新中考英语复习初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导复习课件经典.ppt

1、 书面表达备考指导书面表达备考指导中考英语复习中考英语复习 一、认真审题认真审题的目的就是要确定时态及人称,同时关注题材格式。时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要与时间状语一致。如ago,last night等用于一般过去时。next year,“in+一段时间”等一般用于将来时。人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thanks to the teachers,we have improved our English.其中we和our就

2、是人称的统一。格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。二、找全信息点1.切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再擦掉。2.根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。值得注意的是找全信息点的时候,尤其要紧扣主题,突出重点。三、成文时表述正确英语写作和语文写作一样,文字表述正确还只是基本的要求,文字的流畅程度同样重要。不过有三点依旧需要注意:1.切忌与汉语提示一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。2.首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾、主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,较好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。3.认真检查,检查信息点

3、是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。四、认真检查,然后将作文誊写在答题卷上。书写时注意按结构分段,书写力求清晰。典例1(2018安徽)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thank you,my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:1.严格要求;2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;4.注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。写作思路一、审题这是一篇提纲作文,写对老师的感谢。写作注意事项如下:1.本文属于记叙文,文章所用的时态要以

4、一般过去时态或一般现在时态为主;2.人称上以第三人称为主,注意代词的运用;3.注意多使用一些好的句型、句式,以使文章表达流畅,有节奏感。二、可用素材1.词汇:be strict with,fail,patient,difficult,deal with,encourage,help,give up,make progress2.句式:When she found I was very worried,she encouraged me to study harder.She was always patient to make me understand every single questi

5、on.With her help,Ive had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Not only does she explain everything clearly but also she is very patient with us.One possible version:Thank you,my teacher!Mrs.Li is my English teacher during my three-year middle school studies.She has l

6、eft a very good impression on me.She is a really wonderful teacher.Not only does she explain everything clearly but also she is very patient with us.Besides,her class is well organized and in class she always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes,so every stu

7、dent is very active in the class discussion.She has already been popular with all of the students in our class!With Mrs.Lis help,I have made much progress in English.Thank you,Mrs.Li!Thanks for helping and encouraging me!典例2上高中后的第一节英语课上,老师要求每个同学用英语做一分钟的自我介绍。请准备一份80100词的发言稿,内容应涉及以下四个方面:1.家庭情况;2.学习上的强

8、项与弱项;3.兴趣与爱好;4.对高中生活的期待。要求:1.内容反映自己的真实情况,但不得在文中提及真实的人名、地名和校名;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。Hello,everybody,Nice to meet you.My name is Li Huan.Im from Rainbow High School.写作思路一、审题本篇作文是一篇提纲作文,要求写作的内容是自我介绍,需要介绍的内容要点已经全部给出。考生需要做的就是把这些信息整合到一起,组成一篇完整的文章。此话题正是初中英语的重点话题之一,也是常考的写作话题之一。注意事项:1.本文是说明文,以一般现在时为主;2.本文是自我介绍,写作时以

9、第一人称为主;3.写作注意包含所给提示的所有要点,不要遗漏。二、可用素材1.词汇:parents,member,brother,work,doctor,teacher,interest,hobby,be good at,be poor in,look forward to.2.句型:Both my parents are working far away from home.At school I am good at math,physics and chemistry.I am going to work together with my new teachers and new clas

10、smates.Im looking forward to making friends with you.One possible version:Hello,everybody,Nice to meet you.My name is Li Huan.Im from Rainbow High School.There are three people in my family.My father works in a computer company and my mother is a housewife.Im the only child in my family.Im good at m

11、ath and physics which are interesting for me.But Im weak in geography.It is difficult for me.In my spare time,I like to read novels and play sports.Lu Xun is my favorite author and I admire the basketball star,Yao Ming.I hope to get good grades at senior high school,and get along well with all the t

12、eachers and classmates.Thats all.Thanks a lot!素养训练提高【1】(2018安徽明光二模)近年来,人们非常关注学生的安全。很多学校为此取消了许多有意义的外出活动,如春游、夏令营、野餐等。假如你是育英中学的一名学生张硕,请给曾校长发一封电子邮件,就此发表自己的见解。要点如下:1.安全第一,但开展一些户外活动也是很有必要的;2.通过这些活动,学生不仅能增长知识,还能开拓视野;3.与大自然亲密接触,能增强同学们的环保意识;4.建议学校在活动之前教给学生一些安全常识,让学生学会保护自己和自救。参考词汇:outdoor activities户外活动;widen

13、 ones horizon开拓视野注意:1.词数80100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4.邮件的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Zeng,Im sorry to trouble you.Im Zhang Shuo,a student from Yuying Middle School.Im writing to you about outdoor activities.Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us?Of course,safety comes first

