读写类作文课件.ppt

1、评分标准 第五档第五档 很好很好(21-25(21-25分分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的a)覆盖所有内容要点。b)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。c)语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。d)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 第四档第四档 好好(16-20(16-20分分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的a)虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。b)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。c)语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。d)应用简单的语句

2、间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。Basic Steps 1)Review the topic(审)2)List the points(列)3)Make the sentences(写)4)Polish up the essay(润)5)Check the errors(查)Review the topic(审)体裁格式人称时态记叙文、议论文、说明文、应用文等三段式记人叙事：一般过去时议论、说明：一般现在时、现在完成时忌：人称属性或单复数前后不一致成败的关键成败的关键List the points(列)人物人物(who)事情事情(what)经过经过(how)时间时间(when)地点地点(where

3、)原因原因(why)结果结果(result)读写类书面表达读写类书面表达记叙文型记叙文型Practice人物人物(who)事情事情(what)经过经过(how)时间时间(when)地点地点(where)原因原因(why)结果结果(result)a boy and an old tree男孩向老树要东西 却又留下老树一人男孩老了，回来找老树倚靠很久以前 Once there was an apple tree which always satisfied a boys unreasonable requirements but the boy always left it alone.It wa

4、s only when he was old that he realized only the old tree could offer him comfort.SampleHow to polish up our essay(润润)1)Advanced words&phrases (高级词汇)2)Complicated structures (复杂句式)3)Proper linking words (恰当的连词)Advanced words&phrases1.多实少虚多实少虚:a good person2.短语优先：短语优先：They often help me.They were tir

5、ed.3.弃旧取新：弃旧取新：He has the ability to solve the problem.You will succeed if you work hard.They often do me a favor.They were worn/burnt out.generous,humorous,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,confident,consideratepossessesaddress/approachproviding/provided that1.Suddenly,I have a good idea.=All of a sudden,a

6、 good idea struck me.2.In order to protect our earth,we must lead a low-carbon life.=In a gesture to protect our earth,we must call on people to lead a low-carbon life.3.As a result,the plan was a failure.=Consequently,the plan turned out to be a failure.4.We should spend more time studying.=We are

7、supposed to devote more time to studying.5.Teenagers are busy finishing their homework.=Teenagers are occupied in finishing their assignment.Complicated structuresClauses(从句从句)Non-predicate verbs(非谓语非谓语)Emphatic sentences(强调句强调句)Subjective mood(虚拟语气虚拟语气)Inversion(倒装倒装)Clauses(从句从句)1)To his surprise,

8、people tend to ignore the traffic rules.=_ people tend to ignore the traffic rules.2)As students,we have learnt a lot and we should put them into practice.=As students,we should put _ into practice.3)He was delayed by the heavy traffic,so he was late for the party.=_ he was late for the party _ he w

9、as delayed by the heavy traffic.What surprises people is thatThe reason whyis that主语从句宾语从句定语&表语从句what we have learntNon-predicate verbs(非谓语非谓语)1)Throwing rubbish at random caused many problems,and they have raised much concern.=The problems _ have raised much concern.2)As students we should call for

10、 an end to pollution.=_ students,we should call for an end to pollution.3)As the problems were solved,the quality has been improved.=_,the quality has been improved.Beingcaused by throwing rubbish at randomThe problems solved后置定语状语独立主格Inversion(倒装倒装)1)Although we are tired,we are still happy.=_,we a

11、re still happy.2)The pollution was so serious that people dare not go out.=_ people dare not go out.3)When we realize the importance of the environment,we will try to protect it.=_.So serious was the pollution thatOnly when we realize the importantce of the environment will we try to protect it.Tire

12、d as we aren./adj./adv./v.+as/though+主谓So/Such that 位于句首，半倒Only+状语（从句）+半倒Emphatic sentence(强调句强调句)1)He didnt realize what had happened until he got the news from others.=2)When we realize the importance of the environment,we will try to protect it.=It was not until he got the news from others that h

13、e realized what had happened.It was only when we realize the importance of the environment that we will try to protect it.It is/was that Passive voice(被动语态被动语态)1)We should take immediate measures to solve the problem.=_.2)Our class held a heated discussion concerning the issue.=_.Immediate measures

14、should be taken to solve the problemA heated discussion was held concerning the issueSubjective mood(虚拟语气虚拟语气)1)With their assistance,I managed to overcome the difficulty.=But for their assistance,I would not have managed to overcome the difficulty.Had it not been for their assistance,I would not ha

15、ve managed to overcome the difficulty.Double negative(双重否定双重否定)1)The Internet makes us know the information quickly.=The Internet _ make us know the information quickly.2)Almost everyone was excited at the news.=There was _ a person who _ excited at the news.never fails tohardlywas not1 1）肯定不如双否好）肯定

16、不如双否好2 2）陈述不如倒装妙）陈述不如倒装妙3 3）主动不如被动巧）主动不如被动巧4 4）分词从句不能少）分词从句不能少Tips(小窍门小窍门)逻辑角度逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序时间顺序 first,second,then,finally,at last,soon,immediately,suddenly对称顺序对称顺序for one thing,for the other thing,on one hand,on the other hand转折顺序转折顺序but,yet,however,while,though,otherwise，in reality,inste

17、ad,nevertheless,after all.因果顺序因果顺序because,since,as,for,thanks to,as a result,owing to,due to条件顺序条件顺序as long as,on condition that,if,unless，only if让步顺序让步顺序though,as,even if/though,whether,wh-(what,when,where,how)+ever.递进顺序递进顺序and,whats more,besides,in addition,furthermore,moreover,to make the matter

18、worse,whats worse过渡性插入语过渡性插入语I think,in my opinion,Im afraid,you know,As we all know,As is well known,in a word,to sum upProper linking words 我对小男孩的自私/贪婪感到不耻。独立是一个人必需的品质。如果我是男孩的话，就不会做出那么无理的要求，也不会留下老树独自一人，伤它的心。这则故事深深地激励了我。我们的父母也正是像老树一样无私地奉献着。然而，遗憾的是，身为子女的我们既没有意识到父母的伟大，也没有向他们表达我们的感激。I felt ashamed of

19、the boys selfishness/greed.It is an essential ability that a person should live an independent life and make a living on his own.Had I been the boy,I would not have made the unreasonable requirements,nor would I have hurt the trees heart by leaving it alone and sad.After reading the fable(寓言),I am greatly inspired.Our parents are somewhat like the tree who dedicates(奉献)unselfishly,and we are the greedy boy.Nevertheless(然而),its a pity that we,sons or daughters,neither realize how great our parents are nor show our gratitude to them.Sample