读后续写-公开课课件.ppt

1、Looking very unhappy,a poor man entered a doctors consulting-room(诊室诊室).The poor man said,“doctor,you must help me!I swallowed(吞下吞下)a penny about a month ago.The doctor said:“Good heavens,man!Why have you waited so long?Why dont you come to me on the day you swallowed it?”The poor man replied,“To te

2、ll you the truth,doctor,I didnt need the money so badly then.Wife:“How would you describe me?”Husband:“ABCDEFGHIJK.”Wife:“What does that mean?”Husband:“Admirable,beautiful,cute,diligent,elegant,friendly,generous,and hot.”Wife:“Wow,thank you,but what does IJK mean?”Husband:“Im just kidding.”Whats the

3、 style of the passage?A.Narration(记叙文记叙文)B.Exposition(说明文说明文)C.Argumentation(议论文议论文)whowhen wherewhathowwhyreadingcontent who when where what Why Main idea One day,at Park Avenue,Arthur helped a young man carry a _ when he was on theway to work.Suddenly,he heard the sound of an alarm and found a _ h

4、appened in thebank.When a young woman looked at his suitcase,he thought he might be _ for the bank thief suitcaserobberymistakenClassify the 10 underlined words and phrases.Park Avenuethe young mansuitcasesin the back seatloud noise of an alarmthe bankrobberythe shoutspeoplethe bank thiefWhenWhereWh

5、oWhatWhyHow Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.Tip1:Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first.Because some information in it must be mentioned in paragraph 1.Tip2.Make use o

6、f the key words in the given sentences to infer more information.Para1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“stop,stop!”Arthurthe young manthe taxi driverpurposedialoguefeelingsdestinationPara2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and ArthurArthurthe policemanthe r

7、eal robberdialogueresponsetruth What kind of ending would you prefer for this story?A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.Tip3.Sometimes,the general key word can guide us to imagine reasonably.surprising interesting1.At that time,the young man also appeared in the P

8、olice Station.He looked very angry and shouted at Arthur:“Why did you take away my suitcase?Because of you,I have missed the plane.”It turned out that there were only some clothes in the suitcase.（侯施蔓）（侯施蔓）2.The policeman arrested him and announced that Arthur robbed the bank with the young man.（倪珊）

9、（倪珊）3.The policeman found that young man,the young woman and the taxi driver planned the bank robbery together.The suitcase was filled with money.The policeman praised Arthur for his bravery.（顾锦菲）（顾锦菲）4.However,the young man was not a thief.The real thief was caught by the policeman just now.Arthur

10、made an apology to the young man.What a funny thing he met.（周旋）（周旋）self-evaluation (plot)Be well connected to the given passageand the beginnings of the two paragraphs.Be well organized with at least 5 of the 10 given underlined words.Make sure the story develops logically and reasonably.Never ignor

11、e the basic tone of the article.1.Forget to mention“the taxi”.2.Arthur ran even faster and hurried back home.3.Arthur asked the young man:“Did you rob the bank?”The young man was afraid and nodded.4.Arthur wrote down a sentence on the taxi drivers hand“He is the bank thief.Please drive us to the Pol

12、ice Station.”5.As he was explaining,the two suitcases ran into the Police Station.By using linking words effectively.By adding some details reasonably.By using different sentence structures.Three tips:Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”“Give my suitc

13、ase back to me!”Hearing this,Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief.So he continued running until he stopped a taxi.Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat.Out of breath,Arthur said to the taxi driver,“Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible.I have

14、 a robbery to report to the policeman.”The moment the taxi driver got the request,he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.add some detailsUse different structures Proper linking words The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur ran into it,shouting,“There is a bank

15、robbery and I know who the bank thief is.”On hearing Arthurs story,the policeman decided to head for the bank to investigate the case.However,Just at that moment,the young man came to the police station in a hurry.Out of breath,He told the whole story.As a matter of fact,he was not the bank thief an

16、d what in the suitcase were only some clothes.How embarrassed Arthur was when he learned the truth!add some detailsProper linking wordsUse different structures How to complete a narrative articleStep one:thorough reading(who;when;where;what;why;how)Step two:logical plotting(the plot,the underlined words,the given two sentences,reasonable ending)Step three:vivid writing(linking words,details,sentence structures)