What-kinds-of-sports-are-you-in-favor-of读后续写公开课展示课件.ppt

1、What kinds of sports are you in favor of?Tips onContinuous writingBPredictingkey informationwhenwherewhowhatstorymind map or outlineproperlanguageSteps of Continuous writing:Steps of Continuous writing:Step1:Step1:A bank clerk,Jane had driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfort

2、unately,on the way an unpleasant topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Jane was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked for quite a long time.The ho

3、t weather in the weekend of July made it harder for her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,hoping to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snow capped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”N

4、o answer.Jane kept moving,but as night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darkness,Jane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴

5、落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane

6、 heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open place and flag them if they came back again.A bank clerk,Jane had

7、 driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Jane was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.Wit

8、h no path to follow,Jane just walked for quite a long time.The hot weather in the weekend of July made it harder for her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,hoping to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snowcapped mountain top.

9、She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No answer.Jane kept moving,but as night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darkness,Jane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the

10、break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her t

11、o the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open p

12、lace and flag them if they came back again.Q1:Who are the main characters?Q2:Where does the story happen?Q3:When does the story happen?Q4:What is the story about?A bank clerk,Jane had driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant topic came up and t

13、hey started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Jane was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked for quite a long time.The hot weather in the weekend of July made it harder for

14、her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,hoping to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No answer.Jane kept moving,but as night was beginning

15、to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darkness,Jane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the

16、sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the

17、trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open place and flag them if they came back again.Q1:Who are the main characters?A bank clerk,Jane had driven three hours to

18、 camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Jane was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Ja

19、ne just walked for quite a long time.The hot weather in the weekend of July made it harder for her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,hoping to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized

20、that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No answer.Jane kept moving,but as night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darkness,Jane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry an

21、d thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she pick

22、ed her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open place and flag them if

23、they came back again.Q1:Who are the main characters?Jane Toma bank clerkJanes husband A bank clerk,Jane had driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Jane

24、was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked for quite a long time.The hot weather in the weekend of July made it harder for her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,hop

25、ing to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No answer.Jane kept moving,but as night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darkness,J

26、ane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank

27、and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes late

28、r,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open place and flag them if they came back again.Q2:Where does the story happen?A bank clerk,Jane had driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant

29、topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by a forest,Jane was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked for quite a long time.The hot weather in the weekend of July ma

30、de it harder for her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,hoping to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No answer.Jane kept moving,but as nig

31、ht was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darkness,Jane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly

32、she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?U

33、nfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open place and flag them if they came back again.Q2:Where does the story happen?the lake by a forest A ban

34、k clerk,Jane had driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Jane was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and

35、 walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked for quite a long time.The hot weather in the weekend of July made it harder for her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,hoping to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snowcapp

36、ed mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No answer.Jane kept moving,but as night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darkness,Jane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.J

37、ane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it

38、would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should

39、 go to an open place and flag them if they came back again.Q3:When does the story happen?A bank clerk,Jane had driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Ja

40、ne was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked for quite a long time.The hot weather in the weekend of July made it harder for her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,

41、hoping to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No answer.Jane kept moving,but as night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darknes

42、s,Jane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She dra

43、nk and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes l

44、ater,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open place and flag them if they came back again.Q3:When does the story happen?the weekend of July A bank clerk,Jane had driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on

45、the way an unpleasant topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Jane was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked for quite a long time.The hot weather i

46、n the weekend of July made it harder for her to find a way out.After climbing onto a high place,she turned around,hoping to find the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,not far away,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No answer.Jan

47、e kept moving,but as night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop.Lying awake in the darkness,Jane wanted Tom the be with her.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewher

48、e at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a hel

49、icopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open place and flag them if they came back again.Q4:What is the story about?A bank

50、 clerk,Jane had driven three hours to camp overnight with her husband Tom.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant topic came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake by the forest,Jane was still so angry with Tom and she said,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and