全国卷江苏新题型读后续写公开课课件.ppt

1、Continuation WritingContinuation Writing 读后续写二读后续写二1.to review,learn and apply the writing skills;2.to appreciate good writings and avoid some common mistakes;3.to rewrite the composition.本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档第五档(21-25)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理衔接合理。内内容丰富，容丰富，应用了应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键个以上短文中

2、标出的关键词语。词语。所所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能可能有些有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短续写短文结构紧凑文结构紧凑。评分原则:提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）ReadWriteRead for key elements Read for main plot Read for writing style WritingRead for what?How to write

3、 it?what we have read 5(10)_ words beginning sentences of the two paragraphsclueBased on:Plot DevelopmentPara 1-2:My dad took me to a special vacation on a farm in the _ West.Para 3:I experienced a lot of interesting things but what I most wanted to do was to take a _ ride.Para 4:Para 4:Although Unc

4、le Paul was a bit _,I was so happy to take a horse ride with my dad towards the mountains.WildhorseworriedContinue and complete the storyBeginningDevelopment My dad took me to a special vacation on a farm in the wild west.?I experienced a lot but what I most wanted to do was to take a horse ride.Alt

5、hough Uncle Paul was a little worried,I was so happy to take a horse ride with my dad towards the mountains.Turning?EndingKinds Underlined key words and phrasesCharacterActionPlaceConcrete ThingsAbstractdad/Uncle Paul farm house/river feed/get lost sheep/track late/sight P 2:We had no idea where we

6、were and it was getting dark.P1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Beginning sentences:Look back on tips on continuation writing in the story of Mac,Paul and the wolf 1.Positive thinking2.To describe the characters actions in detail to express their thoughts and feelings3.To be

7、 logical and reasonable4.To use some conjunctions and non-predicate verbs to make the text coherent.(copy the language）5.To make use of the given information to echo the previous part.(呼应前文）呼应前文）Tips on continuation writingWriting tip 1:In the concluding paragraph,youd better communicate thoughts an

8、d attitudes to readers by creating a positive ending.positiveQ:What kind of persons are Father and Uncle Paul?Father:Brave,courageous,optimistic,wittyUncle Paul:experienced,helpful,considerate,diligent,hospitable(好客的).Writing purpose:1.To praise the spirit of being courageous 1.To praise the spirit

9、of being courageous and optimistic to think ways out even in and optimistic to think ways out even in difficult situationsdifficult situations2.When others are in need,we should never 2.When others are in need,we should never hesitate to give a hand.hesitate to give a hand.Tips on continuation writi

10、ngWriting tip 2:To make a vivid story,you may as well describe the characters to express characters thoughts feelings in detail instead of telling the readers .actionsdirectly Fill in the blanks with proper words:So,my dad and I _ our new cowboy hats,_ our horses,and headed slowly towards the mounta

11、ins.Dont be late for supper,Uncle Paul _,and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!OK!my dad _.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.-detailed description of _put on got on criedcried backthe action/motion Think and share:What would the author do when suddenly a little

12、rabbit jumped out?stopfollow catchprotectcontrolfall offThink and share:What would the horse do?frightenrun(wildly)disappear Think and share:What would Dad do?protectfollowcomfortinstructcalm downThink and share:What would Uncle do?rescuehelp/aidshouthugprepare a dinnerUncle Paul Tips on continuatio

13、n writingWriting tip 3:Creative plotting requires a careful analysis of the close link between the given information.Being creative doesnt mean you can write whatever you like.Continuation writing should be designed in a and way.logical reasonableLogical and reasonable Fly your imagination but keep

14、to the track of the story!not a fairy talenot a fiction no GPSa narrative(叙事)storyDevelop the plot based on the contextWhats in the previous story,especially the last plot?Whats in the two given first sentences?Although Uncle Paul was a little worried,my dad and I took a horse ride towards the mount

15、ains.Para1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Para2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.We got lost because of the rabbit.It was so peaceful and quietand the colors of the brownrocks,the deep green pinetrees,and the late afternoonsun mixed to create a_ scene.It

16、 looked like a_woven blanketspread out upon the groundjust for us.magicbeautifulTips on continuation writing 4：copy the languageTips on continuation writingWriting tip 4:Use scenery description to imply ones _.scenery description with metaphor（暗喻）（暗喻）creates a strong and vivid picture in readers min

17、d.feelingsEgEg：The home Made BallThe home Made BallThe two friends kicked and ran until the sun turned the sky pale orange.Tips on continuation writingWriting tip 5:Make use of the given information to echo the previous part.(呼应前文）呼应前文）In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride

18、,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”m

19、y dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground

20、just for us.People come into your life for a reason.When someone comes into your life for a reason,they may come to assist you through a difficulty,to provide you with guidance and support.They are there for the reason you need them to be.Tips on continuation writing.1.Positive thinking2.To describe

21、 the characters actions in detail to express their thoughts and feelings3.To be logical and reasonable4.To use some conjunctions and non-predicate verbs to make the text coherent.(copy the language）5.To make use of the given information to echo the previous part.(呼应前文）呼应前文）6.Use scenery description

22、to imply ones feelingsParagraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.1.Then what happened?2.What caused us to get lost?3.What were our emotions?4.How to describe our emotions directly or indirectly?1)words(dialogu

23、es)and actions(see,hear,do);2)descriptions of the environment;3)use adj.and adv.What was it like in the dark?What could we see,hear and do?How could we find the way back?What were our emotions then?How to describe our emotions?How did I feel about the whole experience?Which five words will be used?R

24、ewrite the storyProblem 1:Wrong tenseProblem 2:Wrong genre（体裁）（体裁）Problem 3:Grammar mistakesProblem 4:Ignoring given informationProblem 4:Ignoring given informationProblem 5:Not logical nor reasonable Problem 5:Not logical nor reasonable Problem 6:Awful writingProblem 6:Awful writingGood writing 1:G

25、ood writing 2:Good writing 3:Good writing 4:Good writing 5:Good writing 6:Appreciation Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.This unexpected appearance frightened my horse,which made it run wildly.I tried my best to control it,but in vain.Frightened as I was,I tried to keep my bal

26、ance to prevent myself from falling off.Fortunately,minutes later,the horse stopped before a river,out of breath,and so did I.As that moment,my dad also came up.Seeing I was OK,he was quite relieved.But it was clear that we got lost.1 We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We didnt know where

27、the farm house was.What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.But it was really difficult for us to see in the dark.Just as we were at the point of desperation,we heard a faint voice from the distance.“It must be Uncle Paul,”I said.We cried back with joy and relief.Finally,Uncle

28、 Paul safely brought us back home.What an amazing ride!Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to run after it.After a while,we were completely lost in the forest.There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.“We may not be able to

29、make it back to the farm house in time for supper.”I thought to myself.After a series of useless attempts to find a way out,we felt hungry and tired.2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.We got stuck in the forest.And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a wa

30、y home,for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain.I was almost breaking down when my father said,“Dont worry,my son.I remember there is a river near the farm house.Find the river and we will be back home.”Finally,we found the river and got back to the house along it.Needless to s

31、ay,we ate a late dinner.Tips on continuation writing.1.Positive thinking2.To describe the characters actions in detail to express their thoughts and feelings3.To be logical and reasonable4.To use some conjunctions and non-predicate verbs to make the text coherent.(copy the language）5.To make use of the given information to echo the previous part.(呼应前文）呼应前文）6.Use scenery description to imply ones feelings