高中英语作文公开课-高中课件精选.ppt

1、Beautify your sentences(闪亮你的句子）闪亮你的句子）1步骤步骤 v1.好句赏析好句赏析v2.技巧指导技巧指导v3.巩固提高巩固提高2Enjoy a song vWhen I was young I_ to the radio waiting for my favorite songs.When they _ Id sing along.vIt _me smile.vThose _ such happy times and not so long ago.vHow I wondered where they _.vBut theyre back again just li

2、ke a long lost friend.3vWhen I was young I_(listen)to the radio waiting for my favorite songs.When they _(play)Id sing along.vIt _(make)me smile.Those _(be)such happy times and not so long ago.How I wondered where they _(go).vBut theyre back again just like a long lost friend.listenedplayedwerehad g

3、onemade4v思考：思考：vWhat is a beautiful sentence?5vTranslationv郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了IQ很高很高的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（THD Group）总裁黄药师的女儿。总裁黄药师的女儿。v Guo Jing is a man.He is not very clever.He married Huan Rong with a very high IQ.Huang is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of TaoHua

4、Dao Group.vGuo Jing,a not very intelligent man,married a girl named Huang Rong with an extremely high IQ,who is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of THD Group.6vRead the followings and make your wise choice!7vGroup 1vA.We have much homework to do .vB.We have endless homework to do.vC We are

5、burdened with endless homework.vTip 1 高分词汇是首要高分词汇是首要v高分词汇原则高分词汇原则v1.后、高、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇）后、高、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇）vgood vvery v2.词组优先词组优先vtry to do8v3.避免重复避免重复vA.I like reading while my brother likes watching television.vB.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.9vGroup 2vA.This village b

6、uilt a school in 2008.vB.Not until 2008 did this village begin to have its own school.vTip 2 陈述不如倒装妙陈述不如倒装妙 vEg.我从来不买日货我从来不买日货vA.I will never buy any products made in Japan.vB.Never will I buy any products made in Japan.v 10v天空中繁星点点天空中繁星点点 .vIn the sky hang little stars.v河岸上有很多花河岸上有很多花.vOn the bank

7、grow lots of flowers.11vGroup 3 vA.We can borrow five books at most,and we can keep them for ten days.vB.At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.vTip 3 主动不如被动巧主动不如被动巧vEg.最近学校就最近学校就“谁是你的偶像谁是你的偶像”进行了一进行了一次调查。（次调查。（07广东）广东）vRecently a survey has been done on“Who i

8、s you idol?”in our school.12vGroup 4vA.If I am given the chance,I will try my best.vB.Given the chance,I will try my best.v vTip 4分词结构不能少分词结构不能少 v口诀：一去，二看，三改。口诀：一去，二看，三改。v一去：去连词；一去：去连词；v二看：看主语；二看：看主语；v三改：改分词。三改：改分词。v1.童年的纸飞机童年的纸飞机 现在终于飞回我手里现在终于飞回我手里,带来甜蜜的回带来甜蜜的回忆忆vBack flies the paper-airplane and i

9、t brings me the fragrant memory of my childhood.bringing13vTips to beautify your sentencev1.高分词汇是首要高分词汇是首要v2.陈述不如倒装妙陈述不如倒装妙 v3.主动不如被动巧主动不如被动巧 v4.分词结构不能少分词结构不能少 14Task I Rewrite the sentences15v1.In order to reach this goal,we will put up no-smoking signs in all indoor public places.（用被动用被动结构结构）（）（10

10、广东）广东）v2.According to Professor Wang,slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted,which is number 1 in the world.（09广东）广东）v 3.The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48%of the boys choose sports stars.（06广东）广东）v4Shootin

11、g was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.(用分词结构用分词结构)（08广东）广东）16v1.In order to achieve this goal,no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.v2.According to Professor Wang,slightly more than half of the school children in our co

12、untry are short-sighted,ranking the first in the world.v3.The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48%of the boys prefer sports stars.v4.Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.17vTask 2 Translationv

13、1.他建议学生不要过度用眼（他建议学生不要过度用眼（09广东）广东）vHe suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes v2.近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈近视原因很复杂没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。近视。（09广东）广东）vSo complicated are the causes of short-sightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.18v3.1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛（08广东）广东）vWomen were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.v4.约约5.4亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过10万年万年。（。（10广东）广东）vAround 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke,causing 100,000 deaths a year.19Thanks20