高考英语书面表达讲解示范课课件.ppt

1、 To better your writing 国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括:1.自我介绍自我介绍 2.写信目的写信目的 3.话题：我们应该感恩（话题：我们应该感恩（thankful).4.推荐理由推荐理由 5.预祝活动成功预祝活动成功注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右;2.邮件格式已为你给

2、出；邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。在答题卡上作答。A piece of a students work(学生作品）学生作品）My name is Li Hua.I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School.I often visit your web,and from it I know you are finding theme from students all over the world.Now,I write this letter because I want to

3、 recommand a theme.We should thankful is a good theme.Our father and mother throw thick and thin raise us,we should be thankful to them.Our teacher teaches us how to study,leading a lot of knowledge into our head.we should thank to them.as a Chinese,we should be thankfully,because where there is tha

4、nkful,therere hopes to make the world better,and only with a thankful heart,we can realize how beautiful life is.I really hope you can choose my theme.I wish the activity will have an successful end.15分分What makes a good piece of writing?1.neat writing书写书写2.content内容内容3.structure结构结构4.language语言语言Go

5、od first impressionWell organized and smoothly developedEverything required includedNo ChinglishNo Grammatical mistakes exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns应用文写作五部曲应用文写作五部曲step1 topic exploring 审题审题step2 wording 构词构词step3 sentence making 成句成句step4 essay writing 成篇成篇step5 impro

6、ving 修订修订Step1 审题审题1 审体裁审体裁 2 审人称审人称3 审时态审时态4 审要点审要点定文章结构定文章结构09年高考书面表达（重庆卷）年高考书面表达（重庆卷）国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括:自我介绍自我介绍 写信目的写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（话题：我们应该感恩（thankfu

7、l).推荐理由推荐理由 预祝活动成功预祝活动成功注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右;2.邮件格式已为你给出；邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。在答题卡上作答。三段式三段式总总分分总总自我介绍自我介绍写信目的写信目的话题（我们应该感恩）话题（我们应该感恩）列举理由列举理由预祝活动成功预祝活动成功in briefin detailin briefStep2 wording 拼写拼写 词性词性近义词近义词 同音词同音词单复数单复数 冠词冠词大小写大小写 Simple mistakesleave a bad impression!My na

8、me is Li Hua.I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School.I often visit your web,from it I know you are finding topic from students all over the world.Now,I write this letter because I want to recommand a topic.We should thankful is a good topic.Our father and mother through thick and thin rai

9、se us,we should be thankful to them.Our teachers teaches us how to study,leading a lot of knowledge into our head.We should thank to them.as a Chinese,We should be thankfully,because where there is thankful,therere hopes to make the world better,and with a thankful heart,we can realize how beautiful

10、 life is.I really hope you can choose my topic.I wish the activity will have an successful end.beaAslooking for topicsrecommendandthankfulthankfulness17分分step3 sentencing 成句成句1 简单句简单句2 并列句并列句3 复合句复合句4 非谓语形式非谓语形式5 特殊结构特殊结构时态，语态时态，语态别忘了并列连词别忘了并列连词No Chinglish!连词的选择连词的选择主语一致主语一致避生就熟！避生就熟！强调句型；倒装；强调句型；倒

11、装；独立主格结构独立主格结构1.My name is Li Hua.I am a student and I study in XinHua Middle School.2.I often visit your web,and from it I know you are looking for topics from students all over the world.I am Li hua,a student from Xin Hua Middle school.Improve your sentences.I often visit your website,where I got

12、the news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world.1.We should thankful is a good theme.2.Our teachers teaches us how to study,leading a lot of knowledge into our head,we should thank to them.3.Only with a thankful heart,we can realize how beautiful life is.4.I really hope you c

13、an choose my theme.5.I wish the activity will have a successful end.Have a try!1.We should be thankful is a good topic.That we should be grateful is a good idea.2.Our teachers teach us how to study,leading a lot of knowledge into our head.we should thank them.We owe our teachers thanks,for we couldn

14、t be who we are now without their hard work.3.As a Chinese,we should be thankful,and only with a thankful heart,we can realize how beautiful life is.Thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue.Only with a thankful heart,can we fully realize how beautiful life is.4.I really hope you can choos

15、e my topic.I would really appreciate it very much if my topic is chosen.5.I wish the activity will have an successful end.Wish the activity a great success.May your activity succeed.Step4 成篇成篇 That we should be thankful is a good idea.It is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin,so we

16、should thank them.We owe our teachers thanks,for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work.Thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue.Where there is thankfulness,there are hopes to make the world better.Only with a thankful heart,can we fully realize how beautiful life is.As far

17、as Im concernedFirst and foremostThe last but not the leastWhatsmoreNecessary conjunctions make a pieces a writing more smoothly developed.Now,Lets check whether our writing has been improved in content,structure and language?我们的文章我们的文章起来了么起来了么？Im Lihua,a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often v

18、isit your website,where I got the wonderful news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world.Here,Im writing to recommend one.In my opinion,that we should be thankful is a good idea.Firstly,it is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin,so we should thank them.Besides,

19、we owe our teachers thanks,for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work.Whats more,thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue.Where there is thankfulness,there are hopes to make the world better.Only with a thankful heart,can we fully realize how beautiful life is.I would really

20、 appreciate it very much if my topic is chosen.Wish the activity a great success.25分分建议性书信文体模板：Dear.（So glad to have received your last letter),Im(简单自我介绍），简单自我介绍），Im writing to(表明写信目的）表明写信目的）I think.is a good idea/I suggest/recommend/adviseI have my reasons,firstly.,then.,finally.Best regards and wi

21、sh you(简单祝福简单祝福)yoursTips in your daily English learning:1.Collect good words/phrases/sentences;2.Read more;3.Practice makes perfect;4.Be confident anytime.Homework Have a try!重庆模拟（二）重庆模拟（二）每年每年12月你们学校都要举行为期一个月的体育月你们学校都要举行为期一个月的体育节，在今年体育节来临之际，请给学校体育节节，在今年体育节来临之际，请给学校体育节组委写一封信，表达你对体育节的看法和建议。组委写一封信，表达你对体育节的看法和建议。主要内容如下：主要内容如下：1 推荐至少两项活动；推荐至少两项活动；2 说明开展这些活动的理由；说明开展这些活动的理由；3 谈谈你对体育节的看法；谈谈你对体育节的看法；注意：注意：1 词数不少于词数不少于120个个 2 可适当发挥适当想象，增加细节，以便行文可适当发挥适当想象，增加细节，以便行文连贯。连贯。Thank you！