高考英语作文写作模板课件.ppt

1、1作文写作2十句作文法十句作文法 其基本模式为：第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句第一句为主题句，点明全文主题；第二句第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。两者关系也可倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句点明主题。第二段为正文，共七句。第三句第三句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。第四至九句第四至九句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意好过渡，以使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句总结句，它将前面的内容总结为一个结果，表明自己的论点。3 写作典例：电视在人们的日常生活中占有很重要的地位，电视传播不断深层次地影响着每一个人。请以“Tel

2、evision”为题，写一篇有关其所带来的积极积极影响的英语短文。4Television Television presents a vivid world in front of us.1(主题句主题句)Through TV,we can learn what is happening half way across the world.2(扩展句扩展句)Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.3(主题句主题句)For one thing,the TV university provides

3、an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university.4(扩扩展句展句)For another,children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as“The Animal World”and“The Mickey Mouse and DuckDonald”.5(扩展句扩展句)Besides,women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the bes

4、t recipe for making fruit cakes.6(扩展句扩展句)Furthermore,we can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs.7(扩展句扩展句)And also we can learn singing,dancing and doing physical exercise in some special TV training courses.8（扩展句）（扩展句）In short,the effect of TVs educational role is becoming more a

5、nd more obvious.9(扩展句扩展句)Having viewed these aspects,and with many more TV programs produced,I believe that our life will become even more significant.10(总结句总结句)5正反观点题型正反观点题型6 There is a widespread concern over the issue that With the fast development of national economy,more and more,which causes s

6、erious Most people have realized that has long been a serious problem.With the development of national economy,a worrying social problem also arises It is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.Different people have different opinions on it.现状现状7 Some peop

7、le think that,while others argue that A majority of people think that A minority of people think that Some people hold the idea that While others think that is a better choice in the following three reasons.Some people say is their favorite.45 per cent of people hold the opinion that The percentage

8、of people who hold the opinion that is 45.正反观点正反观点8 Sixty per cent of the students dont agree with students carrying mobile phones at school.There are sixty per cent of the students who dont agree with students carrying mobile phones at school.9 As far as I am concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat It

9、is not only because,but also because.From my point of view,.The reason is that.For me,I agree with the majority/minority.自己的观点自己的观点10随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休时，有些学校利用它来播放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议。大多数同学认为 部分同学认为 个人看法 能活跃气氛；能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳，使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备；能给大家带来快

10、乐 课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期的效果；课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音。考生陈述 Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not.11 Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not.The opinions are divided.Most of the students think that music should be pl

11、ayed.As we know,music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere.Besides,after hard study,music can bring us relaxation,which reduces the tiredness.This can help us make full preparations for the next class.Listening to music also makes us feel happy.On the other hand,some students dont think so.In t

12、heir opinion,they cant get the expected effect from playing music,for the class break time is too short.What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music.In my opinion,it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break.In

13、 this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest.Besides,I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.12利弊型作文利弊型作文13 Nowadays many people prefer because it has a significant role in our daily life.Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over In fact,there ar

14、e both advantages and disadvantages in 现状现状14优缺点 Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First,优点之一.Besides,优点之二.Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly,优点之一.And secondly,优点之二.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also ap

15、parent.One of the important disadvantages is that 缺点之一To make matters worse，缺点之二Just as a popular saying goes,“every coin has two sides”,讨论议题 is no exception,and in another word,it still has negative aspects.To begin with,缺点之一.In addition,缺点之二 15总结/自己的看法 Through the above analysis,I believe that the

16、 positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore,I would like to From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of,we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题 into ful

17、l play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the 讨论议题.16 网络的利弊网络的利弊 随着科技的发展，电脑在二十一世纪成了人们必要的用品。随之而来，网络与我们的生活息息相关，给现代人的生活、工作带来了无与伦比的方便。通过网络，我们能查寻有用的资料,了解时事动态等等.当你工作了很长时间后去玩电脑游戏，可以减缓你的精神压力，放松你的心情.并且，上网玩游戏也不完全是坏事，因为学生玩游戏可以锻炼手、脑的

18、反应能力，满足学生娱乐需要。但是网络也有弊。长时间的看电脑,电脑发出的辐射对人体有很大的害处。眼睛长期处于紧张状态容易造成近视。现在的电脑游戏众多,某些电脑游戏粗制滥造,甚至含有暴力等不健康内容。有的孩子由于对社会认识不足和自我保护意识缺乏，沉迷网络游戏，网络交友。其实网络并不可怕，只要我们面对网络时多一些认识，网络就会成为我们学习上的有利助手。让我们一起创个干净的网络世界吧！17 With the development of the science and technology,the computer has been becoming the necessity for people

19、in the 21st Century.Following,network is of close link with our life,bringing us incomparable convenience on our life and work.Through the network,we can search for useful data and get to know the current events.When you play computer games after a long-time work,it can relieve your pressure and mak

20、e you feel relaxed.Besides,playing online games is not all bad,for it can fulfill students entertaining requests as well as practice their response ability.However,there still exist some disadvantages in the network.The radiation from the computer will do harm to peoples health if you keep on watchi

