初中英语作文讲解及配套练习题(DOC 13页).doc

1、初中英语语法English Grammar书面表达（Writing） 中考作文评分标准：结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点 1. 结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式， “观点要点总结”第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话第二段：分2-3点说为什么第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等2.要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。3.逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示

2、递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。4.语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等5.亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文

3、的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。中考作文常犯错误：句子中只能出现以下谓语结构1、行为动词（表示动作和状态的词）原形单三过去式2、系动词+表语（形容词为主）feel/taste/s

4、mell/look/sound+形be+形/名/介短/数get/turn/become+形（名）keep+形3、情态动词+行为动词原形can/may/must/need(not)+v4、助动词+行为动词be+vingdo not/does not/did not/+vhave/has/had+过去分词be+过去分词（被动语态）will/would/be going to+v原在句中真正理解五种简单名结构1、主语+不及物动词2、主语+及物动词+宾语3、主语+系动词+表语4、主语+及物动词+间接宾语（人）+直接宾语（物）5、主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语的补足语中考作文万能首句1. 关于人们有不同的观

5、点。一些人认为There are different opinions among people as to _ .Some people suggest that _2. 俗话说（常言道），它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying_. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是。 Today, _, which have b

6、rought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, _ Second,_. What makes things worse is that_.4. 现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外（而且）。Nowadays，it is common to _. Many people like _ because _. Besides，_. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception，it has both advantages an

7、d disadvantages. 6. 关于人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说），在他们看来， Peoples opinions about _ vary from person to person. Some people say that _.To them,_. 7.已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young andheated debates are right on their way. 8.在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用。它给我

8、们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well9.人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problem () which is becoming more and more serious.10.如今，人们普遍认为.,但是我怀疑.。

9、Nowadays，it is generally/commonly believed that., but I wonder that.11.如同硬币的正反面，.也有积极的一面和消极的一面。Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to.12.近来，.的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。” Currently, the issue of .has been brought to public attention13.随着.的快速增长，.在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。Along with t

10、he rapid growth of .,.has become increasingly important in our daily14.由汽车(或xx）引起的空气和噪音污染对我们的健康造成了危害。”Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.中考真题 61.假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。1

11、. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。注意：1. 词数：不少于100词；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；3. 发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to this years English speech competition.此处不能答题Thank you!【参考范文】Good afternoon. Ladies and gentlemen.Welcome to this yea

12、rs English speech competition. Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition, you should pa

13、y special attention to the following rules. First, you should finish your speech in five minutes. Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently. Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation. I hope that the English speech competition wil be a great success!Thank you! 第二节

14、：书面表达（满分25分）61. 假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信： 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）注意：1.词数不少于100；2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope SchoolDear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.此处不

15、能答题 Yours Sincerely,Li Hua参考范文Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua from Class One , Senior Two . Im writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation. Meanwhile, I can learn how to get along with

16、the students and benefit the whole school.Im kind , easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence . English is my favorite subject and I ve won several prizes in English contests . So I think that Im qualified for the position .I plan to

17、communicate with the students first to know what they need . Besides , Ill try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs , playing games and so on .Id appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .Yours sincerely,Li Hua第二节：书面表达（满分25分）61. 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26

18、日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；下午与我校学生游览海河。注意：1. 词数不少于100；2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：海河 the Haihe River Dear Mr SmithI am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from C

19、henguang High School. _此处不能答题_ Yours sincerely Li Hua参考范文Dear Mr. Smith,I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. Were pleased to hear that your US School Delegation will pay a visit to our school in Tianjin, China. With the commission of our school headmaster, Im fully

20、 responsible for your one-day tour to our school and our city. The following are our preliminary arrangements for your review and comments. Students from both countries will hold a discussion in the morning to enhance their understanding. The topics to be discussed include but not limited to campus

21、life, culture differences and so on. American students are cordially invited to share traditional Chinese dinner with us; the main courses are our local cruises, including Chinese noodles and water dumplings. In the afternoon, after a short rest, we will visit HAIHE River by boat, seeing the wonderful and beautiful scenes of HAIHE, witnessing the great changes that have taken place in Tianjin during the past few years.Please feedback whether youre satisfied with this schedule, and we will make changes as per your opinion in due course. Yours sincerely Li Hua