2023届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写话题分类及分析讲义.docx

1、2023届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写话题分类及分析讲义第一篇 主题：善意传递The Freshest Bakery was in a small town called Balminster. It made bread for supermarkets in a nearby city. The bakery had been there for a long time and most of the machines were old. The factory engineer, Frank, was good at maintaining (维修) the machines and mo

2、st of the time there were no problems.One Tuesday, Frank was finishing work. The manager came out of his office.“You have a day off tomorrow,” he said to Frank.“Yes!” smiled Frank. “My son is graduating from university! Tomorrow I will go to the graduation ceremony!” He planned to leave at 6 am and

3、had enough time to drive there.At 4:30 am the next morning, Frank got a phone call from the factory, asking him to repair the broken oven at once.Oh no! thought Frank. He hoped he could fix it quickly. He took his suit to the factory, so he could drive from there to the university.When he arrived at

4、 the factory, all the workers and the manager were waiting for him. “Thank you, Frank,” said the manager. “I know this is a big day for you, but we must bake the bread.”Frank went to look at the big bread oven. Then he went back to the manager. “I can fix it, but it will take a long time. I will be

5、too late for the graduation ceremony.”The manager felt very bad. But Frank knew they had to make bread and get it to the supermarkets today, or the supermarkets would turn to a newer bakery. All the workers would lose their jobs.Frank worked hard to fix the bread oven. At 7:00 am he finished, and th

6、e loaves of bread started rolling into the oven to be baked.“We will be on time for our supermarket deliveries!” The manager was very happy. “You can go now,” he said to Frank. “Enjoy your sons graduation.”“Its too late,” said Frank sadly. “I cannot drive there in time.”Paragraph 1:Usually the worke

7、rs talked a lot and laughed, but today, everyone was very quiet. Paragraph 2:“Fly to the university?” the manager remembered his old friend, a helicopter company manager. 参考短文Usually the workers talked a lot and laughed, but today, everyone was very quiet. Feeling sorry that Frank was going to fail

8、to meet his son on this special day because of the maintenance(维修), they remained silent and racked their brains(绞尽脑汁) to help. They were so grateful for what Frank had done for them that they concentrated more attentively(专注地) on their work than usual in order to make more delicious bread, for whic

9、h the factory would win a better reputation and thus make a healthier profit. Meanwhile, though eager to be with his son, Frank attempted to keep calm as if it had been a common day to relieve his co-workers. The manager could really feel how Frank felt. He kept wondering what he could do for him. S

10、uddenly, an idea occurred to him.“Fly to the university?” the manager remembered his old friend, a helicopter company manager. Jumping with joy, he got in touch with his friend right away and succeeded in renting a helicopter, with which he could make Franks day. The workers were all relieved to see

11、 this surprise. With all the wishes from his co-workers, Frank managed to arrive at the university in time and spent great time with his son on this big day. After hearing what happened, “Dad, you really taught me a significant lesson that Ill never forget today. You did right. You are my hero. Ill

12、always try to do something meaningful for others whenever I can.” the son said with pride.It is some acts of kindness that make the world a better place.(强调句接尾)本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了修理师因为帮助修理面包机器而差点错过儿子重要的毕业典礼，最终在面包厂经理的帮助下通过直升机的方式赶上了重要的日子的动人故事，告诉人们帮助别人就是在帮助自己，善意总会得到回应。1.段落续写：由续写段落第一段首句内容“通常工人们谈笑风生，但是今天每个人都很

13、安静。”可知，第一段可描写工友们和经理的所想所做，以及Frank本人的心理活动。由续写段落第二段首句内容“飞到学校去？经理想起了他的老朋友，一个直升机公司经理”可知，第二段可描写经理通过直升机帮助Frank实现愿望，儿子对父亲的评价，最后升华主题。2.续写线索：工友们所想所做Frank的想法经理想办法借到直升机成功到达学校儿子了解经过升华主题3.词汇链接： 专注：concentrate on/focus on/be absorbed in 与取得联系：get in touch with/contact 成功：succeed/manage to/make it使某人一天开心：make ones

14、day/make sb happy all day/to delight/to amuse感激的：grateful/thankful/with gratitude 如释重负的：relieved/taking a load off sbs mind渴望的：be eager/desperate/dying/longing 自豪的：with pride/ proudly表示抱歉：feel sorry that/for绞尽脑汁：rack ones brains4.开头及结尾： Feeling sorry that Frank was going to fail to meet his son on t

15、his special day because of the maintenance(维修), they remained silent and racked their brains to help. Guilty for Franks failing to meet his son on this special day because of the maintenance, they remained silent.Not knowing what to do, they remained silent.Jumping with joy . His eyes shine with exc

16、itement.It is some acts of kindness that make the world a better place.第二篇：助人篇High school graduation marks a huge turning point in a young persons life. Its a transition(转变) from childhood to adulthood, and youll remember that moment forever.Daverius Peters, a senior at Hahnville High School in Bout