21、ng the computer for a long time.And short sight may cause by it for your eyes stay tense.At present,there are too many games on the Internet,but some of them are not of good quality even containing some unhealthy content like violence and so on.Duo to the lack of recognizing society and self-protect

22、ion awareness,some students get addicted in the games and online dating.In fact,network is not that horrible,as long as we know more about it,it will become our right hand on our studies.Lets build a clean network world together.18图表题型作文图表题型作文19段落划分 第一段、说明图表主题句图表说明1图表说明2图表说明3 第二段、说明引起变化的原因主题句原因1原因2原

23、因3 第三段、说明影响或者提出解决办法主题句+建议+前景预测20图表说明 From the chart/table we can see clearly that The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题.The first thing we notice is thatThis means that As is shown by the figure in the table,has been on rise/decrease,from in to in From the sharp rise/decline in the chart

24、,it goes without saying that 21原因 There are at least three reasons accounting for.On the one hand,.On the other hand,is due to the fact that.In addition,is responsible for In my mind,the reasons why the rate has been on the rise are as follows.Three reasons,in my eyes/mind,can account for this pheno

25、menon.Why are there so many?The first reason,in my mind,is that Furthermore,Last but not least,22结论 Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.To successfully cope with the pre

26、sent problem,several measures should be taken.It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly.23Reading Habits of American Students 图表作文，关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量(pop fiction,general nonfiction,science,art等)，给出他们的流动比例对比，说明原因，并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。popular novels 68.2

27、%;unpopular fictions 16.8%;technical books 8.3%;poems5.2%;other books 1.5%popularnovelsunpopularfictionstechnicalbookspoemsother books24 Reading Habits of American Students Seen from the chart,it can be concluded that American students prefer to read popular novels rather than other kinds of books.A

28、mong all the books the students read now,popular novels account for 68.2%while unpopular novels make up16.8%,technical books 8.3%and poem collections only 5.2%.It is no wonder that popular novels have attracted such a large audience.They are written in plain language so that one can easily read them

29、 for entertainment or relaxation.Books of technology and collections of poems are less appealing in that the former is often complicated and the latter abstract.In my own practice,I think it not advisable at all to read popular novels.On the one hand,I spend much of my free time reading books in my

30、specialized field-environmental protection.On the other hand,I take great delight in reading non-fiction such as history and biography so as to be wiser and more reasonable.To turn my dream into reality,I must cherish every minute of my life and work hard.25图画作文图画作文26 第一段：描述图画的大致情况第一段：描述图画的大致情况 第二段：

31、对图画进行适当的阐释（解第二段：对图画进行适当的阐释（解释、说明和分析）释、说明和分析）第三段：给出自己的建议、观点、原第三段：给出自己的建议、观点、原因等等。因等等。27描述图画描述图画 As is vividly shown in the picture,The vivid picture describes a very common phenomenon in our society that In this picture,we are amazed to find that The picture shows us that a river was seriously pollut

32、ed within the last 25years.28阐释阐释 The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into account seriously.First/To begin with,涵义/原因/结果1.Second/Whats more,涵义/原因/结果2.Last but not least/Finally,涵义/原因/结果3.There may/might be three factors which contribute to/are responsible 图片解释的现象。First of all,原因1。And

33、 then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason，I think，is that 原因3。29自己的看法以及解决问题的办法自己的看法以及解决问题的办法 In my view,we should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture.First,we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to/must 具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the probl

34、em of 具体的问题.The picture convinces me that The picture makes aware of the importance of 30下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The burden of students

35、 has been a hot topic for years，but the load of parents has received little attention，especially from their own children.31 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children.The picture shows us a touching m

36、oment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom.Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work,the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.In response,the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she

37、could to let me have the best.But,totally engaged in my own study,I seldom pay my attention to what mother needs and feels,and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing,bedroom cleaning,or at least prepare breakfast

38、 myself,so as to share mothers daily burden.The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a good student.32解决方法题型解决方法题型33 第一段：问题现状第一段：问题现状主题句主题句+现状（现状（1,21,2）怎样解决怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点解决方案的优缺点)主题句主题句+解决办法解决办法1+1+解决办法解决办法2+2+解决办法解决办法3 3 自己的观点或对前景的展望自己的观点或对前景的展望主题句（自己的观点）主题句（自己的

39、观点）+展望展望34问题现状 In recent days,we have to face a problem-问题,which is becoming more and more serious.First,问题的现状Second,举例进一步说明现状.Nowadays,along with the fast pace of economic development,问题 have arisen in national and international business affairs.It had become such a serious problem that it has arou

40、sed the concern from the whole society.If the city residents ever want to increase living quality,the problem of had to be solved.With more and more,this problem has been more and more serious.35解决办法 To,we should do according to the following advice.For one thing,办法1.For another,办法2.Finally,办法3.To s

41、uccessfully cope with the present problem,several measures should be taken.To begin with,办法1.In addition,办法2.Last but no least,办法3.There are many ways to solve the present problem,among which 办法1 is the easiest one.In addition,办法2 is also a good choice.36写在最后写在最后成功的基础在于好的学习习惯成功的基础在于好的学习习惯The foundation of success lies in good habits37谢谢大家荣幸这一路，与你同行ItS An Honor To Walk With You All The Way讲师：XXXXXX XX年XX月XX日