高中英语写作课件news-report.pptx

1、 Writing PracticeNews Report新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的，实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性，准确性和及时性。语言要准确，简练，通俗易懂。School Basketball Match A basketball match between the teachers team and the students team was held in the school stadium at 3 oclock,on Friday,Jan 15,2011.The match was wonderful and both t

2、eams played excellently.It ended at half past four.The score was 64:60 in favour of the teachersteam.The match promotes the mutual understanding and friendship between the teachers and the students.headlineeventplacetimedetailsinfluenceXX中学（Suixi High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包

3、括：1.时间与地点：10月30日，相山（Xiang Mountain）2.活动的过程3.你对这次活动的评论注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Words and Expressions:1.鼓励 2.组织 3.促进4.亲近自然 5.使自己从得到放松 1.encourage 2.organize3.promote4.get close to nature5.relax oneself fromSentences:1.为了鼓励同学们参加户外活动，我们学校于10月30日组织了登山活动。2.几百名师生参加了此次活动。3.登山活动让我们更加亲近自然，从沉重的学业中得以放松。4.这

4、次活动还加深了我们之间的友谊。Advanced Sentences:5.用定语从句合并1.2.两句。6.用not only.but also句型合并3.4.两句。In order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise,our school organized a mountain-climbing activity on October 30.Hundreds of teachers and students took part in the activity.The climbing activity got us close to n

5、ature and relax ourselves from heavy school work.It also promoted the friendship among us.In order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise,our school organized a mountain-climbing activity on October 30 which hundreds of teachers and students took part in.Not only did it get us close to natur

6、e and relax ourselves from heavy school work,it also promoted the friendship among us.In order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise,our school organized a mountain-climbing activity on October 30 which hundreds of teachers and students took part in.It was a nice day.At 8:00 am,we gathered

7、on the foot of Xiang Mountain and set off for the top in high spirits.All the way we were chatting,singing and laughing,enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.When someone fell behind,others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later,we all reached at the top of the Xiang Moutain.Bathed

8、 in sunshine,we jumped and cheered with joy.The activity benifited us a lot.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work,it also promoted the friendship among us.What a wonderful activity!eventdetailsinfluenceMountain-climbing Activity现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖

9、花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生高三学生要不要参加春游活动要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。果，写一篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼吸接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康新鲜空气，有利健康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习大脑休息，有利于学习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习Introduction(topic)Body(supporting ideas)ConclusionThe outline of the writi

10、ng:Conclusion paragraph:Introduction paragraph:Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 2 Key words:1.introduction(topic):高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）讨论（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas):接触自然（be close to nature）呼吸新鲜空气（breathe some fresh ai

11、r）精神放松（relax themselves）大脑休息（rest their brains）高考临近（with college entrance examination drawing near）没心情玩（dont feel like going）耽误学习(waste the time)3.conclusion:in my opinion Key words:中学生middle school students 身体差in a poor state of health In bad condition 充足的睡眠enough sleep 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 take more exerci

12、se and do more outdoor activities 定时吃饭少吃零食 have three meals regularly,eat less non-staple food.讲卫生 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go s

13、pring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are agains

14、t the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies Whether or not should Senior 3 students

15、 go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves

16、 for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring

17、 outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea thatOn the other hand,about 35%students areagainst the idea.主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，

18、句式力争多样性开门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage?How will you start you passage?问句：问句：从句：从句：Introduction:（sample）Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions

19、are divided on the question.The body partPoint1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）点）Sentence pattern:Most of us(about 65%)hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健

20、：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康康Sentence pattern:They think it good to do sth/sth do good to sth In their opinion,it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进递进whats more；besi

21、des;moreover;in addition；furthermoreEg:they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.Conclusion:Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应呼应。Eg:They think it will do good to their students.Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We

22、have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest

23、 their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at

24、least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea thatOn the other hand,about 35%students areagainst the idea.whats more,BesidesA A、运用高级词汇或短语、运用高级词汇或短语B B、增加形容词或副词、增加形容词或

25、副词C C、灵活运用各种句型、灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨亮点点拨 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to na

26、ture and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing

27、 near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfresh 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起:Opi

28、nions are divided on this question.Different people hold different/opposite opinions.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一:of them hold the opinion that.of them are in favor of th

29、e idea that People who are for the idea think C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,of them hold a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.People who are against it dont think so.However,every coin has two sides.Different from those.,people think.On the other hand,people think.D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语:In

30、 my opinion/Personally,As far as Im concerned,In short/in brief/in a word,表列举说明的关联词表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/First of all/To begin with,.Secondly Thirdly In the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/Last but not least/,.表示递进、强调的关联词表示递进、强调的关联词.Besides/Apart from/Whats more/In addition/Furthermore/Moreover/worse still/to make matters worse