（作文公开课课件）高三英语书面表达指导.ppt

1、如何写好高考书面表达 主题突出书写工整行文流畅表达准确要点齐全书面表达对考生的能力考察书面表达对考生的能力考察高考全国英语新课标I卷-书面表达 (1)准确使用语法和词汇准确使用语法和词汇 语言的准确性是写作中不可忽视的一个重要方面，因为它直接或问接地影响到信息的准确传输。应用语法结构和词汇的应用语法结构和词汇的准确程度准确程度是写作部分评分标准中的一项重要内容。（2）使用一定的句型、词）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思己的意思 任何一篇文章都需要有一个主题，作者应该围绕该主题，借助一些句型、词借助一些句型、词组等的支持，清楚、连贯组等的支持，清楚、连贯地表

2、达自己的思想地表达自己的思想。（一）评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(二)评分标准第五档(21-25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的（精彩迭出）第四档(16-20分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写

3、作目的（清清楚楚）第三档(11-15分)：基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的（马马虎虎）第二档(6-10分)：未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能清楚地传达给读者（糊里糊涂）第一档(1-5分)：未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者（一塌糊涂）评分范围与要求评分范围与要求：分五档：分五档第五档：分：第五档：分：完全完成了试题规定的任务；完全完成了试题规定的任务；覆盖覆盖所有的内容要点所有的内容要点；应用了较多的应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力尽力使用较复杂结构和较高级词汇使用较复杂结构和

4、较高级词汇所致；所致；有效使用了语句间的有效使用了语句间的连接成分连接成分，使全文，使全文结构紧凑结构紧凑完全达到了预期写作的目的完全达到了预期写作的目的 福建英语阅卷评分标准内容要点定档次语言结构分高低 句群连贯做微调2016高考全国英语新课标I卷书面表达评卷情况 0分卷：3.5%1档：8.89%（1-5分档）2档：7.5%（6-10分档）3档：20.1%（11-15分档）4档：档：40.8%（16-20分档）分档）5档：11.9%（21-25分档）2016高考全国英语新课标I卷书面表达抽样调查得分情况 优秀率17.2%及格率53.7%全省平均分14.832016高考全国英语新课标I卷书面表

5、达 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.次数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Ms Jenkins,Yours,Li Hua 审审什什么么 审文体-应用文 审体裁-书信 审人称-第一人称 审时态-现在时 2016高考全国英语新课标I卷 1.认真审题 明确要求 明明确确什什么么 Who writes the letter to whom?I to Ms Jenkins Whats the purpose of the letter?For

6、help 1.认真审题 明确要求 Salutation Opening BodyComplimentary close-closing Signature Dear Ms Jenkins,Li Hua 书信框架 Opening-凤头-精彩亮丽Opening-Hello!/How are you?Body-猪肚-充实丰富Closing-豹尾-响亮有力Closing-Looking forward to your reply.2013高考全国英语新课标I卷书面表达 假定你是李华，请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需

7、说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30要点：1.你叔叔去开会2.他带去了中国画3.是否可以帮忙接机4.李明描述5.航班号6.到达时间2014高考全国英语新课标I卷书面表达 假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）要点：1.计划学习英语2.广告引起了你的注意3.询问有关情况（start dates、class size、hours per week、how much、type of accommodation）2015高考全国英语新课标I卷书面表达 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国

8、文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生活动的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：栏目介绍；稿件内容；稿件长度：约400词；交稿日期：6月2日前。要点：1.写信目的2.栏目介绍3.稿件内容4.稿件长度5.交稿日期6.到达时间 2013（接机）Dear Peter,How are you doing?Looking forward to your reply.2014（广告）Dear Sir/Madam,2015（约稿）Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for your schools English newspaper.2

9、016（求助）Dear Ms Jenkins,Li HuaThe opening of a letter:Hows everything going?How are you?I hope everything is all right.How are you getting along these days?I miss you very much.Its a long time since I got you last letter.I am so sorry for not having written to you for such a long time.The Closing of

10、a letter:Looking forward to your early reply,Hoping to hear from you soon,Hoping you are enjoying good health,Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible,Regretting the trouble I am causing you,Wishing you every success,With best regards,/Best wishes,With best wishes for your success and happines

11、s,With best regards to you and your family,I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.I wish you good health and every success in your work,2.草拟提纲，写出要点 1.the purpose of my writing2.want to do a part-time job3.finish my application letter and resume 4.help me to revise my language and

12、the format 1.I am writing for your help/I am writing to ask for your help.2.plan/would like/love to apply for a part-time job3.finish my application letter and resume4.help me to revise/change/improve the use of words and format表逻辑顺序表逻辑顺序First,second,third then next finallyFor one thing for anotherO

13、n one hand on the other handLast but not least常见的过渡关联词语常见的过渡关联词语附加附加,递进递进:also Whats morein additionfurthermoremoreover besides whats worse转折转折:buthowever on the contrarynevertheless while though otherwise因果因果:because(of)because(of)soso as a resultas a resultas a consequenceas a consequencetherefore

14、thereforethusthussince thanks to 表举例表举例,列举列举for examplefor examplefor instancefor instancesuch assuch astake take for example for exampleand so onand so on概括概括,归纳归纳 in a wordin a word in short in short on the wholeon the whole Generally speakingGenerally speaking as far as I knowas far as I know in

15、summaryin summary in conclusionin conclusion as I have shownas I have shown3.围绕要点，扩写成文 I would love to apply for a part-time job in a foreign trade company.With the summer vacation approaching,I would love to apply for a part-time job in a foreign company in my town(city),where(in which)(I think)I c

16、an practice my spoken English./which(I think)can p r o v i d e m e w i t h m a n y opportunities/chances.3.围绕要点，扩写成文 I am writing to ask for your help.I would love to apply for a part-time job in a foreign trade company.I have finished my application letter and resume.Will you help me to correct the

17、m?3.围绕要点，扩写成文 I have just/already finished my application letter and resume.I have just/already finished my application letter and resume.However,this is the first time for me to write something like that,I am not sure whether they are well written,especially the format.3.围绕要点，扩写成文 Will you help me

18、to correct them?I know you are busy,but could you please help me to correct them?/could you please revise them for me?/could you please be kind enough to revise/improve them/make some changes?3.围绕要点，扩写成文 I have emailed them to you.You can find them in the attachment.I have emailed you and you can fi

19、nd them in the attachment.good writingaccuratecoherentvariedconcise3.围绕要点，扩写成文 让阅卷者在辛苦的评卷中产生愉悦感4.修正错误 认真誊写 2016高考全国英语新课标I卷书面表达学生作品(满分卷)(92 words)Im Li Hua.How are you doing lately?The summer holiday is coming.I want to go to a foreign company that offers a part-time job.As we all know,job-hunting is

20、 difficult to students.So writing a good application letter and resume is important.I have written the application letter and resume that is modified many times.However,there are still many problems.I hope you can help me check the information and format to see whether they are correct or not.Lookin

21、g forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.2016高考全国英语新课标I卷书面表达学生作品(满分卷)(122 words)Im Li Hua,one of your students at English corner every Friday afternoon.I want to apply for a job in summer vacation so I have already finished my personal resume.But I am afraid there may be some problems so

22、 I wonder whether you can give me a hand.First,maybe there are some spelling mistakes but I cant find it.Second,I am not sure the format and other details on my application are all correct.Third,I dont know how to polish my writing.These are my main problems and I hope you can help me to solve them.I hope its convenient for you to help me.And I am looking forward to your early reply by email.40 “只有写，你才会写”-巴金