状语从句在高考写作中的运用(公开课)(课堂课件.ppt

1、1If the dream is big enough,the facts dont count.如果梦想远大，就一定可以克服艰难险阻。如果梦想远大，就一定可以克服艰难险阻。2Dear John，Its a pity that I have to say sorry to you!It was not _ I read your letter that I knew you loved me so much and wanted to marry me,for we havent seen each other _ we parted._ we are all busy,I just have

2、 to drop a few lines to you.The fact that youre not good at English disappoints me,although you love me.To tell you the truth,I cant stand anyone who cannot speak English well.So _happens,Im glad to have met you,and in fact,_ time goes by,youll gradually forget me.Best wishes Alice untilsinceNow tha

3、twhateverasa dear John letterAdverbial Clause（绝交信）（绝交信）3I will never marry you.高考:Never will I marry you.四级四级:You are the last man I am willing to marry.六级六级:Under no circumstances will I marry you.GRE:If you were the last man in the world,I would definitely remain single.4写作技能提升：句子润色写作技能提升：句子润色How

4、to beautify the Adverbial Clause in WritingWhile writing,try to use different forms of verbs and clauses(从句从句)to make your essay simple,clear,vivid and full of varieties.52012广东高考基础写作广东高考基础写作你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】【写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓姓 名：名：Allan St

5、ewart国国 籍：澳大利亚籍：澳大利亚出生日期：出生日期：1915年年3月月7日日世界纪录：世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：第一个学位：1936年获得年获得第二个学位：医学博士第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学年获得硕士学位。位。第四个学位：第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。习时间，受到老师表扬。Because he was good

6、at arranging his study time,he got praise from his teacher 6学会使用复合句学会使用复合句现象现象学生作文中出现很多错别字学生作文中出现很多错别字原因原因 每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：参考词汇：错别字错别字:wrongly-written characters要求：要求：1.1.用用状语从句状语从句表达表格的表达表格的原因原因 2.2.语句间要有语句间要有连贯性连贯性 现象：现象：There are many wrongly-written characters in students co

7、mpositions.72.They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.1.1.每天有很多作业做每天有很多作业做 2.2.没有记住生字。没有记住生字。They have much homework to do every day.3.With so much homework to do,they fail to memorize the new characters.1.Because they have so much homework to do,they

8、 fail to memorize the new characters.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 They fail to memorize the new characters.第一步：拆分成几个简单句第一步：拆分成几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句82011年广东卷年广东卷 英语作文英语作文以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道基本信息：基本信息：书名：书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother作者：作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授出版时间：出版时间：20

9、10年年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：相关报道：中文版：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取耶鲁：耶鲁：Yale 哈佛：哈佛：Harvard写作内容写作内容根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1.图书的基本信息图书的基本信息2.图书的相关报道图书的相关

10、报道The majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.尽管作者尽管作者17岁的大女儿已被岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取，多数中国哈佛和耶鲁录取，多数中国妈妈还是不赞同她的做法。妈妈还是不赞同她的做法。9Highlights of Adverbial Clause while writing 1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换状语

11、从句与分词之间的灵活转换2.高考状语从句中的倒装高考状语从句中的倒装3.高考状语从句中的省略高考状语从句中的省略4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换状语从句与其他从句之间的转换5.Some proverbs:10When I think of the trip to Shanghai,Im impressed most with Mr.Rui.He is my oral English teacher.（2012广东广东高考读写任务高考读写任务)1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换请试试改写下面的句子吧！(改后改后)Thinking of the trip to Shang

12、hai,Im impressed most with Mr.Rui,my oral English teacher.111.After I realized the importance of learning,I studied even harder.Realizing the importance of learning,I studied even harder.122.状语从句与倒装状语从句与倒装inversion1）.I was addicted to online games.And I was even absent from school.I was _addicted to

13、 online games_ I was even absent from school.sothatSo addicted to online games was I that I was even absent from school.2）.She might try.She couldnt get the door open.Although she might try,she couldnt get the door open.Try as she might,she couldnt get the door open.13原因很复杂，以致于没有原因很复杂，以致于没有哪一种药物能治愈近

14、视。哪一种药物能治愈近视。He also pointed that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.141.Dont speak until you are spoken to.2.He was a swimmer when he was a child.3.She stood at the gate as if she was waiting for someone.4.Ill buy a TV set if it is necess

15、ary.5.Though it is cold,he wore a shirt.（）（）（）（）（）3.点击高考状语从句中的省略点击高考状语从句中的省略Ellipsis15 :什么时候可以省略什么时候可以省略?怎么省略怎么省略?在含有状语从句的复合句中在含有状语从句的复合句中若从句的主句是若从句的主句是it或与或与主句的主语相同，且在谓语中含有主句的主语相同，且在谓语中含有be时，常省略从时，常省略从句的主语和句的主语和be。1._ (在北京的时候在北京的时候),I paid a visit to the Summer Palace.2._(除非修理除非修理),the machine is o

16、f no use.3._(如果有必要的话如果有必要的话),you can help us to do something.4.A girl stood at the gate of the school as if _ _(跟老师讲话跟老师讲话).When/While in BeijingUnless repaired talking with a teacherIf necessary164.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换状语从句与其他从句之间的转换4.I wont believe what he says.（no matter what状语从句）状语从句）5.When he spoke,he