14、.But its necessary for us to take part in such activities.In my opinion,we can learn more knowledge and widen our horizon in this way.Whats more,its a good way for us to learn to protect the environment by staying close to the nature.And we can get on well with our teachers and classmates.Why not sh

15、ow us some safety knowledge before these activities?Its a good chance for us to learn to protect and save ourselves.Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Shuo【2】(2018安徽安庆模拟)再过半年你将成为一名高中生,那么你应该怎样完善自己呢?请以“How to be an excellent student”为题,写一篇英语短文。提示:1.遵守校纪校规(按时到校,不吸烟);2.养成良好的学习习惯(上课认真听讲、课后复习、学会放松等);3.与人沟通,学会分享,互相帮助

16、;4.在家为父母做些力所能及的家务活(洗碗、打扫卫生等);5.保护环境,积极参与志愿者工作。要求:1.词数:80100。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.必须包括全部要点,但不能逐词翻译,可适当发挥。How to be an excellent studentIm going to be a senior high school student.How can I be an excellent student?First,I will follow the school rules.I will go to school on time and I wont smoke.Second,its

17、 also important to have good study habits.I will listen to the teachers carefully in class.Third,I am going to learn to share what I have with my classmates and help my classmates.Fourth,at home,I will try to help my parents do some housework because they are very tired every day.At last,I will prot

18、ect the environment and actively participate in volunteer work.I believe Ill be an excellent student in senior high school.【3】(2019预测)假如你是杨洋,目前正在美国学习,你在网上看到圣约瑟夫孤儿院(St.Joseph Orphanage)正在招募暑假志愿者。请你根据以下招聘信息,给这家孤儿院写一封申请信。招募志愿者:1.工作时间:7月1日至8月31日,每周工作10个小时。2.工作范围:给孩子提供帮助;帮助老师组织班会等等。注意:1.词数80100;2.不要逐句翻译,

19、可适当发挥;3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,I read your advertisement on the Internet yesterday.Im writing to tell you that Id like to work as a volunteer in St.Joseph Orphanage.As a student,I have enough free time during the coming summer vacation.So I can work ten hours per week during the request

20、ed two months.Besides,Im outgoing and careful.This makes it easy for me to provide care for the children.Whats more,I can also be a good helper in class.I am really good at organizing class activities since I am a leader of our schools study club.If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer,I will try

21、 my best to do the job well.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Yang Yang【4】时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的,那么怎样才能更好地利用时间呢?请用英语写一篇题目为“How to Save Time”的短文。内容包括:1.时间的意义和重要性;2.人们浪费时间的现象(至少3种);3.节省时间的方法(至少3个);4.号召大家节约时间。注意:1.词数80100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。How to Save TimeWe have ever heard of“Time

22、 is money.Time is life.”Time is very important to everyone.But we can see people waste their time everywhere.They spend much time playing computer games,drinking,sleeping late and so on.Its necessary for us to save our valuable time.We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can

23、 save more time to learn something else after class.We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time.We should spend more time reading instead of playing games.If we can make good use of time,we are sure to get more.Saving time is to saving life.Lets save time from now

24、 on.中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第一档（第一档（13-1513-15分）分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（第二档（10-1210-12分）分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（第三档（7-97-9分）分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（第四档（4-64-6分）分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。只能

25、传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（第五档（0-30-3分）分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。书写书写(卷面卷面)：隐藏的评分标准！：隐藏的评分标准！Alice is my a best friend,she come from Canada.she is very tall,hair is very long,he like sports.but I dont know if does she like swim?She likes chinese,and she do well in it,we

26、all very like she.去掉去掉comesShe her shelikes去掉去掉likesswimmingChinesedoes去掉去掉hervery much分析结构分析结构 Hobbies and studiesMike is crazy about football!He loves watching football matches.Of course,he loves playing football too.He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school.

27、His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5:30.He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies.He wishes he could have his parents support.IntroductionMain bodyConclusion总-分-总The bodyThe body主题句主题句-说出文中的要点、核心【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开

28、展叙述、讨论。【注意使用连接词注意使用连接词】结论句-对全文的总结和概括。【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】誊誊查查美美连连列列审审作文作文查是否无误查是否无误审清题意审清题意巧用关联词巧用关联词列出要点列出要点誊写规范誊写规范 Writing skillsseven steps加加加首尾加首尾时态时态人称人称体裁（记叙文，体裁（记叙文，应用文，议论文）应用文，议论文）第一步第一步:审审审清题意审清题意,找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画用笔勾画主题主题。节约资源节约资源,保护环境保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。从我们身边的小事做起。Li M

