高中英语读后续写优质课课件.pptx

1、Continuation writing评分原则读后续写总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档第五档(21-25)1.与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理衔接合理。2.内内容丰富，容丰富，应用了应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键个以上短文中标出的关键词语。词语。3.所所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能可能有些有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。错误，但完全不影响意义表达。4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短续写短文结构紧凑文结构紧凑。1.符合所给短文语篇符合所给短文语篇逻辑逻辑(l

2、ogical and creative)2.符合所给短文写作特色符合所给短文写作特色(writing style)Step 1.Warming upStep 1.Warming up (Review the underlined words )The big dog wanted to grab the bone from the puppy.grab v./n.抓住，抢夺 conadj.考虑周到的，体贴的，细心的考虑周到的，体贴的，细心的It was very considerate of you to send me a gift.but wait.what?Why is the litt

3、le girl glaring at you?glare atadj.怒目而视给你个眼神给你个眼神自己体会！自己体会！Is it annoying to speak that way?annoying adj.讨厌的；令人生气的annoyedadj.恼怒的，生气的modesttypicalgreedywell-manneredgratefulnesssighin reliefboldStep 2.PredictingStep 2.Predicting (Pay attention to the underlined words and predict the main idea)woman p

4、lane a packet of cookies man eat think rude thiefThe underlined words应使用5个以上短文中标有的下划线的关键词 (Read the passage for comprehension and learn some writing skills.What happenedFeelingsWriting tip 1 Para1Para1Writing tip 1:Here the writer used _to describe ones feelings and thoughts.What happenedFeelingsWri

5、ting tip 2 The manThe woman Para2-3Para2-3 _cookies _eating _it to_an argument _cookies _the clockWhat happenedFeelings and thoughts Writing tip 3 Para4Para4What happenedFeelingsWriting tip 4 The manThe woman Para5Para5 l Why didnt he evenshow any gratefulness?l He should show somegratefullness.its

6、stronger to show her angerPara6lsighed in relief,refused to look back,boarded the plane,sank in her seatlHow did she feel?lWhat happened next?still angry and didnt want to see the man againStep 4.Predicting and Step 4.Predicting and discussingdiscussing Beginnin(高潮高潮)annoyed excitedangryangrierangri

7、er and angierParagraph 1 As she reached in her baggage,she gasped(喘喘气气)with surprise._Paragraph 2 Surprisingly,she found the man sitting just behind her._Para7What happenedFeelingsWriting tips Why was she surprised?What did she find?Can you find some proof？Para7Para7 Possible answers:shocked,frozen,

8、embarrassed,ashamed,regretfulopen her mouth wide,covered her face with her handsher face turned redj1)If I were the man,I would think the woman was crazy.2)If I had checked my bag at first,I would not have made such a mistake.Why am I so stupid?How would he think of me?Para8Read the first sentence of the last para to know more about the ending of the story.How did she feel?What would she do?Para8 Step 5.While-writing (Start to write,then take photos to share your job.Step 6.Conclusion and Assignment Conclude the theme of the storyConclude the theme of the story：Thank you