六年级第一学期写作总复习课件.ppt

1、1.1.多用关联词多用关联词(because,and)(because,and)2.2.注意时态。注意时态。3.3.注意介词、大小写等细节。注意介词、大小写等细节。4.4.开头空两格。开头空两格。5.5.有情节。有情节。1.1.确立时态确立时态2.2.确立句型框架确立句型框架写一篇关于暑假生活的短文，将短文写写一篇关于暑假生活的短文，将短文写在答题纸上。在答题纸上。My last summerWhat?Where?How?I went to Shanghai last summer.I went there by air.I saw many museums.I had a lot of fu

2、n.My last summerWhat?Where?How?I went to Shanghai last summer.I went there by air,because its fast.I saw many museums.I took many photos there.I had a lot of fun.My last summerWhat?Where?How?I went to Shanghai last summer.I went there by air,because its fast.I visited many museums.I knew more about

3、the city.But I came back late because I was sleeping in the hotel and missed the flight.I was upset.My last summerWhat?Where?How?1.1.确立时态确立时态2.2.确立句型框架确立句型框架写一篇周末生活的短文，将短文写在答写一篇周末生活的短文，将短文写在答题纸上。题纸上。My last weekendWhat?Where?How?I was happy last weekend.I went to the park.I played with my friends.I

4、had a lot of fun.My last weekendWhat?Where?How?I was happy last weekend.I finished my homework early.Then,I went to the park.I played football with my friends.I had a lot of fun.My last weekendWhat?Where?How?I was happy last weekend,because I did many things.First,I wrote some stories at home.They w

5、ere about science.Then,I played football with my friends.We won the game.I came back home late,because I had a party with my friends.I had a good time.1.1.确立时态确立时态2.2.确立句型框架确立句型框架写一篇介绍自己的短文，将短文写在答写一篇介绍自己的短文，将短文写在答题纸上。题纸上。MyselfNameAge/animalHobbyWearing My name is Ann.I am twelve.I was born in the y

6、ear of the monkey.I like playing football.Because it is fun.I like to wear sportswear.MyselfNameAge/animalHobbyWearing My name is Ann.I am twelve.I was born in the year of the monkey.I am as smart as a monkey.I like playing football best.I can play with my friends.It is interesting.So I often wear s

7、portswear.I like myself.MyselfNameAgeHobbyWearing My name is Ann.I am twelve.I was born in the year of the monkey.So I am as smart as a monkey.I like playingfootball best.I can play with my friends.We had a game and our team won.I like to wear sportswear.Because I often practice playing football wit

8、h my friends at school.I want to be a football player in the future.1.1.确立时态确立时态2.2.确立句型框架确立句型框架写一篇介绍好朋友的短文，将短文写在写一篇介绍好朋友的短文，将短文写在答题纸上。答题纸上。friendNameAge/animalHobbyWearing Mike is my best friend.He is twelve.He was born in the year of the monkey.He likes reading books.We often read books together.H

9、e often wears a hoody.We are good friends.friendNameAge/animalHobbyWearing Mike is my best friend.He is twelve.He was born in the year of the monkey.So he is as smart as a monkey.We have the same hobby.We both like reading.We often read books together.He often wears a hoody.Because it is cool.We are

10、 good friends.Mike is my best friend.He is twelve.He was born in the year of the monkey.So he is as smart as a monkey.We are close friends,because we have the same hobby.We both like reading.We often read stories together.We like novels.Sometimes,we write stories,too.He wants to be a writer in the f

11、uture.1.1.确立时态确立时态2.2.确立句型框架确立句型框架写一篇旅行计划的短文，将短文写在答写一篇旅行计划的短文，将短文写在答题纸上。题纸上。My tripWhat?Where?How?I will go to London.I will go there by air.I will see the London Eye.I will have a lot of fun.My tripWhat?Where?How?I will go to London.I will go there by air,because its fast and comfortable.I will see

12、 the London Eye.I will take photos there.I will have a lot of fun.My tripWhat?Where?How?I will go to London.I will go there by air,because its fast and comfortable.I will see the London Eye.I will take photos there.London is famous for tea and coffee.I will drink some tea and coffee.I will have a lo

13、t of fun.I will come back on time,because I need to go to school.1.1.确立时态确立时态2.2.确立句型框架确立句型框架写一篇自己不好经历的短文，将短文写写一篇自己不好经历的短文，将短文写在答题纸上。（要求：至少在答题纸上。（要求：至少4 4句话）句话）My bad dayWhat?Where?How?I hurt my leg.I went to the hospital.I took an X-ray.I was sad.My bad dayWhat?Where?How?I had a football match.But

14、I hurt my leg.I went to the hospital and I took an X-ray.I was sad.I couldnt go to school tomorrow.My bad dayWhat?Where?How?I had a football match.But I fell down and hurt my leg.I was sad.I went to the hospital and I took an X-ray.I wish I will be better soon.My bad dayWhat?Where?How?1.1.确立时态确立时态2.

15、2.确立句型框架确立句型框架写一篇介绍自己和好朋友的短文，将短写一篇介绍自己和好朋友的短文，将短文写在答题纸上。文写在答题纸上。My friend and INameAge/animalHobbyWearing Mike and I are best friends.I am eleven and he is twelve.I was born in the year of the pig and he was born in the year of the dog.We have the same hobby.We both like sports.But I like playing ba

16、sketball and he likes playing football.We often wear sportswear.I am tall and I want to be a basketball player.But Mike wants to be a football coach.I hope our dreams will come true.1.1.确立时态确立时态2.2.确立句型框架确立句型框架写一篇你最喜欢的老师的短文，将短文写一篇你最喜欢的老师的短文，将短文写在答题纸上。写在答题纸上。My favourite teacherNameAge/animalHobbyWea

17、ring My favourite teacher is Miss Zhao.She is my English teacher.She was born in the year of the rabbit.She is as friendly as a rabbit.She likes reading.She often wears jeans.My favourite teacherNameAge/animalHobbyWearing My favourite teacher is Miss Zhao.She is my English teacher.So I am good at En

18、glish.She was born in the year of the rabbit.She is as friendly as a rabbit.She has long hair and big eyes.She likes reading.She often wears jeans.I want to be a teacher like her.My favourite teacher is Miss Zhao.She is my English teacher.I study English hard and I am good at English.She was born in the year of the rabbit.She is kind to us.She is as friendly as a rabbit.She has long hair and big eyes.She likes reading.She often wears jeans.I want to be a teacher like her.