29、ing Li Ming 是一个注是一个注重重“低碳低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他生活的中学生，假设你是他,请以请以“My Low-carbon “My Low-carbon Life”Life”为题，写一篇为题，写一篇8080词左右的短文，简单描述自己的词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生低碳生活活”。要点：要点：(1)每天步行上学每天步行上学;(2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张充分使用纸张 （5)不使用塑料袋。不使用塑料袋。参考词：参考词：on foot,tur

30、n off,tap(on foot,turn off,tap(水龙头水龙头),reuse,),reuse,make full use of,plastic bag make full use of,plastic bag 写作要求：（写作要求：（1 1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；（但不要逐条翻译；（2 2）不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。主题主题人称人称时态时态体裁体裁字数字数要点要点以一般现在时为主以一般现在时为主具体做法：具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏不要遗漏要点！

31、要点！用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.第二步：列第二步：列抓住题意，列出要点抓住题意，列出要点1.I go to school on foot every day./I walk to school every day.2.Remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans.3.Turn off the tap.reuse water.4.I make full use of paper.5.Dont use plastic bags.要要点点:(:(1)每天步行上学每天步行上学;(2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇

32、、电视等；离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张充分使用纸张;（5)不使用塑料袋。不使用塑料袋。开头：开头：My name is Li Ming.I am a middle My name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I like having a low-school student.I like having a low-carbon life.carbon life.结尾：结尾：Its important for us to protect the

33、 Its important for us to protect the environment.environment./Its important for us to/Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.environment.第第三三步：步：加首尾，使文章结构完整。加首尾，使文章结构完整。开头开头:简洁、漂亮，开门见山，表明观点。简洁、漂亮，开门见山，表明观点。结尾结尾:给出评论，发表己见，画龙点睛，首

34、尾呼应。给出评论，发表己见，画龙点睛，首尾呼应。注意：注意：恰当运用恰当运用关联词关联词和和过渡句过渡句，使文章层次，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。清晰，各部分衔接自然。I always remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom.I think saving paper is necessary,so I make full use of paper第第四四步步:连连巧用联词巧用联词过渡句过渡句第五步第五步:美美在有把握的情况下，展示自己的写作在有把握的情况下，展示自己的写作功

35、底。功底。变换句式变换句式时间状语从句时间状语从句Turn off the tap.reuse water.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water.for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers.I always remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans when I leave t

36、he classroom.Remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans.第六步第六步:查查通读全文，通读全文，检查复核检查复核九查：九查：1.1.格式、时态是否正确格式、时态是否正确 2.2.主谓是否一致主谓是否一致 3.3.要点是否全面要点是否全面 4.4.人称是否正确人称是否正确 5.5.语序是否有问题语序是否有问题 6.6.语言是否符合习惯语言是否符合习惯 7.7.句子结构是否完整句子结构是否完整 8.8.固定短语是否恰当固定短语是否恰当 9.9.拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等是否准确等

37、 卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分。卷面潦草一定要扣分。第七步第七步:誊誊誊文章，誊文章，规范整洁规范整洁书书 写写 注注 意意 事事 项：项：1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象给人一种凌乱的感觉3、一旦写错，规范修改用一条斜线划掉即可。egeg:He can:He can spekerspeker speak English very well.speak English very well.My name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I like havi

38、ng a low-carbon life.I go to school on foot every day.I always remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water,for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor and w

39、ater flowers.I never use plastic bags.I think saving paper is necessary,so I often make full use of paper.Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.a nice head(总总)a nicebody（分）（分）a nice tail（总）（总）范文展示范文展示IX.书面表达（共1题，计15分）每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，“My favorite_”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件

40、你最喜爱的衣服。1.时态2.人称3.首尾用书面表达七步法写这篇短文。用书面表达七步法写这篇短文。范文范文 My favorite T-shirt Among all my clothes,I like one of the T-shirt best.It is white.It is made of cotton and fiber,so its very comfortable.I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it.Its a special gift from him.He sent it to

41、me last year for my 14th birthday.I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends.It makes me remember the time we two spend together.This is my favorite T-shirt.It brings me a lot of happy memories.How to write a goodcomposition开头开头:开门见山开门见山中间中间结尾结尾:与主题相呼应与主题相呼应 强劲有力强劲有力抓要点抓要点找连接词找连接词造好句造好句连句成段连句成段 1.时态、人称把握准；2.主谓一致细检查；3.上下文连贯很重要；4.多用熟悉、有把握的词汇和基本句型，避免汉语式英语；5:多记同义句和同义词,不会表达，化难为易，化繁为简，另辟蹊径；6.适当使用并列句或主从复合句提分；7.注意单词拼写、标点符号和大小写。牢记写作小法宝：牢记写作小法宝：