17、te, Louisiana, had been looking forward to this special day for a while. However, when he arrived at the graduation ceremony, a school representative blocked him from entering the ceremonys venue because his black sneakers violated the dress code(着装标准).The schools graduation dress code states that m

18、ale students must wear dark dress shoes to the ceremony and no athletic shoes were allowed.When the school representative denied him entry, Peters went into shock. He also felt sad, imagining what his parents would think if he couldnt attend his own graduation. He just wanted to walk across the stag

19、e and get the diploma hed worked so hard for.With only minutes until the ceremony was set to begin, he felt hopeless. He neither took the phone with him nor had enough time to stop at a store to buy new shoes. As he paced anxiously outside the convention center, he spotted a glimmer of hope. Hed not

20、iced a familiar face, John Butler.Butler helps mentor (指导) students at the high school, and many students look up to him. Butler always did what he could to help the students. Hes just “that type of person.” When a students having a bad day, Butler calls them out of class to personally talk with the

21、m. He had a daughter graduating with Peters, so he was attending the graduation ceremony as a parent that day. Peters ran over to Butler and explained his shoe problem.Paragraph 1.Without a second thought, Butler took off his own shoes.Paragraph 2.When Peters slid across the stage, his family notice

22、d his new, ill-fitting shoes.参考短文：Without a second thought, Butler took off his own shoes. Determinedly, he said to Daverius Peters, “If we exchange shoes, you can participate normally. Hurry up.” Peters said “But my shoes are much smaller than yours. What do you do?” “Dont worry, I have my own way.

23、” Although Peters hesitated, he chose to exchange shoes for this adult ceremony. At this time, he finally felt a little secure in his heart and could no longer worry about being unable to attend the ceremonyWhen Peters slid across the stage, his family noticed his new, ill-fitting shoes. Enlightened

24、 开导启发启蒙 by the scene, his family suddenly realized that they forgot to remind the child to change shoes before going out today, but a question came to their minds, “so whose shoes are these now?” The ceremony was carried out in joy and ended in reluctance. When Peters came to his family and was aske

25、d about the origin of the shoes, Peters told the whole story. Finally, the family couldnt help but thank the teacher more. Had it not been the teachers timely help, Peter wouldnt have attended the graduation ceremony in time. What a memorable day!(虚拟语气+感叹句结尾)本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Daverius Peters在学校为高三学生举行的成

26、人礼上因为没有按规定穿黑色礼服鞋而被学校代表阻止参加仪式。Daverius Peters没有办法，准备离开。正当他一筹莫展时，他遇到了乐于助人的老师John Butler，于是他过去向他解释事情的原委，希望他能帮助自己。1.段落续写：根据第一段首句“Butler毫不犹豫地脱下了自己的鞋子”，下文可描写互换鞋子时发生的事情。根据第二段首句“当 Peters走过舞台时，他的家人注意到了他那双不合脚的新鞋”可知，下文可描写家人的疑惑，以及询问鞋的来源。2.续写线索：Butler脱下鞋子Peters担心自己鞋太小Butler穿不上Butler让Peters别担心Peters可以参加仪式家人注意到Pet

27、ers的鞋家人疑惑Peters解惑家人感激Butler3.词类链接：参加：attend/participate in/take part in/join in担心：worry about/be concerned about/be anxious about/be worried about意识到：realize/recognize 情不自禁做某事：couldnt help but do/couldnt help doing迟疑：hesitate/be reluctant毫不犹豫：without hesitation/without thinking twice4.开头及结尾： Determi

28、nedly/Looking at Daverius Peters smilingly, he said,.Enlightened 开导启发启蒙 by the scene, . Suddenly realizing that they forgot to remind the child to change shoes before going out today, they wanted to know whose shoes he wore.Had it not been the teachers timely help, Peter wouldnt have attended the gr

29、aduation ceremony in time. What a memorable day!第三篇 友情篇When I first met Molly, she instantly became my best friend. We enjoyed the same things, laughed at the same jokes and even had the same love for sunflowers.It seemed like we had found each other at the right time. And our friendship grew very s

30、trong. In fifth grade, we were not in the same class, but at lunch we both sat in nearby seats and turned around to talk to each other. However, our big mouths got us into trouble, and we were warned that we would never be in the same classes again if we kept this up.That summer, Molly and I went sw

31、imming, and played outside. We bought best-friend charms (小装饰品) and made sure to wear them as often as possible.Summer went by very quickly, and middle school began. As the teachers had warned us, we were not in the same classes. But we still talked on the phone. Nothing could destroy this friendshi

32、p.Seventh grade started and, again, we were not in the same classes. It seemed as if we were being put to a test. We both made new friends. Molly started to hang out with a new group of people and was growing very popular.We spent less time together, and we rarely talked on the phone. At school, I w

