高中英语读后续写公开课课件.ppt

1、Continuation Writingp Whop Whenp Wherep What p Whyp HowThe story is about I,my dad,Uncle Paul,Tina,Ryan and Kyle a summer afternoonthe Wild West,Uncle Pauls farm in Pecos went on a vacation Step1 Read for the basic informationtense(时态时态)?the simple past tenseI wanted to take a horse ride.climaxstory

2、 mountainbeginningdevelopmentendingTip1 Use a story mountain to understand the story better.Step2 Read for the plot BeginningEndingClimaxexcitedimpressedThe plot&the feelingsseeingtravelingIn the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me

3、.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and h

4、is farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.Read for the plot BeginningEndingCl

5、imaxridingexcitedimpressedTip2 Feelings change as the story develops.relaxed joyfulFeelings?seeingtravelingjumping out getting lostThe plot&the feelingsPredict the development of the plot with the clues of the given text the 2 first sentences 10 key words.Step3 Predict the development Para.1It was s

6、ummer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.Para 3His wife.My dad and I spent the night.of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Para.4.“Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”.Clue 1

7、:We had an _ vacation I have never had before.the clues of the given text exciting/unforgettable Clue 2:A suggestive method：to return home_ by riding along the river Clue 3:We got lost because _ they rode off the track Para.1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.wherewhat What was

8、 the rabbit like?What was my reaction to the rabbit?What would we see while chasing the rabbit?What happened next?Step3 Predict the development Para.2 We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We got lost.How did we get lost?How did I feel and what did Dad react?Did we find the way out?How?Who ma

9、y come to our rescue?How about the surroundings in the darkness?Tip 3:By raising questions on your own,you can produce more details of the development of the story.Step3 Predict the developmentdadUncle Paulfarm houseriverfeedsheeplatetrackgot lostsightWho（人物）（人物）When（时间）（时间）Where（地点）（地点）What（行为）（行为）

10、10 key words dad;Uncle Paul;sheepfeed;got lost;sight farm house;river;tracklate Step3 Predict the development第五档第五档(21-25)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理合理。内内容丰富，容丰富，应用了应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能可能有些错误，有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使

11、所有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结续写短文结构紧凑构紧凑。key words logical plotrich,accurate,coherent(连贯的)languageRequirements for writingStep4 Finish the storyThe language of the given text isA.plain and simple B.complicatedC.beautiful D.detailedPossible version Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front o

12、f my horse.“What a lovely rabbit!”I shouted with eyes glittering with terrific excitement.It was quite different from those I saw in our city,thus immediately stimulating my interest.Dad was also stunned by this special rabbit,gawking at it motionlessly.“Dad,lets catch it as our pet!”I suggested,une

13、xpectedly receiving his prompt agreement.Entirely forgetting what Uncle Paul had told us,we chased after that pretty rabbit,frantic with rapture.Unfortunately,so clever and swift was it that it disappeared in the forest before long.Not until then did we realize that the last ray of twilight was quic

14、kly disappearing among the numerous trees and we couldnt find our track at all!We did get lost.Possible version Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.The bone-chilling wind howled fiercely like a wolf,making the darkness even more suffocating.“Dad,what can we do?”I threw m

15、y arms around him tightly,quivering and seized by stark horror.“All is going well!”Dad answered in a gentle voice,calm and mollified.We wandered in the scary forest and didnt know what horrible things would happen to us,hoping to find the way back.Suddenly,we heard the sound of water rolling down th

16、e river.We were over the moon and decided to follow the river.After a while,we heard the familiar sound of sheep and then caught sight of the farm house.The family were waiting for us in the distance.Seeing this,a radiant smile lit up both of our faces.评点：光线的消退暗示了时间的流逝和黑夜的到来，推动了故事情节的发展，与下文的getting d

17、ark衔接；bone-chilling,scary,horrible词的运用以及比喻修辞的运用，渲染了阴森恐怖的气氛，也烘托了主人公内心的害怕、恐惧；同时，河流和羊的声音也为故事的结局提供了线索和出路，给故事画上了圆满的句号。语言语言：准确准确、丰富丰富u语言风格要与原文的风格相一致语言风格要与原文的风格相一致u通过通过细节描写细节描写使续写具有画面感使续写具有画面感uHow to enliven your writing and envision your situation?如何添加细节描写（情绪表达）他很高兴他很高兴。He was very happy/excited/ecstatic.