17、 felt more and more excited.(the morethe more)No matter what he says,I wont believe.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.171.有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。Where theres a will,theres a way.2.读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路A million miles is better than a million books3.入乡随俗入乡随俗.When in Rome do as the Romans do.4.万事开头难万事开

18、头难All things are difficult before they are easy.5.只要不灰心，就一定能成功只要不灰心，就一定能成功.As long as you dont lose heart,youll succeed.5.Useful proverbs:18Try to make your sentenceAfter class try to search for such beautiful and vivid sentences in your textbooks,OK?19 写作中状语从句的经典错误写作中状语从句的经典错误1.I didnt give up.Beca

19、use my mother often told me,where there is a will,there is a way.”2.She worked so hard that could catch up with others.3.Only we keep optimistic can we succeed.4.When he hesitating,a man came up to him.20 写作中状语从句的几个写作中状语从句的几个常见错误常见错误:1.I didnt give up.Because my mother often told me,where there is a

20、 will,there is a way.”2.She worked so hard that could catch up with others.3.Only we keep optimistic can we succeed.4.When he hesitating,a man came up to him.,becauseshe whenwas1.只有从句，没有主句只有从句，没有主句2.从句中缺少主语从句中缺少主语3.缺少从句的连接词缺少从句的连接词4.从句中的谓语不完整从句中的谓语不完整21summary：1.先阅读写作内容，将从句剥离出来，先阅读写作内容，将从句剥离出来，弄懂句子意

21、思弄懂句子意思.2.写作中用状语从句优化句子写作中用状语从句优化句子3.避免使用状语从句时出现的错误避免使用状语从句时出现的错误.4.研读范文中从句的使用研读范文中从句的使用5.适当使用含状从的名言警句适当使用含状从的名言警句6.Practice makes perfect!22以下是网上走红的以下是网上走红的“低碳哥低碳哥”的基本情况的基本情况时间：时间：2011年年人物介绍：人物介绍：“低碳哥低碳哥(Low-carbon Brother)”，用，用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人主要做法有：主要做法有：1.捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。2.不开灯看电视

22、，还把电视亮度调到不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到最低（最低（minimum）。）。3.上班骑自行车，不开车等。上班骑自行车，不开车等。【写作内容】根据以上【写作内容】根据以上“低碳哥低碳哥”的基本情况的基本情况，写，写一篇介绍，内容包括：一篇介绍，内容包括：1.“低碳哥低碳哥”的的简要介绍简要介绍及走红的及走红的时间；时间；2.他的主要他的主要做法做法及你的及你的看法看法。【写作要求】【写作要求】只能用只能用5个句子表达全部内容。个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇篇章结构连贯。章结构连贯。23Homework Translat

23、ion on the printed material.242012年高考基础写作评分说明：年高考基础写作评分说明：基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力；基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力；能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用使用5个个句子表达句子表达写作内容写作内容所提供的全部内容所提供的全部内容。命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够：命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够：正确使用正确使用动词不定式、分词短语、介词短语等动词不定式、分词短语、介词短语等来整合信息来整合信息。正

24、确使用正确使用复合句，比如：定语从句、宾语从句、复合句，比如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。状语从句等。25Possible version：A young man called Low-Carbon Brother became a hit on the Internet in 2011，who suggests living a low-carbon life with actions.He always picks up some waste paper on the street，using the blank side to write something and goes to

25、work by bike instead of driving.Besides,while he is watching TV,he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light.Some people think what he is doing is just a show because no one can live such a simple life with so many modern inventions around us，but as far as I am concerne

26、d,I strongly support his idea and his behavior.Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,he at least can enjoy a healthy life.2608年基础写作年基础写作背景：射击最初只是生存工具，背景：射击最初只是生存工具，1919世纪末才世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。发展成为一项体育运动。18961896：第一次成为奥运项目：第一次成为奥运项目19041904：中断：中断19281928：中断：中断19321932：重回奥运会：重回奥运会1

27、9681968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，现状：稳步发展，18961896奥运会只有三项射击奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有项目，现今有1717项。项。After shooting was canceled in 1904 and 1928,it returned to the Olympics in 1932.Although shooting develops steadily now,it only includes 3 events in 1896,while 17 recently.2707“谁是你的偶像谁是你的偶像”调查报告调查报告

28、根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；在男女生偶像中的排序差异；4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及你的偶像及理由理由。Basic writing because285 5你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及理由。As for myself,Liu Wei,an armless Pianist,is my idol be

29、cause he never gives up his dreams and always insists on what he enjoys.Liu Wei is one of the men for the 2011 Moved Honorary Men.29不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学会运用复合句学会运用复合句第一步：拆分成几个简单句第一步：拆分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。这会影响汉语学习。第二

30、步：分别翻译这几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.A little bit harder,have a try!30 Not everyone is good at learning English.Children from primary school start to learn Engl

31、ish and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time,this will affect their Chinese study方法方法1 1：because not everyone is good at learning English.31 Not everyone is good at learning

32、English.Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time.This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learnin

33、g English.方法方法232 Dear John，Its a pity that I have to say sorry to you!It is not until I read your letter that I know you love me so much and want to marry me,for we havent seen each other since we parted.Now that we are all busy,I just have to drop a few lines to you.The fact that youre not good at English disappoints me,although you love me.To tell you the truth,I cant stand anyone who cannot speak English well.So whatever happens,Im glad to have met you,and in fact,as time goes by,youll gradually forget me.Best wishes Alice（a dear John letter 绝交信）绝交信）