33、ould try to talk to her, but she would just ignore me. When we did take a minute to talk, one of her more popular friends would come up and Molly would just walk away with her, leaving me in the dust. It hurt.I was so confused. Im sure she didnt know at the time how badly I felt, but how could I tal

34、k to her if she wouldnt listen? I began to hang around with my new friends, but it just wasnt the same. I met Erin, who was also a friend of Mollys. She was in the same situation I was with Molly. She and Molly had been close friends, and lately Molly had been treating Erin the same way as me. We de

35、cided to talk to her.Paragraph 1.The phone call was not easy.Paragraph 2.We must have talked for a long time, because once we were finished, I had used a handful of tissues for my tears.参考短文：The phone call was not easy. Afraid that I would hurt her feelings and make her angry, I was hesitant. Howeve

36、r, when we talked on the phone, we were friends again. I explained how I was feeling, and she did, too. I realized I was not the only one hurting. She was alone without me to talk to. What was she supposed to do, not make new friends? I didnt think about this before, but she was feeling left out by

37、me and my new friends. There were times when I didnt even notice I was ignoring her.We must have talked for a long time, because once we were finished, I had used a handful of tissues for my tears. Feeling a ton lighter, we both decided that we wanted to make new friends, but we would never forget o

38、ur friendship. Later, Molly and I were finally in the same class, and you know what? We still got in trouble for talking too loudly. Molly was not my best friend anymore, but more like my sister. We still enjoyed the same things, laughed at the same jokes and shared the same love for sunflowers. She

39、 taught me that things change, people change, and it doesnt mean you forget the past. It simply means that you move on, and treasure all the memories. Such a long journey life is and it is sincere friendship that gives our energy to move forward.(倒装+强调句)本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和莫莉从小学最好的朋友关系到初中都交到了新朋友。莫莉开始和一

40、群新的人混在一起，越来越受欢迎。作者和莫莉在一起的时间更少，也很少在电话上交谈。她在学校总是不理作者。后来作者遇到了被莫莉以同样方式对待的朋友艾琳，她们决定和莫莉谈谈。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“电话打得不容易。”可知，第一段可描写作者给莫莉打电话沟通感受，与莫莉一起敞开心扉交谈的经过。由第二段首句内容“我们一定聊了很长时间，因为聊完之后，我用了一把纸巾擦眼泪。”可知，第二段可描写作者和莫莉在今后生活中的友谊变化和感悟。2.续写线索：打电话沟通了解保持友谊成长感悟3.词汇链接：谈话：talk/chat/ have a conversation 担心：worried/concerned/af

41、raid注意到：notice/pay attention to/take notice of继续：continue /go on /move on如释重负：a ton lighter/ a sense of relief/take a load off sb感觉被遗忘：feel left out/feel ignored /feel unobserved 4. 开头及结尾： Afraid/Worried that/Mixed with the emotion of concern and hope. Feeling a ton lighter/Feeling a sense of relief

42、/Feeling relieved. Such a long journey life is!It is sincere friendship that gives our energy to move forward.第四篇 主题：亲情篇My husband has been out of town for work this past week. When he travels, he typically is only gone for a day or two, but this time it was a few days longer. He was set to come hom

43、e last night, but as he boarded the plane his fight was announced canceled and he had to return to the hotel to wait for the next fight. He learned very quickly the city was struggling due to high crime rate. He was not able to get a Uber or taxi at 4:30 a.m. to get to the airport for his flight due

44、 to workers being fearful of their lives. When I told my kids dad was not going to be home that night, they were both upset.My husband was the head coach of my 5-year olds baseball team. They had a game the next morning and my husband was trying so badly to make it home in time. The thought of possi

45、bly missing our sons game really made him mad. He wanted to be there because this was their thing and he didnt want to let him or the other boys down.A young man by the name of Asher, who worked at the hotel my husband stayed at, overheard my husbands dilemma. He realized he was not able to get tran

46、sportation to the airport. This young man offered to wake up and get my husband to the airport at 4:30 a.m. My husband was in shock -a complete stranger would offer to do such a big act of kindness. When he called me to tell me the possible ride, he was so hopeful. This young man honored his word an

47、d brought my husband to the airport safely.I didnt want to get my sons hopes up, so I told him, “Dad is trying to get home for your game but I am not sure whether he will make it.” That morning, on the way to the baseball field, both my kids looked up in the sky the entire ride to the field and poin

48、ted at planes in the sky saying, “Maybe thats dads plane.”Paragraph 1.As we reached the baseball field, we were a few minutes late.Paragraph 2I saw a familiar figure and my son walked towards me.参考范文As we reached the baseball field, we were a few minutes late. Crowded with parents who came to watch their childrens game, the field was filled with noises. Some were encouraging their children and some were telling them strategies to win. My two children hung their heads垂头 and walked reluctantly to the field. At this time, I also fel