18、一个人高兴（兴奋）一个人高兴（兴奋）会体现在哪些方面会体现在哪些方面呢？从自身到周围呢？从自身到周围环境进行思考。环境进行思考。他很高兴他很高兴。His smile broadened from ear to ear.(表情之面部表情之面部)He clapped his hands together and jumped up and down with joy.（动作）（动作）He giggled and squealed with excitement.（语言声音）（语言声音）“What a lovely rabbit!”I shouted with eyes glittering wit

19、h terrific excitement.When Tom held her tightly,Jane was_.When Tom held her tightly,it seemed as if Jane were on_ of the world.When Tom held her tightly,her face _and her bright smile _the sky.欢欣雀跃When Tom held her tightly,her eyes _with joy and sweetness.The _(甜蜜的)fragrance of flowers,the faint _(嗡

20、嗡声)of insects as well as the gentle touch of the _(微风)brought back memories of the bygone days shared with Tom,hot tears almost _(涌出)up in her _(变红)eyes.sweet buzzing breeze welling reddened The wind was _ dreadfully and the rain was_from the heaven,_ against the branches of lined trees.The world wa

21、s_ with a sea of darkness.howlingpouringwhippingburdened/loadedThe wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven,whipping against the branches of lined tress.The world was burdened with a sea of drakness.A：A sense of horror crept up on me.B：A flood of fear washed over me.I imm

22、ediately turned around to throw my arms around dad tightly When seeing pupils poor handwriting,felt very_.充满愤怒,紧握拳头，身体僵硬了一会，说不出话。然后慢慢向前走去，教室里的温度似乎都降低了许多，没有人敢抬头。突然，Boiling/Filled with_,clenched his fists,_for seconds,unable to utter a single word.Then he_his feet forward.The temperature in the classr

23、oom seemed to have dropped,and nobody dared to look at him.Suddenly,he _out of the classroom,_ the door furiously behind him.Angela dragged her legs and moved out of the test center,herhead dropped.An air of sorrow and depression could besensed ten yards away.Soon,her eyes began to water.Shewould fa

24、il the math exam,definitely!Disappointment came inwaves and at length,tears streamed down her face.The onlything she was eager to do was rush back home and dropherself onto the shabby little couch and weep,wildly!1.夯实课本知识，做好积累夯实课本知识，做好积累2.关注练习，注重积累关注练习，注重积累3.阅读课外小说，丰富积累阅读课外小说，丰富积累4.学习他人作品，学习他人作品，补充积

25、累补充积累PracticeChoose one of the topic to write a short passage to describe what you would see,hear or think and how you would feel if you were in such a situation.1.It was pitch dark one night and you happened to be in a forest alone.When you were controlled by panic you saw dim light in the distance

26、.2.One afternoon,you stayed home alone.There was a sudden power failure when a rainstorm came.You felt so scared that you didnt know what to do.One possible version1.It was pitch dark one night and you happened to be in a forest alone.When you were controlled by panic you saw dim light in the distan

27、ce.It was pitch dark in the forest.Hearing the weird noises,I felt my skin crawling.The wind howled around trees,like children lost in the night and crying for their mother.Click,click,click.It was my teeth,chattering.Suddenly,I saw a beam of light glowing in the distance.I went rushing towards it.T

28、hen I jammed on the brakes.My spine felt like a big icicle when I figured out what it was.Without thinking,I ran like a hunted animal,bashing into bushes,falling down,staggering to my feet and running on.One possible version2.One afternoon,you stayed home alone.There was a sudden power failure when

29、a rainstorm came.You felt so scared that you didnt know what to do.There was a sudden power failure.I parted my bedroom curtains a tiny crack.It was darker than darkness outside.The lightning was flashing in the sky while the thunder was roaring,which made me feel sick and shivery.I yanked the curtains shut,curled up on the bed.However,it couldnt prevent panic creeping into my bones.Straight away,my stomach clenched up tight.My brain was like a scribble.Before I could think straight,the door was pushed open.Seeing Mom coming back,I sobbed with relief.