定语从句句(限限制性制性/非限非限制制性性)1)The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,and its slogan is One World,One Dream.The 2008 Olympic Games,.Whose slogan is One World,One Dream,will be held in BJ3.主语从句主语从句1)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.most was his wonderful performance on the

14、stage.What impressed me【推荐句型】：What surprisesastonishedsatisfiedimpressed me is thatWhat I would like to suggest advise put forward is thatWhat matters most is that What I learnconclude from the story is that4.表语从句表语从句 【推荐句型推荐句型】：is no longer what it used to be.我的家乡不再像以前那样了。我的家乡不再像以前那样了。My hometown i

15、s no longer what it used to be.5.状语从句状语从句【推荐句型推荐句型】结果、程度结果、程度 sothat;such that让步让步 no matter how what when where.=whatever,however,whenever,wherever时间时间 was doingwhen 七、将两个简单句合并为一个由七、将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导引导的非限制性定语从句的非限制性定语从句操作难度写作效果1.Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessar

16、y things.Different people have different opinions about it.Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things,which arouses people to think differently八、八、It作形式主语或形式宾语句型作形式主语或形式宾语句型 操作难度写作效果1.You pretend to know what you dont know.Its no good.Its no good pretending to know

17、what you dont know.九、分词结构代替状语/定语从句 操作难度写作效果1.If you work harder,you will do better in the exam next time.,you will do better in the exam next time.Working hard 十、十、with 引导的短语或者复合结构引导的短语或者复合结构 操作难度 写作效果With+宾语宾语+adj./adv./介词短语介词短语/to dodoingdone常用句型常用句型with a population of.with a total area ofwith a

18、long history of years1)这个地区占地这个地区占地2000平方平方千千米米,人人口口10万。万。This area covers an area of 2000 square kilometers,.with a population of 100,000.一、一、肯定不如双否好肯定不如双否好二、二、陈述不如倒装妙陈述不如倒装妙三、三、主动不如被动巧主动不如被动巧四、从句不如分词傲四、从句不如分词傲高级句式使用的原则：抓住高考阅卷老师的心理的秘诀高级句式使用的原则：抓住高考阅卷老师的心理的秘诀 誊写规范不要少誊写规范不要少 修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的修辞的使用在书面表

19、达中算作很大的亮亮点点,在在高中阶段很高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修修辞辞,而而且对且对于考生于考生来来说说,只只要稍加要稍加注注意意,可可以在文章中设计双重否定的句以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。就变成了亮子。就变成了亮点点句句,起起到强调作用。到强调作用。一、肯定不如双否好一、肯定不如双否好I couldnt have made so much progress in English without his help.I have made great progress in English with his help.倒装是一种

20、最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形形式式,足足以应对书面以应对书面表表达达,如如何应用何应用倒倒装装,有有很多方法和技巧。很多方法和技巧。1.Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we solve the problem of pollution.2.So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.3.Diligent as he was,h

21、e failed in passing the exam.4.By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smoking.二、陈述不如倒装妙二、陈述不如倒装妙三、主动不如被动巧三、主动不如被动巧 英语中经常用被动英语中经常用被动语语态态,汉汉语经常用主动语经常用主动语语态态;英英语中经常用是事物或形式主语语中经常用是事物或形式主语开开头头,强强调一件事发生在什么人调一件事发生在什么人身身上上,而而汉语经常用汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的使用被动语态符合英语的习习惯

22、惯,如如果能将整果能将整个文章中个文章中两个句子两个句子变成被动变成被动语语态态,就就会呈现会呈现句型的句型的变变化化,使使整篇文章句型丰富。整篇文章句型丰富。每次可以借五本书最多借十天每次可以借五本书最多借十天We can borrow five books at most,and we can keep them for ten days.At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.哪种表达法分数会更高？哪种表达法分数会更高？几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分几乎所有的状

23、语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词词结结构构,时时间状语间状语从从句句,原原因因状状语语,条条件状语等。件状语等。四、从句不如分词好四、从句不如分词好原文原文 The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.修正修正 Hearing the bad news,the young man couldnt help crying.原文原文 If everything is taken into consideration,we ought to have another chance.修正修正 Everything taken into consideration,we ought to have another chance.但是值得提醒的但是值得提醒的是是,同同学们在使学们在使用复杂的句型和结构用复杂的句型和结构时时,要要有把有把握能正确地表握能正确地表达达;也也要注意分要注意分寸寸,应应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而构而定定,做做到地道得到地道得体体,千千万不能万不能生搬硬生搬硬套套,画画蛇添足。蛇添足。多看 多背 多模仿 多翻译Thank you