英语教研组-张迪-原创教学课件.ppt

1、Proof-readingProof-reading Part 1.Listen to a short piece of music，then correct the wrong words(10)I will run I will climb I will soar （1）Im undefeated （2）Jumping out of my skin pull the chord （3）Yeah I believe it （4）The past is everything we were dont make us who we are （5）so Ill dream until I make

2、 it real and all I see is stars （6）Its not until you fall that you fly （7）When your dreams come alive youre unstoppable （8）take shot chase the sun,find the beautiful a （9）We will glow in the dark turning dust to gold （10）And well dream it possible Possible And we ll dream it possibleIve had many dre

3、ams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple,it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like Tang Dynasty.In the cafe,customers will enjoy yourselves in th

4、e historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.requiresthemselvesordinarytothat/whichamanagingcitiesopenPart 2.实例展现（实例展现（2019全国全国3卷）卷

5、）四不改四不改:标点符号不改。标点符号不改。大小写不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。词序错误不改。单词拼写不改。单词拼写不改。四原则四原则：1.1.以保持原意不变为原则以保持原意不变为原则2.2.以单词形式变化最小为原则以单词形式变化最小为原则3.3.以多以多“改正改正”少少“添删添删”为原则为原则4.4.一对一原则一对一原则Part 3.Analyze the texting points of the proof readingTask1What kind of texting points?1.（2019全国卷3）Now my dream is to opens a cafe.2.（201

6、9全国卷1）All the players on the playground cheered loudly,say that I had a talent for football.3.（2018全国卷3）It was Monday morning,and the writing class had just begin.4.(2018全国3卷）Everyone was silent,wait to see who would be called upon to read his or her paragraph aloud.5.(2017全国卷3）About one month after

7、 this photo was took,I entered my second year of high school.6.（2016全国2卷）Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.beguntakenwaitingsayingshouldopen一、动词的形一、动词的形 (1)(1)动词的动词的 和和 ，不一致的错误；不一致的错误；（2）的误用。（的误用。（doing，done，to do）（3）偶尔会有）偶尔会有 动词的误用。（第动词的误用。（第6题）题）时态时态语态语态主谓主谓非谓语动词非谓语动词情

8、态动词情态动词Task2 What kind of texting points?1.(2019全国3卷）I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.2.(2019全国2卷）Since I was a kid,I have considered different job I would like to do.3.(2019全国1卷）All the player on the playground cheered loudly4.(2018全国3卷）The classroom is a place for learning an

9、d that includes leaning from textbooks,and mistake as well.5.(2017全国2卷）Besides,they often get some informations from the Internet.informationmistakescitiesjobsplayersSummary二、名词的数二、名词的数1.1.与与 名词的混用。名词的混用。2.2.的的 的错用。的错用。可数可数不可数不可数可数可数单复数单复数注意：可数名词单数形式不能单独使用，要么用复数，要么前面加冠词。注意：可数名词单数形式不能单独使用，要么用复数，要么前面加

10、冠词。常见的不可数名词：常见的不可数名词：air，furniture，equipment，fun,homework,paper,news,progress,advice,information,work(工作），工作），baggage,luggage 等等。等等。Task3 What kind of texting points?1.(2019全国1卷）I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground.2.(2019全国2卷）.,whose uniform looked so coolly.3.(2019全国3卷）Wh

11、at I want is not just an ordinarily caf but.4.(2018全国1卷）I felt happily that their life had improved.5.(2018全国3卷）Immediate,I raised my hand.ordinaryImmediatelyhappyhardcoolSummary三、形容词和副词三、形容词和副词1.形容词和副词形容词和副词 级和级和 级的使用。级的使用。2.修饰名词。修饰名词。3.修饰动词、副词、形容词或者修饰动词、副词、形容词或者 句子。句子。比较比较最高级最高级形容词形容词副词副词整个整个Task4

12、 What kind of texting points?1.（2019全国卷3）I want my caf to have a special theme such as like“Tang Dynasty”.2.（2019全国卷2）When I studied chemistry high school.3.（2018全国卷2）Still I was unwilling to play the games for them sometimes.4.（2017全国卷1）It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle

13、 on the road.withofin/atSummary四、介词的误用、多用和少用四、介词的误用、多用和少用主要考察习惯搭配，错误形式主要有主要考察习惯搭配，错误形式主要有 、和和 少词少词多词多词固定搭配固定搭配Task5 What kind of texting points?1.（2019全国卷2）When I studied chemistry at high school,I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.2.（2019全国卷1）Suddenly a football fell just in front of m

14、e but almost hit me.3.（2019全国卷3）Customers will enjoy themselves in the historical environment what is created for them.4.（2018全国卷3）Everyone was silent,waiting to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud.5.（2017全国卷3）Around me in the picture are the things they were very import

15、ant in my life at that time.orwhich/that andandthat/whichSummary五、连词五、连词1 1、连词、连词 等词的前后逻辑误用。等词的前后逻辑误用。2.2.从句连接词从句连接词的误用。的误用。定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句状语从句状语从句but、and、or、so、because、although/though、therefore、howeverTask6 What kind of texting points?1.（2019全国卷3）In the caf,customers will enjoy yourselves in the

16、 historical environment.2.（2018全国卷3）I had done myself homework but I was shy.3.（2018全国卷2）They would say to us that playing cards would help my brain.4.(2017全国卷3）This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.my/thememythemselvesSummary六、代词人称数六、代词人称数1.1.前后前后 不一致。不一致

17、。2.2.人称代词（主格、宾格）、人称代词（主格、宾格）、的误用。的误用。3.3.的混用和误用。（的混用和误用。（anythinganything、somethingsomething、anotheranother等。）等。）人称人称物主代词（形容词性物主代词（形容词性、名词性物主代词）、名词性物主代词）反身代词反身代词不定代词不定代词Task7 What kind of texting points?1.（2019全国卷3）Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.2.Suddenly football

18、fell just in front of me but almost hit me.3.（2018全国卷1）During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.4.（2017全国卷3）Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time.thetheaaSummary七、冠词七、冠词冠词冠词 、的错用或少用、多用。的错用或少用、多用。aanthe八

19、、八、Pay attention to these words(常用词辨析和逻辑）常用词辨析和逻辑）here/there this/thatever/never either/neitherneither/none beside/besidesmany/much ago/beforesome/any both/all九、九、Make a conclusion动词动词时态时态和和语态语态 主谓一致主谓一致勿忘记勿忘记还要注意还要注意非谓语非谓语 名词名词多考多考单复数单复数连词连词并列并列和和从属从属 上下逻辑上下逻辑要清楚要清楚形容副词形容副词看看词性词性 代词代词前后要前后要一致一致介词介词

20、搭配搭配要记牢要记牢 还有还有冠词冠词a/an/the 改完改完复查复查敲定稿敲定稿Part 4.实战演练实战演练Boys and girls,Our club aims to helping the Senior 2 students learn to take a positive attitude towards the problems you were faced with.There will be colorful activity on Saturday afternoons.Firstly,we will regular invite experts give lecture

21、s on psychological problems.You can turn to the experts for advice on what to reduce anxiety.Secondly,the number of discussions will be held,in which you can share you learning experience and methods with each other.You can join in our club in two ways-neither fill in an application form or just register at the campus website.Thank you!areactivitiesregularlytohowayoureitherhelpPart 5.Homework 1.Complete the Task 8 on your paper 2.Go over the texting points of the proof-reading.THANKS